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Posted: 12 years ago
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It had been few months since Gopi started living in Modi Bhavan and thanks to Radha and her efforts things had gone really sore...Gopi used to visit the temple daily to pray to her Kanhaji and had become quite a friend with Gauri(Meera) unkowningly seeing a reflection of herself in her...but that day she saw Meera was being taken in some car from the temple by Radha..and when Gopi reached home...she saw the whole family glaring at her in extreme anger...Gopi wondered what the matter was and inquired politely and quite happily on what Meera was doing at Modi home..and Radha and Koki shrieked that Gopi was a traitor ...and just like Vidya...Gopi had kept Meera also hidden from them all along !!! Koki boomed that thanks to Radha ...the whole truth has come out.!!...

back story: Radha had found Meera in the river and left her near the temple where she had been keeping an eye on her for all these years...and now that she felt that there is a chance that Gopi may win back her position in the MM house..she decided to play her ace card and quietly brought Meera back and played heroine and saviour to Ahem/Koki and as a fringe benfit she cooked up her own story of how she had been following Gopi and found out about her secret meetings with Gauri and that Gopi was fully aware of who Meera was..

Gopi tried to the best of her abilities convincing that she was as happy nd thankful to god that Meera was alive!!! and wanted to desperately hug her..but Ahem's voice boomed loud and clear...stay off and stay out and never come back ever...and before she realised..she felt herself being dragged out of the house and thrown by Ahem doors shutting behind her...She did not know how long she would stood in front of the door crying out for Meera ...Finally after much insistence from Madhuben..she realised the futility of all this..and went to her MOthers place..The next day she went back to the temple and asked the Pandit where he found Meera..and when she found out..she thanked him with all her heart..she also thanked her kanhaji for making the pain and guilt that had been in her heart for years and years go away...her Meera was alive and nothing else mattered...Nothing else...And suddenly in the presence of her Kanhaji she got a deep sense of strength and a deeper will to fight for her rights...Without a second thought she went back to the place where she felt she belonged..right with her kids..every mothers right...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahem was compeltely stumped and infinitely happy..the happiness had returned to MM inspite of all of Gopi's ways he thought..he was deeply sad and let down by Gopi inside..the Gopi whom he had trusted blindly..he felt extremely grateful to Radha ..and that moment at the breakfast table Koki interrupted his thoughts by stating that a marriage confusion led to Ahem and Gopi getting married but this time the right gilr will get married to Ahema and that is the truly deserving Radha... for Radha had given back MM all the happiness.she had given them back their Meera...

Right at the time of announcement Gopi stood near the door shocked..Ahem glared at GOpi and asked why she is back ..to snatch Tolu Molu and hide them as well? Or to kill him? GOpi with tears pleaded that he should not lose his trust and that she had met the Pandtiji and even asked him how he found Meera...Ahem screamed that he is not insterested in Pandit or priest and all he knows is that she kept Vidya away for 8 years and now Meera..whom she had been secretly meeting in the temple...Gopi argued that if that were the case then why would she have left the city and Meera alone in a temple..but all arguments fell on vain ears...But deep inside Gopi felt the heartache which she felt earlier too that Ahem could that easily decide to re-marry and move on past her..while she has been stuck in time forever..on him and their relationship...She asked Koki if she too beleives in separating a mother form her kids..and said that it is fine if Ahem marries Radha or the next girl walking on the road..but she will live with her daughters no matter how harsh or hell it is for her..if she is made to go out..then she will file a police complaint that her husband is getting married a second time without a legal divorce and also she will file a custody case and as per legal rules till age of 12 children must stay with the mother and the case will definitely go in her favour (Gopi had certainly come a long way from the time of a dependant door mat..to this independant outspoken ..i will fight for my rights woman..)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Koki and Ahem left dumbstruck staring at this woman who definitely was not ready to be shoved around like how they used to all the time in the past...decided to let her stay given that they really did not want to lose the kids again...
Days passed..with Gopi oblivious to everyone except the children with whom she spent whatever time she could..given that Ahem hardly let her have any..
but that little time with Meera and Vidya healed her..healed her heart..so much that the pain of Ahem getting married to Radha..did not prick her as much as she thought it would...She still loved him deeply but had closed the door on any options of reconciling given his harsh and clear stand on their status..So without thinking heavily..she gave in and signed the divorce papers..and spent her free time reading books and trying to get a job in a local school...To her releief everyine in the house other than Radha/Koki and Ahem were extremely civil to her and in fact very sad that things did not fall in place for her...

