LOVE K LIE KUCH BHI KREGA update-pg145, NO COMMENTS pls

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tulika

@nititaylorsfan

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Loving new bonds b/w soha dhruv nd aliya arya.
The song was awsm. Had played it .
Plz cont soon

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Rashhhhi_10

@Rashhhhi_10

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Wowww awesomeee update dear. ...👏

curious to knw wht will hppn nxt...😊

eagerly waiting to read nxt part...

Update soonn...

god blessd u...

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candy1990

@candy1990

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#703

Important note

Highly disappointed !!

I haven't ever shared something like this before but today it is high time.

These days forum has become a battle ground.. Some people are pissed off bcz of "spamming caused by ff Writers" .. Some r pissed off bcz of "Bashers".. So , I think we guys gotta help them.

Here, from "bashers" I strictly mean people who hate cast of ky2 and the show .. Me too totally against "bashers" but " spamming" like seriously..? This word wasn't appropriate I guess.. Anyway chuck it...! Plzzz its a request don't discuss this thing here.. (will discuss it in Pms ..lol)

Ok.. let me give u my intro that I should have given a long time back.. Anyways..

Hi m candy (pen name) a 25 years old girl.. Masters in physics.. Working ( yes I left my job a week ago and I got a new one today only.. Hehhe) Have cracked a few govt.exams too.. Waiting for final results ( or say appointment letter) still giving interviews every now and then just for my safe future.. AND I am writing this "STORY" even when m so BUSY and STRESSED..

Okay I never said I am writer.. I say that I am a " so called writer". I alwz use the word "STORY" instead of "ff". Bcz for me it is a STORY.. And ur "COMMENTS" have alwz been "FEEDBACKS" to me.. And my lovely readers r aware of all this..

"SPAMMING" like seriously??.. This word was like pocket bomb.. Hehhe.. no hard feelings.. it is just that this one word made me write this long post. Nobody is a VELA here.. Be it readers or writers.. Everyone has got a job to do.. or some work to do.. Some r students, some r working.. Some r home makers..

But Yes ! I do agree that it SHOULD BE ORGANIZED ..like there should be some SEPARATE THREAD for these stories in this forum only .. But again, this is not our fault.. This is DTs work not ours.. I agree there is a life beyond KY2 and trust me I am working hard to achieve my goals..

And about writing story(ff) on ky2.. well everyone should know if hobbies , choices , likes , dislikes r subjective or objective.

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After a deep thought process have jumped to a conclusion. If u guys r my buddies my lovely dovely readers then u r gonna understand my POV..

NO, M NOT QUITTING.. I can't.. I m too attached to "u guys" .. Yes u heard it right..!! I am not only attached to my "cutiee story" but to u too..

BUT I AM NOT GONNA SEND PMS TO EVERYONE.. Those who r reading my story , i'll be sending PMs to only those.. Bcz it total waste of time sending pm to so many people.. relax..!! I know who r reading..

NO SPAMMING.. No quotes from my side.. And no congratulations messages from u guys.. Plss .. I have quoted lovely feedbacks from you guys till date. . Bcz this is my first story.. But I knew that I shouldn't quote every feedback.. So dhere dhere I have LIMITED my quotes.. But tell me how to STOP quoting feedbacks.. Bcz from the past few chapters ur feedbacks r like bliss..hehe

But I have to behave a bit mature and understanding.. Okay so from now onwards I WON'T BE QUOTING A SINGLE FEEDBACK.. But remember I M READING UR FEEDBACKS whether I have liked those or not.. (my mobile glitches a lot.. Eee). Will reply u back as I alwz do via my "Prem patras" (pms)

And I remember each and every feedback and person who is giving feedback.. Just try me..! )

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NO SYMPATHIES, pls..!! I bcz I'm NOT HURT ..i m a LITTLE DISAPPOINTED.. Heheh..( Likhte likhte HIGHLY se LITTLE ho gai. lol). So I don't want sympathies.. Dena h toh SUPPORT do.. Yes! A few writers r so disappointed that they r asking their readers if they should stop writing.. So give my message to those writers " buddy why so serious.. keep writing bcz u readers r gonna support u..".plsss send this message to those..(I request u).

