ArHi SS: Swayamvar | COMPLETE | 31/7 - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
A lovely ending for a lovely story.
Really liked how you showed Khushi maturing through the story. 
Will miss both Arnav and this Khushi  
And this Shyam as well! Never thought I'd ever say that!
Thank you Choti for a very real story, very well told. 

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Posted: 9 years ago
That was beautiful...
Glad that at last Kushi acts like a mature girl and take the first step to mend their falling relationship...



And hua i loved the teaser of new story also... So kushi is already engaged but with whom?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful ending ji..thnx for d pm..ur nxt story looks interesting..all d best..
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful story..portrayed a very..sort of..modern relationship...luvd the Friends reference...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
mind blowing end and epilogue!!! loved it..  πŸ˜ƒ
well Do Deewane seems to be intriguing.. looking forward to it.. best wishes and happy writing πŸ‘πŸΌ


thanks for pm πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was one Cute story, Choti... really liked it.  It got over so soon   
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi choti.. came across ur ss and must say u write v.well. simple and different story. Will read ur other stories as well and comment. Nice work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
just read chapter 11 and epilogue...I just loved this story was wonderful reading her journey and seeing her struggle and grow as a person...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am going to miss this story 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice ending to a nice story. You have covered everything... Khushi's relationship with her parents, directing her first film, Arnav's conversation in the fantasy suit, his interview, Khushi's realization, Arnav and Khushi becoming friends and then getting married. Very nicely written. I liked this story. And Shyam and NK... they were cute too.


I will wait for Do Deewane.