Playing With Fire - An IshRa OS - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aani... mera post updated... you know where it is...πŸ˜›
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Superb os..
u r a wonderful writer :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb os. raman trying to control!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wait what? that's it? I am still waiting for the 16+ part. Lmao Aani, my gang had made fun of me for posting a reader's discretion before an OS and now it's your turn πŸ€£... 
Superb one! Raman's almost snapping control was fun to read. Dayymn Ishita does know how to play with fire ;) Each and every thought crossing Raman makes him lose another thread of sanity. I was waiting for the final thread to snap for the 16+ part but sigh... πŸ˜† we should get a sequel of this ;)

PS: Don't take my teasing seriously. It's all meant for fun. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

res res res

and yayyy i was waiting for you to write something πŸ˜†

*** I am back
Aani,
Thanks for respecting my wish for a disclaimer sweetheartπŸ˜† I still went ahead and read it while at work anyway πŸ˜‰

Hey Lucky thanks for this comment πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ah I kept my word and as I did say my duty was done πŸ˜³

So i will comments in 2 parts here. The first one as a serious reader and the second, well you know πŸ˜›

πŸ˜†πŸ˜† sure I do and I like this idea πŸ˜›

Part # 1 - LOVED the quote.

I found it apt πŸ˜³
- You have caught the thing that was on my mind too (again😊). She dressed up for 'revenge'. And he totally deserved it too. And the fact that he knows her intention, thats perfect

Yep her expressions were a clear indication of her purpose and when Raman was bowled over she had that mission successful vibe πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

- Thanks for including that rain sequence. I don't know if I told you before, but that was the part where 'found' my Raman. He gives her the coat, but when she refuses he says something like, if you didnt need my help then why did you hold my hand when you were falling down earlier. That was the moment I fell in love with the show. If they had shown her taking his coat and then a couple of eyelocks lasting 5 mins, I think I would have stopped watching then. So thank you for reminding me of that 😊

OMG  πŸ˜²πŸ˜² connection for sure Lucky  that scene got me hooked to the show - its not a cliche rain scene for the reasons I gave in my os and you in the above comment, you can see the sparks flying here but not in the in your face way - its a slow burn, very subtle which is what made me take note of the show and the couple, they werent projecting physical attraction as the sole basis of a couple coming together like the tons of shows out there - there was this spark but also a clash of egos and wills - he kept his distance even when he offered to help, but his way was callous which is why she reused to accept it and he got annoyed - hope I made sense here πŸ€” but it was obvious from this one seq - this is a love story of two very strong individuals who are bullheaded in their own way - no one can be deemed wrong nor can they be wholly right πŸ˜³


- Interesting angle on his libido. I know the show won't address it, but in real life, his turmoil (about satisfying his needs) would be so profound. I am glad you wrote about it. and very perceptive too

yep I feel as a man who perhaps has gone celibate since years now... his attraction for his wife which he is trying hard to fight is obvious but as you said the show wont obviously address it in a in your face way though you catch a glimpse if you can - like his bites πŸ˜†πŸ˜†, than the 360 degree comment - its a giveaway of what he is doing in a very comical way though and yes  the button scene also recently after they got trapped in that curtain he made no attempt to free them and enjoyed the intimacy of having a woman in his arms - I dont buy Raman being unable to find a way esp since his reason was so lame - I am tired like from what huh?πŸ€” πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

- His uneasiness at his growing attraction towards his wife... you have very vividly described it. Seriously, you know how much I love posts about inner turmoils πŸ˜†and characters 'thinking' about stuff. I loved this part too

Yep he is uneasy about being attracted to Ishita - he displayed that during the locked in scenario, yep he checks her out totally but he yells and fights just to keep her away... all of them are excuses since he is scared of acting on his feelings and of her reaction as well πŸ˜³

- As a continuation of the last point, you have so aptly described his frustrations with the fact that he cannot actually act on his attraction. Seriously, I would LOVE to see this in the show, and they way you wrote, I could imagine KP's expressions.

oh KP actually manages the expressions in this dept pretty well πŸ˜†πŸ˜† all the biting is evidence of that LMAO 

- He lost his temper. WOW. that was so like him. How much more can a man tolerate no? He's already frustrated, she's tempting him and then she callously says something that could mean something entirely different. He had to snap.

Yep thats Raman for you, he loses his temper easy and here you have explained the reasons pretty well πŸ˜³ 

- He apologised immediately... NOw that is difficult for me to imagine πŸ˜† and that too without any one-liners... don't make him too soft girl. I will not forgive you for that πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†


LOL he wants to stay SOFT Lucky πŸ˜‰ πŸ€£  ok jokes apart - this was because of the Perv incident - i actually included this because when the family stupidly believes Ishita is pregnant and ishRa have that fight- he says about her not being able to conceive and the look on her face makes him THINK for a second and he says how can she be pregnant when they aren't in a conjugal relationship...  since they sleep apart - it shows he can be sensitive too, here he knows the blame of being called a characterless woman has hurt her once, he nearly did the same mistake again and so he said sorry here πŸ˜³

