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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful updates... Loved all parts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8
Next morning which is Thursday ishita gets up before him and prepares breakfast. Raman gets up with a hangover and headache. He feels guilty for having drunk the previous night and wonders if ishita would be angry with him. He also faintly remembers saying I love you to her but thinks it could be his dream. He goes out and sees ishita doing her chores in the kitchen. He has no courage to speak to her . He gets ready for office and says that he is getting late so will not have breakfast. Ishita is silent and she packs the breakfast as we'll as lunch for him. Before leaving he apologises for drinking yesterday night and ishita does not respond. He leaves but feels bad that she is angry and he spoilt everything . Ishita on the other hand is very happy now that she knows his feelings. She also knows that he is not a kind of person who would confess openly so she decides to surprise him by confessing her feelings. She decorates the whole house with flowers and scented candles. In the dining room she makes a design " I love you" with rose petals. She has cooked his favourite food. She has decorated her room Also with lots of candles. She is also wearing a royal blue color gown and is looking beautiful. It is about 7 pm and Raman enters the house. The house is dark with just the candle light. He is really taken aback with this pleasant surprise. He calls out her name goes to the dining room and sees the design on the floor and is delighted. He has tears in his eyes. He then goes to the rooms. Ishita is standing at the balcony facing her back to him. He calls out her name. She turns and walks towards him. She holds his hands and tells him she loves him. He is smiling and also has tears. She is also having tears. They hug each other. He also takes out the ring. Kneels down and asks her if she will be with him forever . She nods her head and he puts the ring on her finger. He kisses the ring and the finger. He slowly kisses her hands and comes to her face. He kisses her eyes , forehead and looks at her seeking permission to kiss her on her lips. She closes her eyes and they have their first kiss. She hugs him again and buries her head deep inside his chest. He then takes her to the bed and they become one and complete each other.


Next morning (Friday )ishita gets up early takes a shower and wears a good kanjivaram saree. Raman gets up with a smile and looks for ishita. Ishita is shy and is blushing. He goes behind her and hugs her and asks her if she is alright. Ishita nods a yes. He asks her why she is ready in this saree. He also asks if she wants to extend the stay as they are leaving tonight . She says no as ruhi will be waiting for them. He tells her that he is free till lunch time and has meetings only after that so what she wants to do. She tells him that she wants to go to siddhivinayak mandir along with him . He agrees they both get ready and go to the temple and look like a newly married couple. Both thank god for giving them each other and completing each other. In the evening they leave Mumbai and reach home mid night. Everyone is awake. Ruhi runs into ishita's arms. Ishita is very happy to see her and gives her the gift. Raman is standing in one corner looking at his entire family happy and is content in life. Thanks god again to have brought ishita in his life



This was the last part . Hope you all liked it.

Edited by prevas12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Your story is very nice and touchy. It is very important to confess your feeling to some one you love. Thanks for sharing it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
this ws cute ss...loved readin all parts..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
readed all updts .. Superb..👍🏼
Har pictur ki tarah iski b happy ending.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
brief but so nice and contended...liked it..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
loved reading all the 8 parts and loved the happy ending!😊
I am sucker for anything romantic 😳and this was full on sweet cute and romantic😊

You write very well and should continue to write more often!

Throughout the SS I had this happy smile reading it. So, thank you for this SS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
read all parts its a cutest and most beautiful ss there is no negativity only ishra,for me its a dream track ishra away from their family no more ruhi ki liye or adi ki liye bas ek duje ki liye

its a lovely story end is like happily ever after
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
READ ALL WHOLE STORY.VERY NICE..LOVED IT DO WRITE MORE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awww so sweet ending...
.even though it was raman who confessed in tipsy state...
Ishu's confession made more romantic n logical...
Nice ending

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