PrAja SS-An Unknown feeling: something i never felt before - Page 4

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

OMG Cel...awesome update❤️ loooved Pratap - Ajab convo sooo sooo very much!

 

what I would give to see this playing onscreen though there is some more Afghan war coming up soon looks like...and Ajab knows everything about Bijolia..for all we know, CVs may pick this up and give us something like this😳

 

CVs are u listening (oops reading😛) - we want Cel's SS update on screen!⭐️

 

awaiting the next one eagerly😳

Thank you so much and i'm glad you liked it.
Will update as soon as possible

Hello friends, sorry for I couldn't update yesterday because I was really busy. Thank you so much for you lovely comments. Something I would like to say is that in few of my updates you'll find parts about the feelings of Phool as well along with the others. You know it is important for the story. I know you guyz cant tolerate her but still would be glad if you read her part as well. But if you want you can skip it.

To silent readers, please please comment or at least you can LIKE the post( of course if you like it).

So here goes the third part----

Part-3

The rajkumaris were by now seated in their respective palkis(palanquin) an Pratap and his friends on their own horse. They were now on their way to the rajmahal of bijolia. Both the rajkumaris were engrossed in their thoughts.

Phool's POV:

Aaj ek sath kitna kuch ho gaya. Humne to kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki humari yojna ko safal banane ke chakkar mein yeh sab ho jayega. Hum to bas chakrapani ki madad kar apni galti ko sudharna chahte the. Hume thori na maloom tha ki yeh sab ho jayega. Kunwar Pratap ko hume itna kuch nahin bolna chahiye tha. Bhala humari kya bhool thi iss sab mein. Humne jaan boojh kar aisa thori kiya tha. Unhone humare sath itna bura bartaw kyon kiya? Hum kabhi bhi kuch karte hai to unhe humesha uss par apatti hoti hai. Arrey? Yeh kya? Hum iss sabke bare mein itna kyon soch rahe hai. Ve humse kis prakar baat karte hai isse hume kya farq parta hai? Bhala hume kyon bura lag raha hai. Ve humare shatru hai. Wo humse jo bhi kahe, isse hume kya? Ufff!! Yeh hume kya ho raha hai. Hum jab bhi apni ankhein band kartein hai to hume kunwar Pratap ki kahi hui karwi baate yaad aati hai. Hume isse pehle kabhi kisike kuch kehne se aisa anubhav nahin hua. Haan hume humesha aise samaye par krodh aa jata hai. Parantu hume Kunwar Pratap ki baat sunkar krodh nahin aa raha hai! Kuch ajeeb sa mahsoos ho raha hai. Hume swayam nahim maloom ki voh kya hai.Iss pehle hume kabhi aisa anubhav nahin hua. Kabhi nahin. Pata nahin humare saath yeh kya ho raha hai.Hufff!

 

Ajabde's POV:

Hey bhagwaan! Yeh sab kya ho gaya? Humne sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki yeh sab ho jayega. Pata nahin yadi kunwar Pratap samaye par hume bachane nahin aate to kya hota. Aaj unki wajah se hi hum sab surakshit hai. Kunwar Pratap ki baat hume maan leni chahiye thi. Par agar hum phool ki baat nahi mante to who humse naaraz ho jati. Par kunwar  Pratap sahi keh rahe the. Hume jo sahi hai wahi karna chahiye tha.Hum itna kyon soch rahein hai? *Sigh* Hum bohot thak gaye hai. Arrey yeh kya? Yeh humare saath kya ho raha hai? Hume kuch samajh nahin aa raha hai. Hume baar baar wahi batein kyon yaad aa rahi hai aur unhi ki yaad kyon? Jab bhi hum ankh band karte hai to humare saamne Kuch pal pehle hue saari ghatnaye dikhai deti hai. Kunwar Pratap ka un logon ko harana, kunwar Pratap ka hume un afghanon se bachana, unki humse kahi hui woh baate, Yeh hum kya soch rahe hain. Jaane kyon humara mann itna vichalit ho raha hai. Kyun hum jab bhi in ghatnao ke bare mein sochte hai to humare chehre par apne aap ek halki si muskurahat aa jaati hai. Hume kuch samajh nahin aa raha hai. Hum kya kare? Iss vichalit mann ko shant kaise karein?

