Originally posted by: fairylover
Once again awesome update.
Looks like Pakhi is not aware of anything... i was expecting her to be a part of Rag's plan but she is as delusional here as she was in the show.. Well I dnt mind it as i think Rags don't want to take any chance by involving Pakhi in his plan.. After all he is doing all this for his mother's safety.
I still have hope that the marriage is fake as Pkhi said she will wait for the day when she doesn't have to sleep separate from her husband.. u used husband here n not Rags.. Again, may be it was unintentional from ur side n i am assuming too much but this what i noticed.
Vitthal is a sweetheart.. he saw the emptiness in Rag's eyes. For him Kalpi is the culprit and any father would behave in the way Vitthal did. I am sure he will forgive Kalpi on knowing the truth and will regret for saying those harsh words.. i wish Kalpi had called him once just to inform them about her safety.
OMG... What Prem is upto?? That cut out in bathtub.. M confuse about it. Whether he wants to drown her in it or take bath with her like an obsessive lover?? i guess I have to read it again to understand his motto. Now Rags know about him and located his location, I wish he follows him to ensure Kalpi's safety n before that informs Kalpi to shift to some safe place. I want Pakhi to notice Rags concern and question him n in return he can scream at her. But i know Rags is smarter here so he will find out the way.
Sorry for so much assumptions and hopes but U wrote it in such a way that I can't control myself.. I am just dying to know what will happen next..
oops.. too long naa!!π
Thank you so much Vish. n yes, I guess I love delusional Pakhi too much. ππ As for marriage thing, hopefully I won't take too much time to reveal whether RaKhi marriage is true or fake. π
Also, thanks for mentioning Vitthal scene, yes he does love his daughter very much and maybe will forgive her when he knows the truth. That's why he could also see the pain in Raghav's eyes, which Kamla couldn't.
As for Prem he was always an obsessive lover. So no he doesn't intend to drown Kalpi, but takes a shower with her cut out. Maybe if you re-read the following parts again, you shall be able to understand his motives better.
PART-4(b)
PART-5
Also sweetie no need to say sorry. I know you are such a fab writer yourself, so you are bound to make serious observations on the updates. π I am just happy and glad that you are liking it, hope I am able to maintain the suspense for some updates. π I am not too good at it.π
n I loved your long comment, I always love long comments. β€οΈ
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