Part # 2
- forget everything i wrote in part 1πŸ˜› clean slate. imagine another reader writing thisπŸ˜†
- Haila aani... it wasnt remotely as evocative as the last one. why do you think this was like the 4 letter word you used... it was very maturely written my dearπŸ‘

exactly.. this piece wasnt meant to be evocative or graphic in nature but dealt with things if you notice them - his uneasy gait - that highlights his state, his need to go to the restroom to relieve himself and lastly the premature angle - I think a certain amount of sensibility is needed to discuss these topics in the right way hence the disclaimer πŸ˜³


- the way you described his turmoil through his actions. He has trouble walking huh? <ahem> That was priceless.

ahem exactly πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†πŸ˜† sometimes less is MORE πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
- Down Boy... CLASSIC. reminds me of a very infamous scene from an infamous movie... Wont say anything more😳

really??  I had heard it in some movie I cant recall which is the one you thought of here PM me πŸ˜› πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

- the last 2 scenes... from the bathroom to outside... please can we have something similar on the show... Please please (says she looking up at the heavens). They were FUN and 'something else' <ahem> at the same time.


LOL I wish but I dont think so it will happen alas 
As I end every reply to you with quotes... here goes one for you on how she looked last night

"A woman's dress should be like a barbed-wire fence: serving its purpose without obstructing the view." - Sophia Loren



Oh wow that quote is something  gal πŸ˜Ž so saving it perhaps it can be useful to me in the future πŸ˜‰πŸ€£


P.S: I am a very fast reader,  so it took me 10 times longer to write this reply. and i am not exaggerating for poetic effect. 

Oh I trust you πŸ˜ƒ... I am very fast at reading too but typing does take time πŸ˜³

I am not watching the dance segments that came out today, and not participating in discussions in posts because I want to be surprised πŸ˜ƒ so i was hoping, praying that you would make a post today. and that it would be so un-related to the dance, that I can read and reply my heart out... Someone out there likes me I guess πŸ˜›

oh the segs sigh they are mindblowing i cant wait for the epi  and am so glad I could fulfill this lil wish πŸ˜³πŸ˜Š

Did i tell you yet that i LOVED this OS???πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

I figured as much thank you Lucky  πŸ€—

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Posted: 10 years ago
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res- currently on a train rammed full of people I somehow feel I need to read this without like 50 sets of eyes on me πŸ˜† 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalu79

yippee

I m always exicted to read OS from u
was happy to see one in Index 
was desperately waiting for one
After seeing intense n passionate salsa of Ishra in SBS/SBB segment  ur Os was like icing on d cake.
I loved how u mentioned Raman remembered abt that rain scene n clinic from past.
also loved this part
He had tried to visit an escort once too but he simply could not go through with it. He had ended up sending the payment without even meeting her. He was not been raised in the way- he cannot even imagine what would make women so desperate or helpless enough that they would prostitute themselves. Alcohol became his reprieve.
It shows how strong his values are n also how much he respect intimacy n women even if he had very bad experience with one.
Loved how u expressed his love n desire for Ishu.
n end was perfect n hilarious 
The king of oneliner n witty remark was speechless after what his wife said

Once again a brilliant OS Anni
Thank s n  big πŸ€— to u


thanks Shalu πŸ€—

@red - β˜ΊοΈ you are really kind to say that 

@blue - I find those scenes to be very subtle in their approach but def they ooze the attraction factor there - esp when Raman keeps looking at her while dressing her wound... he could have easily looked only at the bandages but he kept looking at her πŸ˜³

@purple - for all his faults I find Raman to be a very principled man and I dont see him doing casual or going to the length of hiring an escort actually - yes he tried it once but his conscious is too strong to allow him to do something of the sort even if he is a man who has needs.

@pink - πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I think if Ishita tries she can really be a match for him like she did recently she twisted his arm and got her coffee date, if she lets go of her inhibitions, which it seems she is with him as was evident last night when she enjoyed his attention she can spar verbally with him too πŸ˜‰

thanks for the sweet comment Shalu πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€—

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bruce_L

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Aani, THANK YOU SO MUCH πŸ€— πŸ€—
That too matter of within just a few hours !!! This itself says how outstanding you're at writing !
L and L (Love and Lust) was the only thing that preoccupied his mind at that moment when he saw her.
And you have put it in exact words what were the actual thoughts running in his mind when his wife walked in beautifully.

Ishu is no less too.
Since the length of the scene has always been an issue, so rather thought of reading it in an OS and requested you!
Liked your elaboration of this part that always you do !
So just one word, FAB !!!
Once again, Thank you so much Aani
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Hey Bruce . πŸ˜Š

you are welcome πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—

@bold - to be honest this was coming around in my head in bits and pieces since last night so I really didnt work it all out today πŸ˜³ just the idea was more concrete πŸ˜³

@red - I like how you put this L+L, yep I believe lust is also an important factor in a healthy marriage and that was evident last night from his end πŸ˜³

@blue - how can she be πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

@pink - thanks Bruce I am glad you liked my interpretation πŸ˜³
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Posted: 10 years ago
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would love to hear your take πŸ˜³
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Aani this is Brilliant again and again . I am officially screwed reading this as I m at work and in no mood to work . Girl you are one Genius writer .. look forward for more of these...