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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
wid her. "Syra? Dhyaan Se!" He cautioned her sister. She brought him into the courtyard. "Zain Rabab Khan, tum saari duniya se jhoot bol sakte ho par apni Behen se nhi." Syra spoke, firmly. "Syra tum kya keh rhi ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa raha!" Zain spoke. "Bano Mat Zain! Main jaanti hunn Sabkuch. Tum Adhira se Mohabbat karte ho na?" She questioned him. Zain felt as if air was knocked out of his lungs.. "Batao Mujhe? Kaho ki yeh jhoot hai..!!" Syra demanded. "Sy..Syra..Main.." He tried but seemed as if words got stuck in his mouth. "Batao Zain? Karte ho na tum Adhira se Mohabbat?" She asked him again. Zain was at loss wid words. "Tum sab kuch jhutla sakte ho Zain par Adhira ke liye apni Mohabbat nhi.. Woh Sacchi Mohabbat jo maine tumhari aankhon mein dekhi hai.." Syra softened down a bit. "Aur woh bhi aaj se nhi.. Shayad pichle 10 Saalon se! Haina Zain?" Syra asked, keeping a loving hand on his shoulder. Zain's Chocolate Brown Eyes had gotten glassy now.. His face broke into a soft smile..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
"Maine dekha hai tumhe usse dekhte huye. Maine dekha hai tumhe uski ek jhalak paane ke liye bechaain hote huye. Tum chaahkar bhi mujhse chupa nhi sakte." Syra added softly. "Haan Toh? Karta hunn main Mohabbat usse. Par Isse kya fark padta hai Syra? Woh alag kaum ki hai main alag! Hum chaah kar bhi saath nhi ho sakte." Zain spoke. "Toh usse kya fark padta hai Buddhu? Kaka-Kaki tumhe apne bete ki tarah chahte hain. Ek baar keh ke toh dekho unse" Syra insisted. "Chahte Zaroor hain Syra par itna nhi ki apni Iklauti beti ka haath mere haathon me de dein! Aur tum samajhti kyun nhi? Adhira Bengali Brahmin Hai. Kaka Kalibadi mein Purohit Hain! Aur Main Musalmaan hunn. Hum dono bilqul alag hain. Yeh kabhi nhi ho sakta!" Zain tried to explain her. "Aur waise bhi? Adhira? Jisse main mohabbat karta hunn woh mujhe chahti bhi nhi. Mujhse theek se baat bhi nhi karti." He added. "Iss Iktarfa Mohabbat ka kya Anjaam Hoga?" Precap- Adhira's Mangni.Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
yay me first..woohoo!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Awesome update di
loved it
the bonding of both families is so warm!😳
Zain is childish in his antics but equally mature n understanding😃😃
Adhira ke liye rishta aaya he.. unhone use pasand bhi kar liya.. hmm..Adhira ko to koi bhi pasand kar le😊
Zain kept looking at Adhira.. n was lost😆 so sweet! 😳 he is very good in hiding his feelings😃
Syra Zain ko bahot acche se samajhti he.. she knows about his feelings😃 n he too confessed it..
but he knows the outcomes of his confession.. 
that's good!
now it's at a very interesting point
precap is interesting
do continu soon
thanks for pm😊

Edited by Godly_Affection - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Loved it Shanu 
awesome update love you lots  🤗
Zain is really a sensible & mature character  
he understands his limitations & also all the circumstances  
So Adhira ke liye rishta aaya hai 
lets see how circumstances bind them together  
I just loved how Zain shows respect to everyone 
He actually thinks on all the aspects before taking any step towards Adhira  
good sayara ne choori pakad lee  😆
he cannot hide anything from her sister 
lets see what happens next 
thanks for the PM 
Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Awesome and lovely update.
Loved it a lot.
Both the families' had a great time over the lunch,talking about Adhira's rishta pakka karing.
Oh ho..
Zain miyaan dil har baithe Adhira keliye.
Zain is a mature man who thinks about everything related to both the families and every aspects.
He admits to Syra that he loves Adhira but the fact that they r both from two different religions always comes up.
Aww.. Feeling bad for Zain.
I feel ki kuch toh aisa hoga Adhira aur Abhijeet ke shaadi ke dauran...
Continue sooonish.
Precap is awesome.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Wow! That was so nice, how Zain was lost in Adhira's beauty!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Keep it up Shanaya...sorry for being late,
Loving the story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Thanx Chutki..!! 🤗 Glad you liked it! 😊 Zain might cum across as a Funloving Man but he is equally mature and Responsible! 😳 Adhira is a Beauty.. And Ofc He loves her since the last 10 Years! So Its bound to have an effect on him..😳 Stay Tuned. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Shanu
awesome update love you lots 🤗
Zain is really a sensible & mature character
he understands his limitations & also all the circumstances
So Adhira ke liye rishta aaya hai
lets see how circumstances bind them together
I just loved how Zain shows respect to everyone
He actually thinks on all the aspects before taking any step towards Adhira
good sayara ne choori pakad lee 😆
he cannot hide anything from her sister
lets see what happens next
thanks for the PM
Continue soon😊


Thanx Goldie! 🤗 Love You Lots too. Zain is a funloving yet Mature man who thinks abt all the possibilities..😊 You can never hide anything from ur sisters..😳 Stay Tuned. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: ...anika...

Awesome and lovely update.
Loved it a lot.
Both the families' had a great time over the lunch,talking about Adhira's rishta pakka karing.
Oh ho..
Zain miyaan dil har baithe Adhira keliye.
Zain is a mature man who thinks about everything related to both the families and every aspects.
He admits to Syra that he loves Adhira but the fact that they r both from two different religions always comes up.
Aww.. Feeling bad for Zain.
I feel ki kuch toh aisa hoga Adhira aur Abhijeet ke shaadi ke dauran...
Continue sooonish.
Precap is awesome.
Thanks for the pm.

Thanx. Stay Tuned..😊