Perception : KaYa FF part 4 page 7 16/7

LaviDovey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

awsome part.
kabir soo wanted to be with someone but his paty is forbidding him.
now he is coming back to mumbai.
m soo excited.
thank u so much for pm.
update soon.

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

It was a nice update pritiii !!

As u had said before u wud be writing this entire story in 1st person ...I seriously wondered how wud it look like. Lol ..initially (*for me only...as im reading something of this sorts for the 1st time) when I started off it felt as if u were telling kabir that u are feeling this & you are feeling that ...but soon I got into the flow of things. By the time I had reached the end of the update ibwas caught up bad in ur words !!😃😳

Ab toh I'm surely gonna experiment writing in 1st person ...😛😉

Now the update ...

I liked the whole part but the chunk I loved most & which had me all awww was

Even if you denied her of any romantic relationship with you, funnily you wish if there was someone who could love you without being bothered about what people said about you.

Yes yaar ! Everybody wants that one person ... This poor guy tog didnt even have his parents !! Sigh .. That line did make me go awww but also made me feel sad for kabir 😭😭

All in all mast update as always 😉

DEVIL 😈 (*wagging her tail gracefully after being impressed by idonkno's update & threatening her to put up the next chappy soon, MIND IT !!! ...Muaaahhhahahaah !!*) 😆

Edited by mariee - 10 years ago

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_
Howdy partner, hmmm...have to read it again so as to understand the character. Kabir is still very mysterious..a character i am sure i will be in love with once u start unravelling him. So Kabir is showing the middle finger to all the tags and coming back with I-dont-give-a-damn attitude!! Trust a female to woo and scare a man away 😆 A diff approach...aage kya? Aur kab?

Well, Kabir ain't that difficult to understand! Its just his life had made him cynical! When people around you are never good to you and suddenly such incidence occurs you actually feel that they are trying to mock you or they have some other motives! He has stopped caring about each and everyone!

Aage KaYa..sooner or later 😉!

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
lovely update

Thanks Sugar! How was your exam?

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Constantin
Awesome story! Please pm me next time u update!😊

Sure Constantin 😃!

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: krazykaju
awsome part.
kabir soo wanted to be with someone but his paty is forbidding him.
now he is coming back to mumbai.
m soo excited.
thank u so much for pm.
update soon.

Heylos! Thank you my regular reader! I am happy that you are liking the story

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari
Nice update

Love and prayer
Yogini

Hey Yogini..Thanks 😃

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: mariee
It was a nice update pritiii !!
As u had said before u wud be writing this entire story in 1st person ...I seriously wondered how wud it look like. Lol ..initially (*for me only...as im reading something of this sorts for the 1st time) when I started off it felt as if u were telling kabir that u are feeling this & you are feeling that ...but soon I got into the flow of things. By the time I had reached the end of the update ibwas caught up bad in ur words !!😃😳
Ab toh I'm surely gonna experiment writing in 1st person ...😛😉

Now the update ...
I liked the whole part but the chunk I loved most & which had me all awww was

Even if you denied her of any romantic relationship with you, funnily you wish if there was someone who could love you without being bothered about what people said about you.

Yes yaar ! Everybody wants that one person ... This poor guy tog didnt even have his parents !! Sigh .. That line did make me go awww but also made me feel sad for kabir 😭😭

All in all mast update as always 😉

DEVIL 😈 (*wagging her tail gracefully after being impressed by idonkno's update & threatening her to put up the next chappy soon, MIND IT !!! ...Muaaahhhahahaah !!*) 😆

Don't we all are that way,..we all hate loneliness.. it's like a slow poison that eats up all our emotions slowly slowly and makes us so cynical..With time we realise that we will be lonely all our lives and we do accept it and move on but deep down we want it to end! We don't say it aloud to others and even to ourselves but we all know we hate being lonely!

Yes, we all want that one person whose presence in our life (either in person or not) never makes us feel alone and lonely! We know he/she is always there for us!

haha! Next one coming up soon as well!

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idonkno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: mariee
It was a nice update pritiii !!
As u had said before u wud be writing this entire story in 1st person ...I seriously wondered how wud it look like. Lol ..initially (*for me only...as im reading something of this sorts for the 1st time) when I started off it felt as if u were telling kabir that u are feeling this & you are feeling that ...but soon I got into the flow of things. By the time I had reached the end of the update ibwas caught up bad in ur words !!😃😳
Ab toh I'm surely gonna experiment writing in 1st person ...😛😉

Now the update ...
I liked the whole part but the chunk I loved most & which had me all awww was

Even if you denied her of any romantic relationship with you, funnily you wish if there was someone who could love you without being bothered about what people said about you.

Yes yaar ! Everybody wants that one person ... This poor guy tog didnt even have his parents !! Sigh .. That line did make me go awww but also made me feel sad for kabir 😭😭

All in all mast update as always 😉

DEVIL 😈 (*wagging her tail gracefully after being impressed by idonkno's update & threatening her to put up the next chappy soon, MIND IT !!! ...Muaaahhhahahaah !!*) 😆

Don't we all are that way,..we all hate loneliness.. it's like a slow poison that eats up all our emotions slowly slowly and makes us so cynical..With time we realise that we will be lonely all our lives and we do accept it and move on but deep down we want it to end! We don't say it aloud to others and even to ourselves but we all know we hate being lonely!

Yes, we all want that one person whose presence in our life (either in person or not) never makes us feel alone and lonely! We know he/she is always there for us!

haha! Next one coming up soon as well! Already working on it 😉