ArHi SS: Timeless Love | Note P22 14/5

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

I love reading about era love stories an d here you have entwined two to create a beautiful arshi story.

I loved reading it and how you knitted the events in past and present to tell this tale of arshi.

Loved it.

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sheen_jyoti

@sheen_jyoti

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Beautiful story. Had me in tears for the past timeline. I liked how you could recreate that era...the depth you created in your story with such a small storyline. Thank you for such a lovely read.

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Beautiful dear..both past and present are written with amazing sense..the past and the names were amazing..you brilliantly portrayed each one's character in the past as well as in present..loved it

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Zayneb

@Zayneb.S

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

just read the hole story in one go, it might not have been detailed and stuff but it certainly was beautifully told, I love their love-story in the past and the fact that arnav remembered it somehow and finally overcame his fear and embraced the second chance their love had been given :D

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Loved this story

U did justice to both past and present

When kusum dies in the past and the accident happens to arshi I really panicked that khushi died

But thank god she didn't

Both the parts were very well merged

Felt so bad seeing ratna and kusum die

But they were born again to finish what had started in the past

Nice ending arnav realizes he has to move on from his past life

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

What a mind blowing story.. two different time lines and the connection was superb.. felt bad for Ratna-Kusum but happy for ArShi that they met in this life and will live happily ever after.. loved the amazing story.. 😊