PrAja SS-An Unknown feeling: something i never felt before - Page 5

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Cel this was a pretty awesome update👏⭐️ loved how u brought forward the thought process of PrAja and Phool👏 looking forward to the next one😳

Thank you so much and writing how about their feelings is an importaant aspect as that is what the name suggests
Very happy that you liked it. Will update soon.

Hello friends. Finally I updated. Hope you all will like it. Pease please do hit the LIKE button (if you like it of course) and leave your comments.  Your comments are the only thin which encourages me to write further. Suggestions are always welcome. So her goes the 4^th part

Part-4

"Baojiraj! Aap sun bhi rahe hai hum aap se kya keh rahe hai?" said a frustrated chakrapani who was by now really irritated by his unattentive friend. "Jabse hum laute hai hum tabse apko  dekh rahe hai. Aapko hum kuch kehte hai to aap use na sunkar khoye khoye se rehte hai"

"Aisa kuch nahin hai Chakrapani. Hum to bass aise hi..."replied Pratap who was cut off in the middle by Chakrapani.

"nahin Baojiraj. Kuch to avashya hai. Hum jab bhi aapse aapke vichitra vyavahar ka karan puchte hai tab aap yahi kehti hai. Parantu hum jaante hai. Aapko apne mitra ko batana hai parega Baojirjaj.

"Aap bhi na Chakrapani. Hum to bas Afghano dwara kiye gaye uss akraman se chintit the.We apni haar ka badla lene ke liye hum par akraman kar sakte hai. Bas yehi soch rahe the. Aur kuch nahin."said Pratap in order to convince his friend. Yes, he was telling the truth but missing a part of it was missing which he himself didn't know.

"Hmmm. To sirf wahi ek karan hai aapke chintit tahtha VICHALIT rehne ka?" asked a voice inside himself which came from a corner of his heart. "To? Aur kya ho sakta hai? Bhala hum Chakrapani se jhoot kyon kehenge?" said Pratap to that unknown voice. "Guptacharon ke khabron ke anusaar Mahmud Shah ne Bijolia par akraman karne ke vichar  chor diya hai. Humaari sainikon ki tookriyan bhi tainaat hai . Raoji ne to apko ashwasan bhi diya hai ki Afghanon ke humla karne ki koi ummeed nahin hai. Baat to kuch aur hai." Said that voice who was not leaving any stone unturned to prove Pratap wrong. "Hum ne kaha na yahi baat hai..." said Pratap who was trying his best to convince that voice. "HA HA HA HA HA HA! Aa sabse jhoot bol sakte hai parantu apne aap se nahin" that voice was in no mood to be convinced before making Pratap admit the truth. "To aapko lagta hai hum Ajabde ke bare mein soch rahe the" said Pratap angrily when suddenly realization dawned upon him. He was himself surprised by what he said a couple of seconds earlier. " HA HA HA HA HA HA!" laughed that voice again but this time with a sense of victory in its voice. "Humne abhi aisa kyon kaha?" Pratap was confused by his own behavior.

Seeing his friend mumbling Chakrapani said "Kuch to baat hai. Khair chodiye  aapse behas karte hum jo batane aapko yahan aaye the who to bhul hi gaye the."

"Kaun si baat?"

"Baojiraj aapka bohot bohot dhanyavaad. Yadi aap nahi hote to humara vivah Saubhagyawati se pakka nahin hua hota" said Chakrapani greatfully.

"Aapko hume dhanyavaad dene ki koi avashyakta nahin hai. Humare kehne se zyada unhone aapki virta ko dekhar iss vivah ke liye haan kiya hai." Said Pratap.

"Fir bhi Baojiraj aapka Purohit ji se jaakar baat karne liye dhanyavaad"

"Koi baat nahin hum aapne mitra ke liye itna to kar hi sakte hai."

"Baojiraj hum ab chalet hai. Hume ek zaruri kaam tha." With that Chakrapani started leaving Pratap's room when he noticed one the sandook (box which was used for keeping cloths) in the room wide open.