<p>NO BASHING .. PLS THIS ONE IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING... don't make any sympathy wala post or bashing wala post.. feedbacks do but story pe..

Support the STORY, the CREATION that u r reading.. That u love.. Bcz other "writers" and this "so called writer" ..we r writing just for two reasons.. One is YOU (readers) and one is US ( writers including me)..

LOVE

CANDY..

Pls like and let me know that u have understood my POV. And those who haven't given feedback on the chapter.. Marugi sbko pakad pakad k..

Edited --- oeyyy buddiesss pm kro.. No feedbacks on this.. I know u guys love me a lot.. No proof required.. Puchiii (muaaah)

Edited by candy1990 - 10 years ago

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pihu

@epshitatabassum

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#704

What. ...?

I don't understand anything

I've High fever

N my mood Off

plz candy pm me

bcz My dumbo brain don't get what u want to sAy

plz short cut understand me

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Absa hasna

@Hasi-Pani1

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#705

hey candy...dont feel sad...i knw ur disappointed...i really loved ur ff...plsss update soon dea...m waiting for ur next part...

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diya

@diyaNarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#706

Okay I

Understand

Ur pov

I guess

U r write

So I

Comment

on ur

Chapter

But I

Always

Talk to you

On prem patra...hehe...

Pm😛😛😛

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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#707

So candy.. first of all m very sorry got late this time too in reading and commenting...

this update showed new beginings new realizations of love..beautiful...

So starting with the first scene terrace.. 😆really like the way always cabir is pulling manik's leg..

only cabir has that guts to pull his leg and in return manik becomes so frustated because of his jokes and his stupidity or should i say pagalpanti in love..😉

Second scene so cute.. chachi is chachi kabhi nahi badlegi.. 😆 and was praising herself.. and our nandu to lost in her own world😳

So third scene uff aliya is in her hangover and mukti and cabir are guilty as they have spiked the drink but not for her.. but their plan backfired and a new beginning of a story.. aryaman and aliya😉

Fourth scene.. wah wah so aryaman talking to nandini and asking for her help in writing the last chapter.. so cute..😉 but manik is irritated as from night he is waiting to to talk to nandini and here nandini is first busy with aryaman and then navya came in between.. and hamara angry hulk.. wo rukne wala thodi na hai.. uff.. now nandini running behind him..angry hulk kabhi situation ko samjha karo...

Fifth scene.. bechara manik.. always bullied by his own mother..😭 neyonika always talking about give and take policy.. i really like the dialogue when manik said agar wo galtiyan karna band kar de to.. well neyonika dont laugh our rockstar can do anthing..😉

Sixth scene.. again manik you hurted your hand.. uff.. kitna hurt karoge... bechara pehle nandini se frustated tha and then neyonika and gussa nikla nandu par usse zyda apne hands par...

Sixth scene.. manik ignoring nandu and nandu knows that something is wrong.. clever nandu..and our own cabira never misses a chance to pull their leg leaving them shocked..cabira love you yar..and nandu being confused as earlier navya was showing hints about them and now cabir.. hahahah.. cabira good excuse to fool raghav😉😆 so dhruvi u naughty boy from earlier i knew there something between you and soha.. dhruvi is blushing aww..😳 and not only dhruvi but aliya too.. baby you are falling for aryaman..aww so cute.. a special thanks here candy and you made me love with soha and aryaman through your story.. 🤗 the song selection was awesome yar.. like totally fitting in the scenario.. their feelings all of them dhruv aliya manik and nandini were being shown through the wordings of the song... beautiful...😳

