MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ] - Page 13

Hey! Nain
Edited by Param_love - 9 years ago

loved the kissing sequence! it was indeed promising, no one could ever bring out those emotions while their kiss, just as you did! loved it to the core! and you also used many lines of banjaara, my fave song! thanks for pm'ing, i know i am late, but i cam busy with assignments and projects from college! anyways, continue soon, keep writing, stay blessed, love you!

Back again guys...

PART 27 - MY PAST WITH HER I

We were still lost in each others eyes. I raised my palms to her cheek and stoke my fingers there.

{Muskata ye chehara
Deta hai jo pehara}

She shivered all of a sudden and gradually stated breathing heavily.

{Jaane chhupata kya
Dil ka samandar
Auron ko to hardam}

I lowered my fingers upto her neck and then raised upto chin.

Saya deta hai
Wo dhup mein hai khada khud magar

As I reached to her lips, I realized what I just did. I gawked it for few seconds and then came into sense. I stood at a sudden and she too came into sense. I circled my eyeballs and just left from there leaving a dumbstruvk sanyu behind.

I reached to room and sat down besides bed placing my head on matress. I started talking to myself.

"what the heck I did. I attacked her dignity without her permission.

{Chot lagi hai usey phir kyun
Mahshus mujhe ho raha hai
Dil tu bata de kya hai, iraada tera}

She is a girl and in spite of protecting her self respect, I played with it. I was rude, arrogant, heartless but how could I be so cheap. I have no right to do this.

{Main parinda beshabar
Tha uda jo darbadar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar}

What is the difference between me and my dad. Damn me GM, take me to you.

{Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar}

I know I had been liking her from the very first day, still we dont have any relation with each other."

{Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Jaise banjaare ko ghar}

I sarted dreaming her from they very first day.

Past..
The very first day I saw ger when she was on stage. Dhe started dancing and I stared her like never before any girl.

"in kadmo ki aahat kuch kehti hai
is saadgi me zindagi nazar aati hai
kash ye lamha thehar sa jaaye
shaayad pehli bar koi ladki dekhi hai"

She was beautiful, charming and full of life. She was dancing just like a snow flowing with cold breeze. Her innocent smiles made butterflies fly in my stomach. As she finished, I came into sense facing reality. I again found a fake world revolving around me. Within a fraction of second I hid myself behind my arrogant mask and busted on her.

As she knew who I am and broke down after my departure, I noticed that and heard everything she was saying to her brother.

"kyun ye dard jaana pehchana lagta hai
kyun teri aankon me aansu apna lagta hai
kyun teri parchhaiyan mujhpe andhera karti hein
najaane kyun ye tuti hui aawaaz dil ko chhu jaati hai"

I felt guilty on my words and after her performance, I decided to assign her for that role.

A week later she came to me, I could sense the same glow back on her face, which was enough to express her joy. I wanted to gawk the same the same in her eyes, so I purposefully hit her leg so that she would fall on me

"jin aankhon ki gehraai me main doob raha tha
jis chehre ke k noor se main chhup raha tha
aaj usi ki raunak ko main jhel nahi paa raha tha
kaise khud ko samjhata jab har jawaab uspe jake ruk raha tha"

I sensed her condition from her clothes. She had each right to do of her choice as well as she desserved that. Thats why I asked suzi to help her for her makeover.

Next day when she came and stood infront of me asking something. What she was saying still now I dont know because at that very moment, I was lost in her anamation and fascination. She beauty was flawless just like a butterfly flying in cool environment.

"ek nayi subah ki tarah thi
halki dhup barsa rahi thi
doob raha tha us khusbu me
jo saanson me wo ghol rahi thi"

I just wanted to be in her every moment. So I decided to take her one evening. I managed to dismental bittu's bike as I knew she must be leaving with him.

That evening I knowing played billiards as I knew she must be interested in that. For the first time I was so close to a girl, we were inches apart and her fragrance was washing me.

"wo jaadu tha teri aankhon ka
ya teri mahak ka wo kammal tha
jo bhi tha wo bas teri or mujhe khinch raha tha
bhul raha tha main mera wajud ki main kaun tha"

The moment she hugged was the most soothing one after GM's death. It was heavenly which was relaxing me.

"teri baahon me rehne ka jo sukun tha
teri panaahon me wo mujhe mil raha tha
soch raha tha ye lamha kash yahin thahar jaaye
jisme ehsaas bepanah tha"

When you were hurt in your elbow, I was feeling like some one was cutting me into pieces in knife. Your pain were tears in my eyes which flown unknowingly. For while I forgot was RD not randhir.

"ye chot tere mujhe dard de rahe the
tere aansu meri aankho se beh rahe the
nahin pata mujhe main kahan tha
bhul gaya tha, main kaun tha aur kya kar raha tha"

In car when I had a convo with you, I realized it was the first time after GM's death when I was speaking to someone so politely. Her innocenct laugh and smile were the two best awards I got in my life.

"us muskurahat me kuch chhupa tha
us maasumiyat ko kuch kehna tha
wo dard tab nazar nahi aa raha tha
jab tumhe tuthte hue dekha raha tha"

To be continued...

Thank u 4 reading..

Again I rqst my dearest readers... Plz plz plz do cmnt... I post one time n chk 10 times just 4 ur remarks... I m on mobile n like n cmnt is too difficult, das y I cant reply to ur cmnts... Sry 4 dat... Lv u all...

FEEDBACK PLZZZ... Edited by Nain5000 - 9 years ago

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me 1st
you are amazing smiti
and the way u explained rd emotion was just awesome
nextpRt sooon
thanks for pm me
love u
sakshiEdited by cuteparsh - 9 years ago

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Edited by Param_love - 9 years ago

Awsome dear loved it
Thanx for the pm
Update soon

Beautiful update👏Edited by katheriene - 9 years ago

Smiti i love u yaara... u r a fab writer... sach main; i really mean it...

"us muskurahat me kuch chhupa tha
us maasumiyat ko kuch kehna tha
wo dard tab nazar nahi aa raha tha
jab tumhe tuthte hue dekha raha tha"

i am madly love with ur writing style dear... pls update next part asap dear...

Okay
I have not been comment
Coz I could see that you have updated for some reasons and the title has not changed to say what part it is on so I was like thinking that you have not updated yet
Well finally saw them all
And they are amazing
Love the whole rd background info
Their kiss
Rd freaking out
Love how he cared for her
Update soon
PM of you can

it's awesome...i love it...pls update soon