Hey bhagwaan! Hum to kunwar Pratap ke chot ke bare mein to bhool hi gaye the. Pata nahin ab ve kaise honge? Waise bhi, yeh chot unhe sirf humari wajah se lagi. Agar who hume bachane nahi aate to unhe yeh chot lagti hi nahin. Kitna sara khun beh gaya. Ye unki tabiyat ke liye bilkul achha nahi hoga. Sab humari bhool, sirf aur sirf humari.Hum kamna karte hai ki unki chot shighra bhar jaaye aur unki pirha bhi ghat jaaye. Pata nahin kyon unhe ghayal dekh kar hume pirha pohonch rahi thi.yeh hume kya ho raha hai? Nahin Ajabde, hume lagta hai aap zyada soch rahi hai. Haan yehi baat hogi.

 

Pratap's POV:

Hume Phool kanwar ki baat manni hi nahin chahiye thi. Yadi hum unki baat naa mante to itna kuch hota hi nahin. Hume to pehle se hi lag raha tha kuch unuchit hone wala hai aur humara andaza sahi tha. Par haan iss yojna ke kaaran hum unn Afghanon ko baaki choukiyaan banana se rok paaye. Parantu baat yeh nahin hai. Woh to hume pata chal hi jaata par job hi kuch kshan pehle hua who bilkul bhi acha nahin hua. Yadi hum uchit samaye par na pohochte to naa jaane kya ho jaata.Agar sabko kuch ho jaata? Ajabde kuch ho jaata to? Us afghan ki himmat kaisi hui Ajabde ko hath lagane ki. Uska yeh dussahas ki usne Ajabde ke garden par apni talwar pakri? Agar Ajabde ko kuch ho jaata to hum kya karte? Arrey!! Hum to bhool hi gaye the. Us talwar ki wajah se unke garden par chot aayi thi. Hum umeed karte hai ki unka ghav zyada gehra na ho! Unhe zyada pirha na pohunche?

Pata nahin hum bhi yeh sab kya soch rahe hai? Hum Ajabde ki itni chinta kyon kar rahe hai? Kyon humare kaano mein baar baar unki dard bhari awaz gunj rahi hai? Kyon unki aankhon mein hume who dard spasht nazar aa jata hai? Kyon hum unn dard bhari aankhon ko dekhkar swayam pirhin ho jate hai? Hey ekling ji hum yeh sab kya soche jaa rahe hai? Who humari mitra hai. Isiliye humse unka kasht saha nahin jaata. Saadharan si to baat hai. Hume to aur bhi kayi saari mahatwapoorna bato par vichaar karna hai.

The three of them were so busy in their thoughts that they never noticed the palace was there. Yes even Pratap who was riding a horse, didn't notice it. He was just blindly following his friends.

"Akhir kaar hum sab surakshit wapas mahal laut aaye hai" Chakrapani said "aaj kitna kuch ho gaya na baojiraj?" He was happy that with all these evens the mission for which they were there was accomplished. Getting no response from Pratap he asked once again a little louder this time.

"Bao ji raj? Aap sun rahe hai hum kya kah rahe hai? Baojiraj? Baojiraj?"

"Hun? Haan haan hum sunn rahe hai. Chaliye mahal ke bhitar chalet hai."   Said Pratap who quickly guessed what his friend was trying to say not making him aware that he was lost in some other world.