The last scene was so romantic and emotional..😳 like nandini hugged manik as she knew something is disturbing him.. he gave her the reason but she was not convineced.. at last he was trying to explain her but being so innocent and having a lovely family could understand him.. i feel pitty for manik as for him everything is give and take because of his beloved mother😡

but now cool down manik your shinning star nandu has come to your life and the way she found a solution to this problem in future too she will be with you hamesha..

special things in last part:

the hug was mind blowing..

then when nandini nodded her head when manik asked her that he will come after her evrytime.. this shows what right she is claiming on manik..

and lastly naughty manik with one track mind..😳

So here i comlete with my feedback..😊

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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#708

And congratulations candy for 100 pages..

and see what a coincidence..that my feedback on 100th page..😊

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#709

Why do even bother to reply this we know what is happening. Just because some new user comes after ages and put her some brainy comments and tell u it is full of ff y should u even bother. Are these ppl putting their time and effort regularly like u all do to this ky2 forum. Leave them and cont with your good work. Thanks for all the wonderful ff on manan.

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Vatsala

@Vatsala_Rajput

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#710

😆

U r amazing...ur updates are damn amazing 😛😃

WELL...my fav scenes were...

Manik stopped and turned. Cabir " and I came to tell to that JEALOUS GIRLS ARE DANGEROUS.. Play safe "
Manik being confused " JEALOUS!!" He thought for a moment and annoyingly said " Cabir .. It was ME who was JEALOUS not NANDINI.."

😆😆

Cabir " I am just a cupid.. Teri love story ka writer nhi.. Go behind her and get ur answers.. By the way.. She has gone !! .."
Manik freaked " damn.. " and rushed..
Cabir " CRAZY LOVE"

😃😆

Nandini in frustration " or else.. Or else ." She looked at her clutch and threw it on Manik.. The clutch was about to hit his face but Manik had caught the clutch in the nick of time saving himself from her MASTER SHOT.. This left his mouth open.. The half conscious people were now fully awake with their eyes wide opened.

🤣🤣🤣

She was caught.. She became nervous and took a vase from a nearby table.. Manik's eyes got widened seeing that.. Manik " no no.. Nandini.. Listen.. U can take those flowers from the vase but vase.. No. No. Nandini.. Trust me it's a bad idea.. "

Nandini " oh really.. Aaoge..? Aaoge mere peeche..?" while taking heavy breaths.

Manik " YES..!!"

Nandini again gritted her teeth and uplift the vase again just then Manik being horrified " I mean no. No.. Nobody on earth can dare... To... Okay..fine.. Go.. Jaha marzi jana h jao.. "

🤣🤣

Manik's eyes got widened and he said " okay fine..I'll .. I will go.." gesturing her to put the vase down. Manik took a few steps backward and Nandini placed the vase on the table.. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath just then Manik rushed to her.. And in no time he picked her up placing her stomach on his shoulder.
😃

Nandini was shocked .. She screamed" Manikkk.. Leave me.." and people started laughing at them.. Soon everyone was giggling, hooting, shouting and clapping.

Nandini was embarrassed. She uttered " put me down..".

Manik announced loudly " Is it the first time I am picking u up? No naaa. It's just that the way is different" leaving her annoyed.
A girl stood up, whistled and said " CRAZY GUY" . Everyone was laughing.. Nandini was embarrassed.. Manik was smiling..

😳😳😳

Manik tossed her on his shoulder ignoring her efforts and walked towards the next floor.. Everyone clapped and a girl shouted " CRAZY LOVERS..".. Manik and Nandini were stunned listening that.. Manik smiled and Nandini hide her face with her hand.

😃😃😛

AND THE KISS 😳

Manik stopped twirling her and pulled her .she banged to his chest.. She was smiling a little. So was Manik.. He touched her lips with his thumb.. Her smile grew a little wider.. Manik leaned closer.. Her lips were trembling.. So were his.. Their nose rubbed. Manik gulped his saliva and finally he placed his lips on her.. And they KISSED. The kiss was smooth and soft.. Manik cupped her face and she clenched his blazer with her trembling hands.. He deepen the KISS and she responded with equal favour with her quivering lips.

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