ArHi SS: Timeless Love | Note P22 14/5 - Page 3

Awsommmiiieee vry intrsting concpt...its so fun & i don't undrstnd wht is present Arnav's prblm, maybe they sud send Khushi away from him for while...i don't get it y can't he realize her value without first almost loosing her...letz c, nxt chp update karo sooon!!!

very capturing concept you have come up with!!!

Arnav tolerate Khushi in both the timelines... it seemed to me!

It would be interesting to see how their love stories forms!!!

Shobna and Lavanya... ya right! Is she the villain?

Yay it's good to see u writing again... What an interesting story it is!! I was a little lost in the beginning but Kusum right away reminded me of Khushi!!! Welcome back n thanks for the pm!

wow fantastic start

Nice concept. I'm already in love with the storyline. Can't wait!

Concept is very interesting..
Loved it

Wow interesting and new concept. Would love to read more... Do update soon

Really Nice ss 

Very interesting

Thanks for the pm