ArHi SS: Swayamvar | COMPLETE | 31/7 - Page 31

Sadly I only found the story after it had been completed but lucky for me cos a got to read it at one shot!

Loved the SS - cute, quirky interesting and v believable. What I liked was that the characters stayed true all through & the romance was believable & not mushy over the top!

Would love to read the next story, pl do let me know when u start to write it. Thanks

Amazing story...Loved it !!!😊

Wooowww phataka ending !!! Loved it

Awesome ending

Awesome story with a sweet ending... Loved it...

Hey just completed reading the story and I must give it to you that you have handled the story and its characters real maturely... hats off! The story was different and so were the characters and you did justice with the full thing.

Very interesting storyline and nicely written! Loved it! Would love to catch up on your other fics too :)
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-V

Wonderful story...You know intially reading the tittle "Swayamvar"i didn't want to read the story, thinking it will be something like Rakhi ka swayamvar but I'm glad i gave it a try.
              All the characters were so interesting and mature or rather they matured in due course, be it Arhi as lovers and friends or Khushi relationship with her parents. Everbody changed in a good way.
Thanx for the time and dedication to give us such a beautiful story...Hope to catch u soon in next story...
Edited by sydy - 9 years ago

brilliantly crafted dear, the ending truly was perfection. Every emotion portrayed beautifully and every loop wound seamlessly. Kya bolu ab! This story really does hallmark your coming of age as a writer my dear :) 

Read the entire SS in one shot...well it was irresistible!

After a long time have read a tale which is crisp, mature, passionate and honest...an amazing mix of the very best!

Loved and enjoyed it immensely!