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Nisha VS

@redpetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

My God, the update was terrifying. I was afraid of the Lord of the North for the first time." Now face her husband" What a pick up line👏. They deserved this punishment. I just came to see a hard, brave & strong warrior/ king in Raghav in this update. It shows his possessiveness too. The story is getting it's heat now. I wonder what the Lord of North will do to the King when he does whatever he is going to do with the lady of the North? I thought Kalpana is having some blessing but I never guessed it can be her self destruction. Anxious for the next update. Wonderful update.

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

🤗😲omg!!!! This is for both chapters. this story is getting better and better. those maids and stable hand are asking for their death wish wanting to kill Kalpi. when rags finds out wooo their will be hell to pay. so rags has come hone wth kalpi hurt and is finding out who did this. he finds out about kalpis power. now will rags take her to east to get it sealed and in process will prem find out and try to use kalpis powers for evil. but one thing for sure rags has proven his possessiveness and their are no limits for his love for kalpi. omg the punishment given was terrifying. brilliantly written and omg I loved TK but love this just as much.

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ayesha khan

@Fly2TheStars

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#393

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unres

awesome updatee

raghav sat beside her the whole night

kalpi was in soo much pain and

raghav could fell kalpi pain

sooo the seal is opened

kalpi power can harm her as well as other?

kalpi cnt control her powers??

what xactly are her powers *confused*

raghav got to knw abt her power and when is kalpi gonna get to knw?

the punishment was soo scary

but they deserve this after doing everythng

such and emotional update

and you describe it soo amazingly

p.s i am loving the story all over again😉

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#394

Marvellous update, how I enjoyed each and every bit of it. Enjoyed Raghav's care for Kalpi, his pain for her, the love reflecting in his brutal punishment. Good he gave them this punishment. So seal on Kalpana is broken, now what? How will it affect her? What a master turn of events. Awesome you are. 😃 👏 ⭐️

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Awesome update

Wow kalpi us in so much pain n raghav came t know the truth n the culprits dead that good

Update soon

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#396

beautiful update Vidu di.. Finally culprits r dead.. Raghav taught him good lesson... Now Raghav know abut Kalpi's secret.. Plz update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting..

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mattieram

@mattieram

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#397

Oh my god!!!!! I was there, mortified, but enjoying the pain of those three for hurting Kalpi. Raghav is the man!!!!!

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annies2

@annies2

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Yikes that's was brutal 🤢

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#399

What lmates Rags/Kalpi are! Raghav goes through the suffering and pain of Kalpana along with her ! What great love ! As such the brutal punishment of the stableman was apt ! We should have of such brutal punishment for all Rapists [in India esp. where they seem to go scot free !!!!!!!! ] Excuse me for being 'blood-thirsty' but that is what I will do if Iwas a judge !!!!!

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#400

If I really was a producer I would love to direct ur story as it's is described in such a each n every scenes u made easy to direct.U'll b the director writer n to b frank I wish u to b the like a writter of ur favourite wd name n fame

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