Seeing it he went there to close it while saying " Baojiraj. Yhe kya? Yeh khula kyon hai. Hum isse band kar dete hai." To which Pratap nodded.

Chakrapani was about to close it when something caught his eyes. A torn piece of blue georgette (a type of fabric) cloth with faded blood stains in it, kept neatly there. He was confused by seeing. Why was this torn piece of cloth kept in Baojiraj's sandook with so much of care?

"Baojiraj, yeh kapre ka chithra aapke sandook mein kya kar rahe hai? Aapne ise itne sambhal kar kyon rakha hai?" asked Chakrapani gesturing towards the piece of cloth.

Pratap hurriedly came towards the box and closed it at once."Yeh kapra.yeh to bas aise hi humne rakh diya tha aur..." he tried to think of some silly excuses to answer his friend.

"Nahin baojiraj. Koi to wajah hai. Yaad aaya! Yeh to wahi kapra hai na  jo humne aapko haath ke chot me bandha hua dekha tha uss din. Haan haan yeh wahi hai. Parantu aapne isse apne paas kyon rakh diya hai?" now it was getting even more hard for Chakrapani to understand everything. He was not aware of the incident related to this piece of cloth.

"Hum ne kaha na kuch nahin hai. Aap aaj kal kitne sawaal puchte hai. Aapko to koi mahtwapoorn karya karna tha na? Jaiye jaiye." Pratap was trying his best to get rid of the questions by Chakrapani.

"Haan haan. Ja rahe hai Baojiraj." He left from there.

Pratap was really irritated. Why the hell was Chakrapani asking so many questions? "Kuch bhi puchte rehte hai Chakrapani."

"Kyon? Unhone sahi hi to kiya. Unke jagah mein koi bhi hota to yahi puchta." That voice was back "Koi to karan hoga ki aapne iss kapre ke chithre ko itne sambhal kar rakha hai." It said trying to act innocent.

"Karan? Kaun sa karan? Hum nahin jaante..." said Pratap who was himself unaware of the reason.

"HA HA HA HA HA HA!" that voice laughed mockingly and then disappeared.

"Hum scah mein nahin jaante...*sigh* nahin jaante hum" said Pratap slowly.

He opened that sandook and took out that cloth. He caressed it slowly. Past memories flooded him. He could clearly see Ajabde's concerned face. The way she was tying that cloth around his arm...with so much care. As he saw that he felt something. Something he never felt before. An unknown feeling it was. Soothing it was.

Carefully Pratap put that cloth back in its place and went out of his room.

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"Ajabde aapko yeh chot kaise aaayi? Aur aapne hume bataya bhi nahin. Btayiye Ajabde?" said Hansa who was really concerned to see Ajabde's wound.

"Who chama kijiye maa. Humne aapko nahin bataya. Hume laga aap khamakha hi chintit hongi. Is isliye" said Ajabde giving her brother back to her mother.

"Aap bhi na Ajabde. Ab yeh batayie ki aapko yeh chot aayi kaise?"

"Woh maa hum...before she could say anything she heard a dasi saying that Raoji was coming.

"Maa hum chalet hai. Data hume yahan dekhenge to bohot krodhit ho jayenge." Said Ajabde hurriedly and left from there.

 

She was walking and was lost in her own thoughts. Those memories were fresh in her mind. His concerned  face was visible in front of her eyes. The pain that she saw in those eyes seeing her in pain. His protectiveness for her. "Yeh hum kya soch rahe hai? Kunwar Pratap to hai hi aise. Wo sada sabki raksha karte hai." Said Ajabde to herself. "Acha? Yadi yehi baat hai to to ve ladte waqt aapki taraf hi zyadatar sameye kyon dekh rahe the? Kyon who apne mitron ke mana karne ke baad bhi aapko bachane ke liye khud ko uss Afghan ke hawale kar diya tha? Bataiye." Asked a voice which came from an unknown corner of her soul. "Nahin aisi baat nahin hai. Wo apne mitron ka khayal rakhte hai isliye..." "Acha to yehi wajah hai? HA HA HA! Ajabde, ab apne aap se jhoot bolne ka koi fayde nahin hai. Aur aap? Aapne jab kunwar Pratap ko ghayal dekha to aapko itna dard kyon mehsoos hua. Aapne unke ankhon mein who kaise dekh liya jo koi nahin dekh paya?" it was too eager to make her aware of the fact which she didn't know but the voice certainly did. "Kya? Kuch nahin hai aisa.aisa kuch nahin hai..."  said Ajade.

