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Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Pratap aur Ajabde dono apne khaayoolo me iss tarah doob gaye hai ki aur kuch dik hi nahi raha hai unko😉
Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa
Cel🤗
each update just keeps getting bettter and better👏⭐️love ur style of narrative, usage of inner voices, how PrAja inner voices echoed the same thing...and involvement of other characters in ur story...😳⭐️⭐️and hindi is also so well versed...its like actually watching MP in front of the eyes😊looking forward to the next one eagerly⭐️
Cel, I love how you portray each character..
Pratap kept that piece of cloth so carefully..Aww..and he feels she's just a friend 😆
while reading.. for a moment i thought Pratap Ajab bumped into each other..but it was Gauhar..
seems you will let Ajabdeh know about Gauhar's plans.. 😉
keep writing 👍🏼
Hey friends. Finally I updated. I'm so sorry for the delay. I was too much busy. I cant manage to write anything better than this. I promise next part will be surely better than this. So here goes the 5th part.
Part 5-
"Aur aap khush nahin hai?" said Pratap smilingly standing there at the edge of the bamboo door.
"Hum? Haan hum bhi khush hai. Hum unke liye bohot zyada khush hai. Woh humari itni achi saheli jo hai." With that Ajabde gave a sweet smile.
"Aap humesha dusron ki khushiyon ka khayal rakhti hai. Aapna khayal rakhna sada bhool jaati hai." Pratap went near where she was standing. "Ab aap hi dekhiyen, aapko itni chot lagne ke baad bhi uss par dawai nahin lagai."
"Woh hum... Humein samaye hi nahi mila dawai lagane ka." Ajabde replied honestly.
"Aap dusron ke taqlifon ko suljhane mein itni vyast ho jaati hai ki apne taqlifon ko humesha andekha kar deti hai." Pratap could clearly see that she was having trouble in moving her neck even if it was very slight.
"Kunwar Pratap, ab aap ki chot kaisi hai?" Ajabde asked with concern and a hint of guilt in her eyes. She held her responsible for his injury.
"Hum ab bilku thik hai. Humne aushudhi bhi laga li hai. Agar uss din aapne humare hath mein woh kapra bandh kar khoon ka behna nahin roka hota TAB shayad hum thik nahin hote"
"Nahin nahin kunwar Pratap. Aisa mat boliye. Aapke iss chot ke zimmedar sirf aur sirf hum hai. Yadi aap hume na bachate to aapko yeh chot nahin lagti. Hume chama kar dijiye." She was really sad for his injured state.
"Dekhiye Ajabde. Ab phir se aap shuru mat ho jaiye. Aap humse maafi kyon maang rahi hai. Humne kaha than a aapko ki hum dono mitra hai. To kya ek mitra apne dusre mitra ke liye itna bhi nahin kar sakta. Aur waise bhi yeh chot itni gehri bhi nahin hai." He tried his best to convince her that he was alright and it was not her fault. The one who is responsible for this is phool kanvar.
"Ajabde aap jaiye aur isi waqt apne chot par dawa laga kar aiye." He said.
"Hum dawa laga lenge kunwar Pratap. Humara kaam khatam hote hi hum..." Ajabde was cut off in the middle by Pratap "Nahin. Aap issi samaye humare sath chalengi vaidya ji ke paas aur dawai lagayengi. Hume pata hai aap phir bhul jayengi. Ab chaliye." Ordered Pratap. And Ajabde like an ideal friend obeyed him and started going out from the cowshed.
All this was being watched by a pair of eyes.
