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Originally posted by: lalarukh
deeps i simply wanted to give u hats off on this plane scene...my goodnesss...the emotions of this man ...the way u have written it...i am speechless...he chewing ice cube..crushing it while controlling his tear...my goodness...u rock babes...fantastic words...i loved the way he was having all time to him...thinking abt anjali with that bhai word...whose real meaning he learnt again from his wife in few span of time ...wow...i loved his way of giving credit to her :)...loved the way he feeling abt anjali nani ...feeling finally content for the loved ones he is having in his life ...those who were there in best and worse phase of his life...with all open arms...the satisfaction he is feeling for his loved ones...brought big satisfaction to heart seriously :)...and loved his point when he thoughts nani would be more happy with aman...as really aman giving her way ease and cheerish moments ...very very nice :)...his reasoning awesome...hats off to u indeedStop giving me credit for everything. The flight scene wouldnt be possible if it wasnt your suggestion...So take it back...Every step he took slapping against the frothy waves reminded the jingling music her anklets used to make...ufff...its like saaathe waters instantly punishing his heart from remembering her soft taps on the ground...ufff...its like reeeDusk is the time he shuts himself even more wanting to be alone away from the world, ...ufff...its like gaaaThe cool and calm breezes reminded him her silken tendrils dancing against his stubble cheeks each morning...ufff...its like maaasoft sand below his feet reminded him her tender toes fighting against his under the blanket each night...ufff ...its like paaalighthouse reminded the kisses she used to steal in the midnights as they laid in each other embrace....ufff...its daaaHe loved her, loved her beyond any rational reasoning, so deeply madly and truly that it started to hurt him....ufff ...its like neeLying on his back, resting head on his one arm, staring at the dark sky void of stars, tenderly caressing his heart with the other palm, he realized that he failed to hate her all these years..ufff ...can u see its back to saa :)...How the hell did u come up with these..U know that cool and calm breezes is my favorite...It just gave so much peace when I wrote it...Thank you for such beautiful comment .. Love you...
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