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"Raoji hum chahte hai ki issi waqt aap rajya ki simaon par suraksha tukriyaan bhejde. Hume vishwas hai ki Mahmud Shah apni haar ka badla humse avashya lega. Yadi koi bhi sandehjanak baat humare sainikon ko dikhayi de to unhe hume turant khabar dene ke liye keh dijiye." Pratap was sure that Mahmud Shah will attack them.

"Baojiraj aap jaisa keh rahe hai waisa hi hoga. Parantu hume lagta hai ki abhi aapko aaram karna chahiye. Aapko aate hi humare paas nahi raajvaidya ji ke paas jana chahiye tha. Aap shighra hi jaiye" said Raoji.

"Hum abhi jaate hai. Khamba gadi." With that he left. Whenever he glanced at his injured hade which was tied with that torn pieace of dupatta by Ajabde, he could clearly see her concerned face, those eyes filled with guilt of making him injured as according to her she was the only one responsible for this. He didn't like that guilt because she clearly was not the one responsible for this. But he knew that she was certainly not.

OK guyz I finished. Today's update is really bad I know that. Sorry for that but pakka tomorrows update will be a better one. Hehehe. 😆Please like and comment.😃

 

Edited by Celana - 9 years ago

a very very fluid flowing piece of writing, loved the way you portrayed the inner thoughts of all three characters. . .girls in a dilemma, pratap concerned about ajab. .  its soo hard to think of such intricate things in real in such word for word depth, that when they are in writing they feel all the more awesome!! 
Edited by Vinder90 - 10 years ago

First of all I am so so sorry 4 dis. Mujhe maaf kr de. I am so late to read it.
*kaan pakad krti hun' chamma kijiye hume.

A feeling smethng i always feel.
After a filthy epi us SS ne meqa maan khush ditta.
Wanna do BHANGRA wr8 nw. Mindblowing update celu.
Sorry i didn read Fool POV. Read nly praja 1.

I am just imagining dm. Bth thnking of each other so much.
Haye so ROMANTIC. Mst fav part 2. Fighting 4 hr. Cleaning d blood. Dupatta tieing. Staring @ each other.
Uff <3 Googly pe googly.
Update soon.

Amazing cel👍🏼

Cel this was a pretty awesome update👏⭐️ loved how u brought forward the thought process of PrAja and Phool👏 looking forward to the next one😳

Originally posted by: Vinder90

a very very fluid flowing piece of writing, loved the way you portrayed the inner thoughts of all three characters. . .girls in a dilemma, pratap concerned about ajab. .  its soo hard to think of such intricate things in real in such word for word depth, that when they are in writing they feel all the more awesome!! 

very well expressed and written. .  this falls in line quite like a perfect jigsaw puzzle to show the inner thoughts with the current storyline!! 👏

Thank you so much that you liked it. I was not sure whether i would really be able to portray their inner feelings well coz my writing skill is not that good. I'm glad that you liked it.
Will update soon

Originally posted by: 03Kamya

First of all I am so so sorry 4 dis. Mujhe maaf kr de. I am so late to read it.
*kaan pakad krti hun' chamma kijiye hume.

Its okay kamu. and kaan pakadne ki zarurat nahin hai hehehe😉😆

Originally posted by: 03Kamya

A feeling smethng i always feel.
After a filthy epi us SS ne meqa maan khush ditta.
Wanna do BHANGRA wr8 nw. Mindblowing update celu.
Sorry i didn read Fool POV. Read nly praja 1.

I am just imagining dm. Bth thnking of each other so much.
Haye so ROMANTIC. Mst fav part 2. Fighting 4 hr. Cleaning d blood. Dupatta tieing. Staring @ each other.
Uff <3 Googly pe googly.
Update soon.

Thank you soo much that you liked it. I knew that most  of the PraJa lovers would skip that Phool part. Actually in the upcoming episodes there will be more things like this as both the 3 has an important role to play. But you can skip it as it you can still understand the story without reading the phool part 😃
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: _GC-AK-Fan_

Amazing cel👍🏼

Very nicely written👏

thanks khush
Will surely update soon