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Ch 4:
Radha had been quite a happy dame..and prancing around like a queen and the person suffering more than Gopi was Rashi who had to do her each and every bidding..her nightmares of being a slave to Radha multiplied drastically..and she also started praying to Kanhaji that whatever happens..Radha must not become dil to MM house...Her pleading with Gopi did not help much in that direction but what she saw in the market when she went shopping with her Mom definitely made her realise that the wedding can be stopped after all..She had banged into a person in the crowded market who exactly looked like Umang!!! She and her mom played detective and found the fellow to be a sidekick to a local goon and realised he would do anything for money...and money they offered him in plenty and the plan started rolling...Radha was made to beleive that her Umang ji was till alive and living in very poor circumstances..and the false Umang cried bitterly playing devdas and asked how she could think of marrying someone else other than him...Radha no matter how clever she thought she was...was however outright dump as Rashi and Urmi proved successfully today...She walked royally into it and was wondering how to get out of the marriage from Ahem...The goon in the meantime called false Umang and gave him a file of Ahem Modi and told him that they are potentially staring at a fortune far greater than what they all had ever imagined..and gave that evil smile..
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The wedding of Radha and Ahem was a week away but a few days and secret meetings with his lady love Radha..the false Umang successfully managed to have Radha fully in his control..How dumb can she get he thought to himself..The goons decided to have Radha help them in kidnapping one of the children of the house adn use that route to their fortunes..and Umang successfully emotoinally blackmailed Radha onto the plan...The net was set...while on the way to the school meeting (Radha had convinced Ahem that for her to bond with the kids she should be allowed atleast one school pickup) Radha will distract Ahem and at that time..the goons will drag Meera in a Jeep and push away...well the plan was definitely easier said thandone..it was a realtively cool day but in the car , on the way back from school Radha was sweating in stress on how to divert Ahem given that she knew exactly what she will get into if she was ever caught..maybe 10 years in jail maybe 20...a shrill mobile ring snapped her out of her thoughts...and she saw it to be Umang..and she sprang into action..She made an excuse of wanting to go to one temple in the outskirts where she had specially prayed for Meera and Ahem..and once they reached there..Ahem wondered how Radha had managed to find a temple in this far off place right in the middle of nowhere and asked her to hurry up as they were getting late and he had left his mobile in the car...and right then from just about nowhere came 5 men all masked and before Ahem could react..Meera was being pulled into a Jeep..his Meera ..all thoughts flashed before him...when Meera fell in the river and when she finally returned a few days ago...NO this time he could NOT let anything happen to his little angel..he ran behind the jeep and hurtled himself forward with all his might to hold onto the metal at the back side..and found himself being dragged along the stony road for nearly a kilometer..before he heard the jeep put on the brakes..He was barely conscious when he found 4 burly men surrounding him and last thing he saw was a handkerchief on his nose and all went blank...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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good updates!!!
btw r u planing to update full story todat it self!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes I had completed it last week
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so y dont u post all the parts at a stretchtogether!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It had been several hours since the time..Ahem had left for the school but no word from him or Radha...His cell was ringing but no one was anwering...Jigar and Rashi had been out in the car searching for them but they too returned with absolutely no news..it was like he and Meera had vanished without a trace..And Gopi was worried..so so so worried..that she forgot about what the kids at home had eaten ...what she had to do for her new job as a school teacher..everything stopped..it was like time had stopped...two people ..her Ahem and her Meera missing..she still considered Ahem hers..in her heart..though in reality whatever may be the circumstance...as her mind raced wildly in negative directions..did anything wrong happen to them? accident?..she shut out those thoughts..and prayed to her Kanhaji to make everything all right...right when Radha walked in all shaken up...Koki and Gopi sprang up and rushed to her shouting in near chorus...where is Ahem where is Meera...after all the deep affection levels they shared for both these individuals was same...a common bond that both Gopi and Koki shared...Radha had been fed a story to tell and same she told : .Meera had been kidnapped by someone whom she could not see and Ahem went after her..the goons had knocked her out cold...and when she came to she was alone on the road and walked her way back..her phone was missing ..and she had no clue on where they had taken Ahem...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

so y dont u post all the parts at a stretchtogether!!

coz I am editing chapter wise for any errors..

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