Originally posted by: Vinder90
was savin this as a nice weekend read π
pretty awesome yet again. . Ajab flashback idea very very cool πand phool arrangin plates lol. π rather cute πoverall awesome. . i dont mind the pace. . if you are comfortable writing π (if i was writing, I wud struggle astronomically if the shows's pace overtook me lol π )
Originally posted by: Bonhi_ipkknd
Just read all the parts in one go...its really good..!!
I love the concern between Praja...and Pratap remembering Ajab with her torn blood-stained dupatta..!!!!! *sigh*
I'm hoping Ajabdeh will solve the GJ mystery...which is awesome. This should happen in the show...she is smart enough and also she needs a confidence boost and this can surely give her that.
Do continue soon...and according to me pace of the story is just fine.
Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Wow I like it...I read all parts in one go...just awesome
Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Nice update. Pratap ne Ajabde ki haatho se banaaye huwa kheer ko pehchaan liya. Waa kya baat hai Kunwar Pratap. Update soon dearπππ
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