When did words start being such life changers? I guess since the time you began writing stuff. RAINA. Baby, I really have to dig up in my mind to say even a simple phrase to you, so that you can know what a masterpiece this SS is turning out to be. BUT THEN? I feel like a loser and realise that c'mon, never in this life am I getting those words to describe your breath-taking talent!
A beautiful framing to Swayam Shekhawat, which I am freaking sure, nobody could've pictured better than this. Bows down, to you, for that. AHHH! It's no less than a rollercoaster to visit your world through these words. Every bit, every line, has a new pinch to it, a new depth maybe, I might have even failed to understand so many critical issues you've touched in this second part, but then, I lack awesomeness, like you, you see. I NEVER KNEW MY BABY IS SO PERFECT! And now, seeing you come out with such flying colours, this is beautiful, I swear.
Each part updating is making this SS special to me. Guess why? Because you're just bringing the bests of best in it. MAN! Not a loophole I wish I could figure out. Literally, this can be portrayed in no better way, because this is flawless. I am not saying too much. But that's what my heart tells me to type. I am acting crazy, but you should know why, your words are so gorgeous that no person can remain in senses.
A couple so close to me moulded into words so amazingly, I need to thank you for that. I need to thank you for writing this. I absolutely feel this SS speaks the same volumes as I do about these characters. Swayam's image has been very lightly touched by you with that tint of lover boy cum strong person. I know, I am not describing it just fine because then you've done it all so perfectly, already.
Some places in the SS moved me so bad, that I had chotu se tears running down my eyes.
"Yes, they had had their moments, some intense ones, some where she was clueless as to how she felt about whereas he saw his feelings with regards to her with a blinding clarity. Despite her blatant scorn, her defiance, her brutal taunts; never once had his feelings deterred for her. He accepted her wholeheartedly for who she was; arrogant, narcissistic, cold, calculating and yet, unflinchingly loyal, trustworthy and in general a warm person with the people she cared about. And these were the things that he loved the most about her."
THIS. THIS MADE ME NUMB. You've used just the optimum amount of vocabulary, bringing out the simplicty in Swayam. The way he is. Always bent towards his princess, Sharon.
"And despite knowing how not in sync with her feelings she was, he had waited. However, the mere fact that even though she had wanted to tell everyone about their relationship status, she had come out and blurted the words he seemed to imagine in his nightmares. Did she even love him? Or had she just gotten habituated with his constant attention, care, concern and love?"
The magic in your SS just can't be recreated Rae. I see everything. Every feeling you must have gone through while touching these parts. EXCELLENT, it is. Brilliantly brought forward emotions. It's like you're that character, letting yourself out and cribbing over the miseries of life. I know words can do wonders, but such wonders, totally unexpected.
"She wasn't perfect, but he loved her nevertheless, he knew she was selfish and impulsive but only to the extent where she wanted something desperately. "
How can you even think of asking me if I am okay, right now, I know you aren't asking but don't try that aswell. Nobody can be okay after reading these tit bits. I am crying here. You've took in notice each and every aspect. DAMNIT! Outrageously fabulous. Looks like, this is the Chapter two of a novel that has been worldwide famous since quite a time now. *eyelashes*
Connections with the song lyrics, HEAVENLY. I can estimate you seeing these things yourself. And that's something huge. You get it? GENIUS KAHIN KI! Where had you been all this while? As they say, talents are usually hidden, haina? BUT MANNN! You do not have any talent. It comes naturally from within you. And that makes it even more easier to dissolve into your words.
"He knew they were as different as night and day, and somehow, this difference would never let them be together. It just wasn't mean to be, no matter how he wished for it to. No matter how much he wanted them to just talk it out; he knew somehow it wouldn't be the same this time. Too much had happened for them to just forget everything and put it in the past. He knew he was going to love her until he lived and breathed, but how was he to know if she would too? "
It might be kiddish but I feel like quoting the entire post, haha, but this bit again striked me so hard! I am such an idiot to not ask you write this pehle.
If a novel had to be write on Swayam Sharon, these two parts of each characters should just be copied word to word there. Everything about them is crystal clear here and that's exactly how things are supposed to be. A beautiful Swayam Sharon frame in literature. I hope it might not be gayish of me to hug you or kiss you for this. THANK YOUUU!
"He wiped his eyes and willed himself to be stronger; strong enough to not break down when he saw her icy faade the next day, strong enough to protect his fragile heart along with hers; strong enough to just be."
Strong enough to just be. I am a BIG novel freak and you should know that. And I still find this ending one of the finest closings to anything. There's so much to learn from you now. I love these last words. More than love, I would say. And they're going to remain scribbed on my head and heart, like always.
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