Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 104

So I only read one chapter, which was the last one you updatedbecause I have exams and I'm supposed to study, but, I loved what I read! I hope I get to come back to this soon and read the entire story. And I also hope that when I do that you're back with an update. Anyway, your writing style's one of the best I've seen here! So effortless, no matter what emotion you're trying to show, be it humour through the Dhanno jokes or Arnav's conversation with Anjali, or the slight unease during Mrs. Raizada's scene-- but at the same time it's all very vivid too. So it doesn't seem like a superficial account of what's happening. It's great! Also, Momos Point is THE BEST PLACE ON EARTH.