Arshi TS: Gustakhiyaan *Completed* Note Pg :24**(03/03) - Page 11

Sorry for being so late.. 😃
It was really a long update but I wish it could've been longer, Yeah greedy me :D
I liked the way it had real touch to it. Arnav did get marry with Lavanya and he even tried to make it work. Well someone's loss is someone's gain. Lavanya lost Arnav to gain Shyam and this led to Khushi gaining Arnav. 😉😳
Parting words of Lavanya had hurt him more than anything. It were these words which destroyed his confidence. But I loved Khushi's explanation and her way of making him understand.
I'm very happy that Arnav wasn't blind to her charms and beauty. It was just his own life experience which stopped him from reciprocating or giving any hope to her. But fate had its own plan.
Buaji truly loved Khushi and that's why she entrusted Arnav with Khushi knowing he will keep her safe and won't make her feel undesired.
And finally they got together, shared their dreams, insecurities and got over them.
Arnav paved way for others too by not only being a role model but also by opening these schools.
Oh btw that reverse ILUD was awesome. 😳
I loved these Gustaakhiyaanas 😳
PS: Your poem was beautiful

awesome i loved it

awww, this is so beautiful, the way she inspired him and believed in him to be what he truly wanted to be and could be, and how he was her strength and support when she needed it the most - what a wonderful picture of what true love should be like 😳

WOW!

I am speechless after reading this story dont know what to say. Love the khushi supported arnav in everyone she become strength to him. Arshi got married all thanks to buaji because of her arshi got married. Totally different concept loved it dear:-)

lovely...but wud love to read what LA feels now...and where is she with her Gunda husband Shyam...heheh

Loved it! Her cofession was touching, really!
👏
Khushi's constant support and Arnav's hard work payed off, finally!
Also it's really nice to see that instead of choosing a convenient and luxurious live-style, he chose to do something for the society!
Very nicely written dear!
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This is one of the nicest things I've ever read. Not just as IPKKND fanfiction, but otherwise too. Good job!

Lovely n heart touching story

This was an awsome update:)
I totally loved it:)
Superb update:)
Thanks alot for PM:)