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Antara

@rachufan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Wonderful update dear they hate lady of north because she is from east wa.t to kill
her what will happen when raghavfind out the truth
that time no one save them
Every time eagerly or impatienly waiting for next dose
this story like a drug cant wait for dose

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mattieram

@mattieram

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Oh my poor Raghav! Loved the update!

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

RagNa seeing each other before going off to hunt was sweet
This Cara and Singrid will never learn. They both need to be hang for what they did to Kalpi
Raghav is in so much pain. His prayer to Gods was very emotional
Wonderful update

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

As they say servants will be servants...They are servants because they have no brains! Such people really deserved to be beheaded and now I know why Raghav wanted them to be dead!

Poor Raghav seeing his love fighting for her life must have left him broken!

Talking about kalpi is she never to gain her powers back? She keeps falling in trouble poor thing!

It was so emotional that my eyes were misty! Loved the way you have written it.

Thanks for such a lovely chapter.

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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Rise and shine ..my lady ...it's mid morning now...And your lord has to go for hunting

Go on tell him what your heart desires ...what shall he bring back for you ...so antelope it is ...

Before he departs ...he informs her about her new ride...oh yes a horse of course...

So sweet of his lordship ...to ask his lady if she feels alright ..after all it was her first time ...huh...

Well three times in a night ...hard core ..wrestle mania...is something ...I'd say ...

Oh lord in heaven ...what is wrong with these two ladies? ...don't they realise that they are playing with fire...? How can they betray lady kalpana ...? Didn't she save them.?.from getting beheaded ...

Such ungrateful ...souls they are ...deceivers !!...

Poor kalpana ...is thrown on the ground by her horse ...and is injured badly...😲

Lord Raghav ...returns ...from hunting ...and glances near the door ...for his lady ...told him that she will be the first to greet him ...on his return...and is disappointed not to see her there ...

Declan ...informs him...about the accident which occurred ..while he was away...

Lord Raghav ..is in agony ...and once he realises it's his lady ..who is injured ...roars and rushes to her chambers ...and the sight which meets his eye was ..not pleasant ...

Summoned all the stable hands he has...and the burning sap...Oh.No...not for his lady ...unbearable

Dismissing the healers ...he go down on his knees ...and prays to the gods for his lady love ...😭

For her fast recovery and her life ...cuz if something bad has to happen ...let it be me ...he says ..

Gosh!...what love does to one ...huh ...both pain and pleasure ...and no warnings ..sighs!!

What now??...

I am speechless ...Vidya ...stuck on you...girl...👏

Thank you..

Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago

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ayesha khan

@Fly2TheStars

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

awesome update

servants will always be servants

even after getting a warning frm raghav they tried to do such a thng

loved the way kalpi see off raghav

it was soo emotional

raghav dismissed the healer and then gone his kness only for his wife

hope kalpi get well soon

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Nandinisai

@Nandinisai

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Awesome update

Hope kalpi is safe

update next part soon

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IronThor

@IronThor

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: mariee
I am in love with u...like in absolute love !! 😳😳
How can a female write this welll ?? Gosh ya Asgard_Nim... I usually dislike stories which are extra fictional including vampires & all ...but this one has blown me away !! Its impeccable & so is this chapter.😃

Usually in a particular story I have my favorite chapters - This & Twisting Kaleidoscope might be the only 2 forum stories wherein my favorite list includes all the chapters !!😳

Ab main aur kya bolu ?? It wud be very weird if this tucchh bacchi goes complimenting u with terms like good job or very well written ... Sooo wud say just this "U r the best..." & I really mean it 👏👏

MARUSHKAA

Aww come on Mariee. Let's give our sex some credit. Females have been wonderful writers for centuries. Jane Austen is one of the most revered romance writers. Charlotte Bronte is credited among her. Harper Lee wrote To kill a Mockingbird. :D That is one of my favourite novels. And now there is JK Rowling. Harry Potter is an international sensation. Respectfully, I don't think a person's sex makes them a good writer or not. Rather I think it is the depth of their imaginations. 😊 I hope one day I can reach the standard of these brilliant women I just mentioned.

But until then, I am happy you are enjoying my writing as it is. ❤️

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darkloveriam

@darkloveriam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

awsome update vidyA

i start blusing wgen i start reading but

i never thought that this story take turn

in this way

hope both of them get a good pubishment by raghav

and most importantly kalpi get coinsiousness soon.

but i love this whole chappy

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#380

OMG it started with a happily leaving Raghav and fate ended him to a husband who is ready to shed tears for his beloved wife kalpi. I wonder what punishment he will sentence to those women's 😲 . What will happen to kalpi now? When will her hidden powers will emerge? Will it help her now?

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