Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47 - Page 12

First of all thanks for the pm dear...
Well written with suspense...
Waiting for more twists

Waiting to find what have happened in SwaSan life

I dont like a bit when lakshya calles her shona😛
Its reserved for sanskar 😉

hey...lovely ud...and suspens abhi bhi bana hua hai...so i hope next part main clear hoga k sanskar ne kiya kya tha...wonderfull story...waiting for next part..do ud soon👏

Just completed reading last 3 parts

awsome update...cont soon

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Came across your Fic only today, and read all parts 1--9 at one go. 😊 Very interesting take, differing from the serial track, and I am very intrigued by what happened between Sanskaar & Swara in the past, why they have come to the brink of divorce, why she is so angry with him.

You've also maintained the suspense over Ragini's role in all this. Lakshya seems to be immature and impulsive, wanting more to separate Swara from Sanskaar, rather than really being there for her out of Love.

Looking forward to read more. Do PM me.

Cheers

Viji

Originally posted by: gayu6

Well written. Pls continue soon

yup...thnks dear😊

Originally posted by: princess_tara

superb

tq😊

loved how you portrayed her confusion and pain. interesting first meeting 😃 looking forward to next parts

Originally posted by: sarathy321

First of all thanks for the pm dear...
Well written with suspense...
Waiting for more twists

first of all no need to say tq 4 pms.
i'm happy dat i lyked it.
ill update soon..
tc