"Kab tak jhoot bolengi aap apne apse? Aakhir kab tak?" With that it faded away.

"Yeh hume kya ho raha hai. Hume kuch samajh nahin aa raha. Kuch nahi. Yeh ehsaas..."*sigh*

Ajabde was so lost in her thoughts she did not notice someone coming towards her nor did that person.

"Aah!" both of them exclaimed as they bumped into eachother.

"Aap Laal Baiji? Woh hume chama kardijiye. Humne aapko dekha nahi hai" said Ajabde when she noticed a khanjar (knife type) lying in the floor. It took her no time to understand that it had fell down from Gauhar Jaan's hand. She was confused. Why would a dance teacher carry a khanjar with her.

As soon as Gauhar realized that Ajabde had seen that khanjar and was doubting her, she quickly said, "Koi baat nahin. Dekha to humne bhi aapko nahin. Aa..Aap jaanti hai yeh khanjar kiska hai? Hume lagta hai yeh Jalam Singh ka hai. Hum unhe hi yeh dene jaa rahe the." She smartly handled the situation but not knowing her mistake.

"Aap yeh Jalam Singh ko dene jaa rahi thi? Tab aap galat marg par jaa rahi hai. Woh to abhi wahan uss wale kash mein gaye." Just now she saw him enter that room. She felt that there was definitely something that Laal Bai was hiding from her.

"Acha? Hum bhi na. Hume marg dikhane ke liye shukriya. Hum chalet hai" Said Gauhar jaan trying to hide her anger on Ajabde.

"Iss ladki ki wajah se ek baar fir hum Pratap ko maar nahin paaye. Pratap, tum humse nahin bachoge." Gauhar thought and went away from there.

"Hum Laal Bai ji ko kya keh rahe hai? Hum to khud hi galat marg par jaa rahe the." She smiled to herself and went to the right direction.

 

Thank you so much for reading it. Please comment and hit the LIKE button.😃

Edited by Celana - 9 years ago

Haye so beautiful cel.😳

Originally posted by: _GC-AK-Fan_

Haye so beautiful cel.😳

Loved chakri and Pratap convo.😳

And PrAja convo was.

Amazing cel.👍🏼

Thank you so much khush. glad that you liked it.

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_visu

wow continue

Thank you very much. Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: lipshaa

Awesome update 

Thank you so much lipshaa

another really good update. . 



Edited by Vinder90 - 10 years ago

Ausme update celu.

Pratap aur Ajabde dono apne khaayoolo me iss tarah doob gaye hai ki aur kuch dik hi nahi raha hai unko😉

Cel🤗

Cel, I love how you portray each character..
Pratap kept that piece of cloth so carefully..Aww..and he feels she's just a friend 😆
while reading.. for a moment i thought Pratap Ajab bumped into each other..but it was Gauhar..
seems you will let Ajabdeh know about Gauhar's plans.. 😉
keep writing 👍🏼
Edited by ksgfan - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vinder90

another really good update. . 

friendly talks between chakri + pratap were very well written. . 

the inner voices of both ajab and pratap again tryin to make them aware of their growing pyaar ka  ehsaas .. . pratap holdin on to the blood choth that was used as bandage , as a gesture of that moment ..  

and at end ajab noticin gauhar with khanjar. . . 

very well written, and built up. . lookin forward to next . . 😃

Thank you so so so much. I've tried my best to potray their thoughts but my writing skills are not good. Glad that you liked it.