My VEEBA OS Collection#2:OS-DILWALE DULHA Le Jayenge!!!,Prt2,pg-6... - Page 2

What a twist at d end after some sensuous romance.Veera is no more.so sad.1sttime I'm reading a tragedy from u.u remember my 1st VeeBa os Dream?This os reminds me of my tragic os.beautiful os..it touches our heartEdited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago

I literally had tears in my eyes when I finished. This is very emotional. Awesome writing as usual.👏 I am at a loss of words so don't know what I am typing.This story is surely going to haunt me for a long time. 

Argh !! You made me cry 😭 !! Such a gut-wrenching story...the way it started I was actually expecting Veera to wait for him in the bedroom 

Yay!
I was waiting for your updates...I really like your stories and this one was very emotional 😭 ❤️

Loved it! 🤗Edited by mishachwdhury - 10 years ago

Its so sad OS bt again u hv done brilliant work!! I cant see my ballu crying...nd i feel like m crying too 😭

That was heart wrenching! I feel like crying just thinking about the story. Great OS though, just like always. 😭

OMG! Tears are flowing from my eyes...Tehsina you are such a great writer...Keep rocking

wow tfs dear..its vry interesting 👏

Goodness! God! Are you so cruel?! First you say you're busy with studies and can't be regular on IF. And then I begin to read what I assume is a drool-worthy romantic story of Veeba. And then you drop a big bomb on my head with the second half of the story. 😭😭😭 Pls if time permits give us a nice finale yaar.

So sad, just read it after mirage, what a contrast in stories and emotions. You write so well.