Ohk..i could so relate to what u were writing... Gajar ka halwa in winters is like a daily thing at our home ..i can think of my winters without it..
And kejriwal win..i mean i loved it..i could so relate to it becoz of my dad is namo fan and me a kejri fan and we literally argued everyday till he won...my dad still tells me that u'll see how this win will effect delhi *sigh* ..bt this was so realisiticcc ..awesome
Swara its Monday the 9th her Bday before she goes to work
On Sunday she lied she was going to and went to his house instead
They shopped and cooked for her when she was gone on Sunday
Oh! Taara did he win on the 10th?
Chalta hai
For publishing Ill make her Bday as the 11th
Ok. Clear now. Nisha, can we see R&B doing something special for II on her bday, please di, paavam di. He is not expressive, but still want him to show what she means to her in some way, pleeease.
hi nisha...I hv been a silent reader of ur AWESOME story all these days.
I registered on this forum few days back only to tell u that u r a truly amazing writer.
HATS OFF to u !!!!
I am frm bangalore and a s/w engineer and on one lazy fri eve while browinsg
I accidentally happened to open up this india forums site ,and came across this story of urs and trust me there has been no looking back.
"Silk pouches & Horned Helmets" was the one u had updated that week i guess and i started with that one and that went to the first update and then the next ,next and it continued and i ended up spending that entire weekend reading and re-reading the entire story.(my mom being totally annoyed with me that weekend coz i was glued full time to the laptop)
I am totally ADDICTED to this now, and keep refreshing the page time and again waiting for ur updates.
The SoSy tab is open 24/7 on my cell/laptop everywhere.
I am in love with ur leads R&B especially ,R&B is just like my ideal man the only exception being he is too very tall for me ;) and II is supremely cute .
I wake up at around 6AM IST to catch up on ur update(daily.. I do this religiously) still lying on the bed and then again doze off till mom shouts at me to wake me up for ofc :) and then again i wait for ur next update while I am on my way to ofc ,(keep cursing the internet connectivity foolishly )
After reaching ofc I again re-read the two morningupdates while in ofc :)
The best thing about ur story is it's so simple and yet so attractive and so unpredictable with each update u only prove that the current one is more better than the previous one and this just continues .
I am really scared someday when u wuld stop giving us updates what wuld I do
You wont believe as a backup i have copied all ur updates into a word doc and hv it on my HDD , it's so precious and special to me .
Having said that,
MUUUAAAHH Nisha !!!!
LUV u for giving us this wonderful story.
u r truly an awesome writer and are doing a superb job.
(I knw many hv told u this but I still want to say it again)
Thanks a ton for ur awesome updates..keeping us all hooked .
Great discussion happening here. Can't stay and join but loved reading each and every bit of it.
This just came out from somewhere within while I was reading the last chapter. I'm no poet but sometimes the words do just flow out.
Voh bhari kitaab na keh payi Jo chaar shabd ne bayaan kiya Chaar shabd na bata sake Jo teen aansoo ne dikha diya Teen aansoo na samjha paye Jo do sparsh mein mehsoos kiya Do sparsh na jata paye Jo ek dhadkan ne suna diya Voh dhadkan bhi kum lagi Jab tumhe aakhir voh ehsaas hua
Oh My God!!! Beautiful!!! Their entire relationship will be summed in that poem...so beautiful!!!
Great discussion happening here. Can't stay and join but loved reading each and every bit of it.
This just came out from somewhere within while I was reading the last chapter. I'm no poet but sometimes the words do just flow out.
Voh bhari kitaab na keh payi Jo chaar shabd ne bayaan kiya Chaar shabd na bata sake Jo teen aansoo ne dikha diya Teen aansoo na samjha paye Jo do sparsh mein mehsoos kiya Do sparsh na jata paye Jo ek dhadkan ne suna diya Voh dhadkan bhi kum lagi Jab tumhe aakhir voh ehsaas hua
Beautiful Nivi !!!
I love these lines...Not just in this context, but otherwise also...really beautiful
Thanks Ashu
Maybe I will try to give future reviews in poetry form then since you guys seemed to like it
Syeda!! Thank you for that one beautiful piece of advice.. I shall do it tom... I need all the parts o my hard drive to re read them. .And yes, welcome on board :))
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