Arshi TS: Gustakhiyaan *Completed* Note Pg :24**(03/03)

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

I just read this TS Anu and i became a fan of ur writing.
i loved it and the title GUSTAKHIYAAN was a nice one.
loved little Khushi, and her gradual growth into a beautiful woman not just in appearance but from her heart too.
Lavanya, what happened to her? well she was a Bit*h in a true sense. i hated her in this TS.
Shyam was a GINDA😆, i liked the twist.

Arnav and Khushi's gradual transition from their struggling phase to their life of prosperity and happiness was so well depicted by you. "umeed" the foundation name and the thought behind it was nice and too good.

Arnav also helped Khushi a lot by being her constant support and nurturing her into becoming more confidant in herself. but what did she become, its not mentioned here??? i would have liked to know that too.

well, overall, a adorable TS which i will cherish. 😊

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Thanx for sharing such a butiful story just lov it proud of kushi n her lov hats of ur witing

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@jas0308

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

check page 1 and 14 :)

love u :-*

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Anu,

Loved reading the TS! This is the first of your works I have read and I'm impressed by your story telling!! Arnav is a grocery store owner? 😆 & Khushi ogling at him from afar 😆

Loved Khushi's bahana to talk to him but she couldn't bring herself to do it!

Khushi's past was sad, especially both her parents weren't nice to her atleast sometimes one has the soft corner 😕

The incident where Khushi got lost and manhandled by two bast**ds, my heart was racing for her safety, thank god Arnav came and rescued her!! So it was no wonder Khushi begin to admire him and worship him!! But then alas, the age difference may have been too much for them to consider her a suitable bride for him and so it was La. Felt sad for Khushi that she couldn't tell the truth to Arnav & Anjali and left it as her fate.

Why did Arnav marry La knowing she was pregnant with somebody's child? man she turned out to be such a bi**h, she had the audacity to insult Arnav who was a self sufficient man, instead of succombing to grief, he pulled himself up and his sister!! He achieved more in life than any college graduate!!

It was Madhu bua finally bringing Arnav & Khushi together! But poor Arnav was so insecure by La's words that it affected his marriae with Khushi!! Bravo to Khushi to lift up his spirits and convincing him to join college!!

The end was surprising but I loved it!! Arnav opening schools for adults was a novel idea!!

If all those men are educated, certainly it will reduce lot of crimes!!

Lovely TS Anu and your story telling!! 👏

Cheers

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

~~Note~~

Hey guys,

Firstly, i wanna thank you all for such an overwhelming response. I'm truly humbled and thankful.

I don't really know what made me write this, but i'm just glad i did.

Many of you asked me about what happened to Lavanya? how she felt after seeing Arnav's progess? How is she? And all.

When i wrote this, Lavanya was never came to my mind after she left. In the 1st part it was Khushi's journey and in the next part, it was Arnav's.

I never thought about what happened to her. Besides, it wasn't even that Arnav became a star in one day.. It happened over 10 years, long enough time for anyone to move on. Maybe Lavanya forgot him and lived a happily ever after with Shyam or maybe she started to stalk Arnav 😆... But well who cares? ;)

What did Khushi do?

Anything and everything. But main thing she did was, She made her husband. She was his wife/teacher/supporter/helper/guide and everything else. She became his world. While he was her Sun. 😊

For all those who loved the title, a Special Jhappi 🤗. It was random, totally, but hey, with all the praise it got, i'm sure it did fit somewhere.😉

P.S: If there are anymore questions related to this TS, ask me anywhere on the thread/scrap/PM. I'd love to answer them.

P.P.S: now do i need to write a next part? I'm a very lazy person, and hence i try and find the easier way.😆

P.P.P.S: A new TS: Raabta

Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago