Originally posted by: CharmGal
Hi Aani,
Hey Mary 😊
I want to start off by thanking you for treating us another wonderful Os. As usual I am full of praises to your writing. Your Os are always brilliant and spot on and today was no different. You have taken a short scene from yesterday's episode and managed to do more than justice to conveyed their emotions and thoughts.Thanks so much for liking this OS and appreciating it I am so glad you feel I did justice to the scene in my take😳
My favourite part is where he feel:
"Agony because he cannot touch her, ecstasy because he know it is for him. She is his and his only. Only he can't have her"
For me, this is most powerful few lines,because it was short, effective and said a lot. This had reflected the exact thoughts of Raman from the first moment he saw her when turning around. He was also aware of the irony in his marriage. To the world, Ishita is beautiful wife of Raman Kumar Bhalla and he was probably envied by most men. Just like women envied Ishu for having a wealthy CEO and handsome man as her husband. This was shown in the series. But the society and the law is unaware that although they are legally married, they don't share any married relations. Having said that, both Raman and Ishita have always appeared to be indifference toward each other. But we as the audience know that they are affected from each other and do feel jealous when one another praise/interact with opposite gender. By writing this quote which I have highlighted in bold, you have shown his torture of being in a diffcult position. Because he is her husband by law and yet at the same time, he is not her husband. They have not officially emotionally accepted each other for themselves. He regretted that they have agreed to be together just for Ruthi. He want her for himself.That is such an amazing description of his plight Mary 👏 yep... the growing attraction he feels for her has him seriously conflicted - he wants to act on it and yet he cant. He has a fear of falling in love again, his baggage and trust issues as well as he fears he would be rejected and rebuffed. If this were a woman he had merely fallen in love with or was attracted to he would have been man enough to take the rejection but coming from his wife (again!, though a different woman) it would kill him so he is too, too scared of things.
Originally posted by: rajji-cutest
loved it ! ishita toying with poor raman emotions 👏😆 it was a treat to read your OS !
Originally posted by: _Deepika_
Goddd...its unfair to write so beautifully ...girl u r so so so talented ..loved the way u portrayed poor Raman Kumar Bhalla's condition who is getting tortured by his gorgeous Jhansi Ki Rani...loved the way u showed her effect on his soul,mind and body...He commented on her saree that she looked like his mother and poor guy is repenting now😆😆...Cruel Ishu is not letting him breath properly ...Loved the way u changed the tone of ur fiction from Romantic comedy to emotional side when he could see the difference between her and other women ...or how he took up drinking instead of taking advantage of helpless women ...that defines Raman..he is so imperfectly perfect ...a man with golden heart who pretends to have a stone heart...
Again u changed the mood of the story in fraction of seconds so effortlessly ..when she collided into his arms and tortured him even more...the conversation was so IshRa like...i could visualize Ishu and Raman fighting with their hidden motives ...
U are one of the BEST WRITERS in this forum...keep writing dear...u r a gifted writer👏👏👏
Originally posted by: pomegranate
very well written as usual, aani.
Hi Zara thank you 😊I actually read this while my professor was giving a very boring lecture. i already guessed what the story would be about from the title but went ahead anyway, needless to say I had a hard time keeping a straight face throughout.LOL I am glad I could help you get through a boring lecture and hope it wasnt much trouble to keep a straight face 😆I seriously don't mind you writing risque FF's because we will never get this kind of content in the serial. I really hate the chaste nature of indian television, they can talk about familial rape but can't show sexual desire between a man and a wife.Thank you... I am somewhat getting comfortable slowly myself with these risque FF's honestly IshRa are the first couple who make me write these things, I have never done before and it feels natural somehow with them 😳 and I so agree Indian TV can discuss female infanticide, rapes and infidelity but hell would be raised if a married couple has to discuss or have some sorta sexual matter. 😳you touch some very important aspects of raman. he may be cold and distant but he is a man after all. after how he reacted to ishita last episode, how can anyone not expect him to feel sexually attracted towards her?Yep I believe the way he was checking her out so blatantly he even didnt hear his friends commenting was a very clear give away this attraction is not just limited to how she looks - but rather what it makes him feel, and what his actions imply - the phone he almost bit was a giveaway!the last bit with ishita taunting/flirting with him was the best. oh I wish I could see them purposefully trying to rile each other about with double meaning jokes and other naughty things. lol, why did this have to be indian television?I would die of sheer shock and happiness if the show has Ishita mouth something provocative someday even if its not so blatant 😉 if they rile each other up oh boy what I would pay to see that. Alas Indian TV so no point in keeping hopes
Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Very well written n entertaining. I simply love it when Raman tells Ishita to back off n stop touching him! He is hilariously delusional!!😆 But cute hain hamara hero.😛
Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Aani... I read your reply to mine... For everyone else's sanity and to save your hands from further carpal tunnel... i will not get into more detail 😆
I was glad to see your detailed reply... and am PMing you the movie name😉
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