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aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

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WOW.. superb start yaar!!

khushi has a crush on arnav.. since he saved her!!
but couldnt tell him!!

🤣 arnav is owner of grocery shop.. lol..
lol... desh ka namak.. tata namak 🤣

ok.. everything aside

so beautifully written yaar!!!sacchi!!

well.. there's so such age difference between arshi.. but not only age difference.. there's so much difference in their character here!!

khushi.. shy, dont talk much... well her past is so heartbreaking that anyone would turn out like this..
her parents.. they were shamefull human.. differentiating between boy ang girl...and treating khushi as a burden.. it isnt khushi's fault that she is a girl!! infact they should be proud.. bloody greeders!!

arnav.. wow.. humble, soft spoken, helpful and sweet guy.. but couldnt study much due to burden of works.. he had to handle all these all alone.. i am so proud he did handle this.. but also expand his small business in other smalls!! and also take care of anjie!!

oh my.. arnav gonna marry lav.. oh my poor khushi! she must be so heart broken.. poor girl!!
but i know.. khushi arnav humesha... saath hai and rahenge!!

PS: ignore typos

PPS: love u behana :-*

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Uthra

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Posted: 12 years ago

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A huge age difference, which doesn't seem to matter at all. Does it, when the love is so adorable like khushi's?

So ultimately arnav and Lavanya haven't married, have they?

Tell me one thing, anu. What's the inspiration behind making arnav run a departmental store. Is it barun's interview?

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

me!

This is so adorable! I loved the first part and now I am desperately waiting for the second one😳

So she is 16 and he is 29, right? Pyaar mein umar se kya lena dena😳

Why isn't my grocery wale bhiayya, hot? LOL see what did your story do to me😆

So Khushi wants o tell him that she loves him, that is the present scenario and the 2.5 years before he was going to get married to Lavanya Kashyap who is a kind of b**ch.

Continue soon! :D

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 12 years ago

me :))

awesome TS

there is a lot age gap between them

arnav has grocery shop...lol😆 cant imagine him selling vegetables

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Khusis parents were so bad n buaji is so god n preeto also

this was hilarious

"Ji ek namak ka packet de dijiye."

"packet wala ya khula dein?"

"wo aata hai na Tata ka packet , jiski ad mein wo - desh ke namak ki baat karte hain, bas wo wala dijiye.

namak,,,,,,,,,,,,lol😆

then jalebi 😆😆😆

coming to flash back arnav saves her

her hero , her love

w8ing eagerly fr the next part

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow thats big age gap between the two
awww poor thing was heart broken
and she left before his wedding to la
hmmm seems arnie really is cute
and nice too
bless she fell for him
poor thing what parents she had
thank god for her bua and her friend preeto
cheers for pm
cant wait for next part