Amaranthine Hope Part 8 P.18 (Jun 5) - Page 6

Originally posted by: poetic

Hinal, thanks for the update first. A 🤗 to you.  Thaanks!!  

But this was damn short 😕 Chalo, koi naa ...  I know it was.. Whoops.  Actually i didn't realize it was this short until after I posted it.  But to be honest, I was just really unsure about how to take the story forward.  So I wanted to see some reactions to this just so I know what people are thinking.

coming to the update itself, this is very good. I am expecting this kind of altercations when the truth comes out. Both of them have their reasons and they are pretty justified in their own space. But I don't want either to back off this time,

Neither do I.  I want them to blow their steam off.  To scream, to cry, to fight.  But to let it all out.

Things can't be expected to sort out by themselves

We don't know what happened then; but this time, they should fight for each other. 

Also, I don't want FL to go with him to NYC.  Oh trust me, that's the last thing I would do 🤣

Chalo, next update plan karo ASAP 😆

I shall try!!! :D  Hopefully very soon considering this was a very very very short update😆

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hinalll! Watsupp?  Heyyy Surbhi!!  Nothing much, hbu??

This was a very veryyy nicee update! Except being a short one :p  Yeaa, sorry about that :$  Didn't realize itna chotu sa part likha hai maine 😆

But its okay, it was awesome anyways! Lol ppl fight with some sticks and guns but these two fight with their ego's! Idiots!  Right?  Itna ego bhi theek nahi hai 

I really loved those silent moments when she came forward and he stepped back, he went into the room in hoping for her to come after him, those scenes were beautifully explained.  😳😳
The dialogues were justfied for both of them, she was explaining and he was disappointed, they were so hurt still didn't drop their ego.  I'm glad you thought so!

I was a little hesitant with this part, but I'm glad it wasn't as out-of-character as I thought it may appear

This was awesome hinall, it had a direct link to the last part, everything going smooth, i only wished that it was longer but anything is okay for me until it has substance, and this part had. 

Thank you soo much! :D  I promise next part will be of decent size 😳

So don't worry, just start writing haha and yea that ekta kapoor joke was hillarious even i don't want you to become that XD

Can you imagine?  😆  It'd be so frustrating by the end hahaa

 And yes one thing i wanna say, if in case you're just confused about the story, big length or so many parts doesn't appeal the readers, just story does and you're going the right way, just pen down what you think is right ad would do justice to it :)

Thanks a lot!  Seriously!  That means a lot to me!

I'm always wondering what readers will think, whether they'll like it or not.  So this is very encouraging to read! 😳

Bahut likh liyaaa man, shit i bored you :X  No way!  Your comments never bore me!  And I guarantee they never will in the future either 😃

Haha dekhaa tumhari update short thi par mere comment ki length wohi thi *smirk*

For real, your comment is longer than my update 😆

Just woke up dude haaha let me freshen up! Cyaaa :*

Thanks sooo much once again 😃😃😃 <3