Phool's POV-
Arrey yeh Ajabde kahan chali gayi. Hum unhe kab se dhund rahein hai. Pure mahal mein dekh liya kahin nahin mili. Ab sirf ek hi jagha raha gayi hai. Woh zarur apne gay eke sath hongi. Woh rahi Ajabde. Hum abhi unhe bulate hai. A...arrey woh kaun hai? Kunwar Pratap jaise dikh rahe hai. Woh bhala yahan kya kar rahe hai. Hum thora paas jaakar dekhte hai. Haan yeh to kunwar Pratap hi hai. Par woh yahan Ajabde se kya keh rahein hai. Kya? Kunwar Pratap ko aisa kyon lagta hai ki Ajabde apna khayal na rakhke humesha dusron ka khayal rakhti hai. We Ajabde se itna sawal kyon puch rahe hai? Aur Ajabde bhi na, woh unke sawalo ka uttar kyon de rahi hai? Unhe to wahan se abhi wapas aajana chahiye. Aur yeh kunwar Pratap ko bhi itni chinta kyon hai Ajabde ki? Halki si to chot hai. Aur dard? Dard to unhe bilkul bhi nahi ho raha hai. Ajabde, aap boliye na aap bilkul thik hai. Ab Ajabde ko kunwar Pratap ke chot ke bare mein puchne ka kya hai? Thik to hai ve. Kya? Yeh kya keh rahe hai Kunwar Pratap. Agar ussdin Ajabde na hoti to woh thik nahin hote. Acha, ab samajh aaya, to woh unke haath par jo kapra bandha hua thaw oh Ajabde ka tha. Ajabde aisa kaise kar sakti hai. Unhone kunwar Pratap ke hathon mein baandhne ke liye apne duppate se kapra phar kar bandha? Ajabde ne aisa kyon kiya? Unhe to hume batana chahiye tha. Arrey! Ab yeh dono mitra kab se ban gaye? Do chaar baat kar lene se koi mitra thori na ban jata hai? Ajabde, aap kahiye na unse ki aap unki mitra nahin hai! Kunwar Pratap aap ko koi zaryrat nahi hai Ajabde ko le jaane ki. Woh keh rahi hai na woh apna kaam karke dawa laga legi. Kuch boliye na Ajabde. Ajabde aap unki baat aise kaise maaan sakti hai?
Hey bhagwaan, hum yeh sab kya soch rahe hai, hume ho kya gaya hai? Kunwar Pratap chahe kuch bhi puchle Ajabde se isse humein kya? Parantu phir bhi. Najaane kyon jab hum in dono ko ek saath baat karte dekhte hai hume bilkul acha nahin lagta hai. Bohot bura lagta hai. Nahin nahin. Hume yeh sab galat bate sochni band kar deni chahiye.
"Kunwar Pratap" Pratp and Ajabde both turned around to find phool with a smile plastered on her face.
"Kya chahiye aapko?" He asked coldly. He was still angry on her because of that incident.
That col voice of his made her heart ache. Yes. She was pained. But the reason was unknown for her. The disapproving look for her in his eyes made her feel sad, guilty and something else. She never felt like this.
"Aapki chot kaisi hai? Aapne dawai to laga li hai na?" she tried to make him feel that she was concerned for him and what she did was out of her stubbornness. But he was not ready to forgive her.
"Hum thik hai. Bilkul thik. Aur waise bhi aapko yeh sab to puchna hi nahin chahiye. Aur aap mein itni bhi buddhi nahi hai. Aap ki mitra ko chot lagi hai aur unhone dawa lagai hai. Aapko unka koi khyal hi nahi hai." He said angrily. He was too angry. Because the moment he saw phool kanwar the entire scene of Ajabde being capture in the hands of the Afghan leader, That sword so close to her throat, her terrified expression. Evrything flashed before him.
It was too much. What he said was enough for her heart to get broken. She was not understanding anything. Why was her eyes slowly getting filled with water. His word pierced through her childish heart which was now experiencing so much unknown feelings.
She managed to speak somehoe "Hum to bas..." "Humare paas aapki koi bhi baat sun ne ka samaye nahin hai." Pratap cut her off in the middle. He turned towards Ajabde. "Ajabde aap apne zakhmon mein dawa laga lijiye gai. Hum chalet hai." And he left from there.
As soon as he left Phool went away to her room trying hard to control her tears.
Ajabde was left confused. She didn't get it why Pratap was so angry at Phool? Yes, what Phool did was wrong but her intensions were good. Actually what she did wasn't wrong either. How come she would know that something like this would happen? And the thing which confused her all the more was that, why was Phool looking so pained at Pratap's words? Why there were glimpses of tears in her eyes? When Pratap said her those words why didn't phool argue with him? She always did. What happened then?
