A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
hey
nice start i would say
both are doing a very good job
the ploy sounds interesting
looking forward to read further
do update soon
n all the best
😃
Edited by shiningshannu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

hey

nice start i would say
both are doing a very good job
the ploy sounds interesting
looking forward to read further
do update soon
n all the best
😃

awww...thanks a ton from both of us...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Finally i read ur work been here after sucha long tym
Cong8 naba for ur efforts wit ani
The first chapter was really gud
The introduction in itself was very
Impactful
swayam the self established
Business tycoon n he got sharon
To compliment her
The interview portion was very well written
I got to read a very strong swayam
N the chap after tat just compliments
The prologue
Sharon on her first day
Her energy n enthusiasm
Was very well written
Rey the best frn cum bro
His intro was very welcuming
Poor swayam ne kya soch liya
Overall a very nice introduction
Naba n ani i m looking frwd to
Read ur stuff
Do update soon 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Hey nice start..great update...
Thanks fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

Finally i read ur work been here after sucha long tym

Cong8 naba for ur efforts wit ani
The first chapter was really gud
The introduction in itself was very
Impactful
swayam the self established
Business tycoon n he got sharon
To compliment her
The interview portion was very well written
I got to read a very strong swayam
N the chap after tat just compliments
The prologue
Sharon on her first day
Her energy n enthusiasm
Was very well written
Rey the best frn cum bro
His intro was very welcuming
Poor swayam ne kya soch liya
Overall a very nice introduction
Naba n ani i m looking frwd to
Read ur stuff
Do update soon 🤗


wow...thanks from both of us...will update soon dear...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice one...looking forward to the next update with loads of swaron moments.
Edited by pinks2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
heya ani
a new FF from you
the title is good
sorrry am commenting late
coming to the first chapter
it was quite refreshing
aww sharey friendship!!
i love this casual sharon
waiting to read more
update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

heya ani

a new FF from you
the title is good
sorrry am commenting late
coming to the first chapter
it was quite refreshing
aww sharey friendship!!
i love this casual sharon
waiting to read more
update soonish

will update asap...sorry for tge delay
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: mayori

Amazing part... 😊
Will be waiting for the next update...keep writing more & more 😊


thanks a lot!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

wow its nice...

awesome start...
loved the intro of both...
rey's entry was something not expected...

do continue soon
pm me ...

with love
keechu


thanks keechu di!
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