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I am addicted to this story and your writing style 😊
Like how you are developing the characters of Arnav and Khushi, with all the subtle nuances of relationship. Arnav is weighed by the guilt of how his family or he has wronged Khushi in the past. Friendship/relationship cannot last if it is marred by guilt.
My favorite line of this chapter- Khushi repeated comment to Arnav " now don't say sorry" ( He apologized even for Divyesh innocuous comment to her ! ). She recognizes his remorse, has forgiven him, and is providing a clean slate for this friendship. And it is effective... he jokingly actually offers her a job ( he would never do that before)
Khushi lacks confidence given her past... glad how you are bringing it full circle ... sports is her passion... sports coach in Alchemy ! Like Faisal Bhai... I hope she does something she likes/enjoys outside of chandini chowk
PS: Was good to read "tor dakknaam" after a long time
Like how you are developing the characters of Arnav and Khushi, with all the subtle nuances of relationship. Arnav is weighed by the guilt of how his family or he has wronged Khushi in the past. Friendship/relationship cannot last if it is marred by guilt.
My favorite line of this chapter- Khushi repeated comment to Arnav " now don't say sorry" ( He apologized even for Divyesh innocuous comment to her ! ). She recognizes his remorse, has forgiven him, and is providing a clean slate for this friendship. And it is effective... he jokingly actually offers her a job ( he would never do that before)
Khushi lacks confidence given her past... glad how you are bringing it full circle ... sports is her passion... sports coach in Alchemy ! Like Faisal Bhai... I hope she does something she likes/enjoys outside of chandini chowk
PS: Was good to read "tor dakknaam" after a long time
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