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"Phool? Phool aap ro kyon rahi hai? Aisa kya hua jo aap itni buri tarha se ro rahi hai?" Ajabde asked concerned.
"Kunwar Pratap ne humare sat hiss tarike se baat kyon kiya? Unhe humare saath aise baat nahin karna chahiye tha. Bhala humari kya galti hai? Hume agar maloom hota ki yeh sab hone wala hai to hum aisa kabhi nahin karte." Phool said in the middle of her sobs.
"Kunwar Pratap ne aap ko kya bola aur kya nahi iss se aapko kya farq parta hai? Aap kabse kunwar Pratap ke baton ka bura man ne lagi. Aur humein to yakeeen nahin hota ki aap kunwar Pratap ke liye apni kimti aansoo baha rahi hai." Ajabde said.
"Aapne sahi kaha Ajabde. Hum bhala unke baton ka bura kyon maan rahe hai. Agar woh mewar ke rajkumar kunwar Pratap hai to hum bhi marwar ki rajkumari Phool kanwar hai." Said phool. Yes. Why was she crying? That also for Pratap. What was happening with her?
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"Maasi ji hum ab chalet hai. Hume aane mein thori der ho jayegi. Isliye aap humari pratiksha mat kijiyega." Pratap was ready to set off to go to the borders to see how were their soldiers doing. His friends were not going with him. They were staying as the work was not so big and Pratap said it will be enough if he went there alone.
"Par kunwar Pratap aap aake bhojan to karenge na?" Asked Hansa.
"Haan haan maasiji hum avashya karenge. Acha ab hum chalet hai." With that Pratap started leaving.
Hansa left. Ajabde was there only. She ran towards Pratap and stood in front of him to stop him.
"Arrey aap? Aap ne dawai laga li na? Acha hai. Ab aap ke ghav jaldi bhar jayenge."Pratap said flashing his million dollar smile.
"woh hume aapse kuch kehna tha."
"Bataiye kya kehna hai ?" "Woh hum keh rahe the ki...aapnko Phool ko iss tarha se kehna nahin chahiye tha. Iss sab mein uss bechari ki kya galti thi? Woh to bas Chakrapani ji ki madad hi karna chahti thi." Ajabde tried to make him understand.
"Par unhe yeh sab karne ki kya zarurat thi hum koi aur upaye nikal lete. Aur..." "Haan kunwar Pratap. Koi aur upaye bhi nikal jaa sakta tha. Par ab chodiye na. Aapke mitra ka vivah to taye ho gaya. Kripya kar ke aap Phool ko chama kar dijiye. Aaj unhe aapki bataon ka bura laga." Ajabde wanted him to forgive Phool. She wanted everything to settle down.
"Aap kehti hai to thik hai. Hume bhi lagat hai ki inmein unki zyada galti nahin thi. Ab hum chalet hai." Pratap said. "Bhala Phool kanwar humare baton ka bura kab se manne lagi?" hu mumbled. "Aap ne kuch kaha." Ajabde asked hearin his mumbles. "Kuch nahin." And he left.
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"Bohot jald hi yeh Pratap naam ka kanta humare shehensha ke raaste se baahar hogi." Gauhar Jaan said eyeing the bottle of poison venomously.
"Huh. Pichlee baar bhi aapne yehi kaha tha, iss baar Pratap ko maarne ki yojna banai hai apne?" Rao Surtan wasn't sure at all about how Gauhar was going to kill Pratap.
"Aap bas dekhte jaiye. Iss zahar ki do boond kisi ko bhi turant maar sakta hai. Kunwar Pratap aaj to aap khana khayenge, zarur khayenge, zindagi mein ek akhri baar ke liye."
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WOW! It's the longest part I've ever updated. I know it's not that good. Thanks for you patient reading friends. Please hit the LIKE button(of course if you like it) and do leave your comments. Suggestions are always welcome.
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