Arshi TS: Gustakhiyaan *Completed* Note Pg :24**(03/03)

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Mhmmm but still i wud hav luv 2 c wht happn 2 Lav evn if it was 4 1 li9 sply hr baby Pari...wht dis she share with hr...

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Amazing TS...thanks to cheesemad for recommending this TS...I got to read such a wonderful work...please accept my buddy request...

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

I loved this story a lot especially the first part.

Khushi's daily attempt to confess her love to Arnav and going home taking the ingredients of jalebi, Arnav giving her toffee is hilarious.

There still are people in this world who prefer a boy instead of girl. Here Garima and Shashi were unhappy that they couldnot have a boy and instead of taking care of their only girl and keeping her happy they tortured her. How can a woman blame her own daughter and make her life a living hell? This part moved me.. Sad but true there would be such cases in real life too.

Lavanya divorced Arnav after the baby is born , the letter she wrote is pathetic.

Buaji is a sweetheart who accepted Khushi and gave her the love which she missed from her parents. Arnav took care of Buaji during her last days and married Khushi. He loved Khushi but Lavanya's letter made him extra cautious. Loved the talk between Khushi and Arnav.I applaud Khushi for encouraging Arnav to study and achieve the heights.

Wonderful story Anu ⭐️

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Pls write next up date...
I want know about la's current condition...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Anu...beautiful story...and totally different from anything i ever read...loved it so much...

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Loved Arnav's speech.

Only a man who is confident in his own skin can openly acknowledge his wife's contribution in him being who he is.

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

happy womans day dear..😊
hey i just want suggest u that u should write ff rather than ts...
sry it it's don't like u

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ARSHI_FAN11

@ARSHI_FAN11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

One of the most amazing piece of work that I have ever read ! Bravo 👏👏👏👏👏

Part 1 - I was an ardent Arshi lover and I loved the change in character of Arnav, grocery shop owner, now who would have thought of that??? but to me that gave it such a real feel... like yes this might just be a reality rather than fiction where a huge business tycoon falls for a middle class girl 😉 of course the huge age gap that was apparent and Khushi's past all were making me sad about the future of their story...

and then came part-2 and you blew me away! The way you weaved the story bringing in the situation for them to share their secrets except the biggest one of them all (being in love) leading to their marriage was too good, I was totally thrilled. Their confrontation of not only Arnav's insecurities but their mutual love was simply amazing 👏

But for me the best part was Arnav's success, his education, his 'Umeed" - I am a firm believer of learning all your life, be it from practical life experiences or education - there is no end to it and I am so glad that you portrayed the same with Arnav 👏👏👏👏

Finally Arshi became the better half to each other, brought huge success in their lives and now working on spreading this light in other's lives, brilliant work 👏👏👏