ArHi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| #4, Last Part-pg.16 *Complete!* - Page 17

Thank you so much for this beautiful story..

 It had been tough- agonising at times, depressing at others, unbearable and unfair.

But look at what they had gained in return.

 Trust. Faith. Loyalty. Honesty. Courage.

Love.

loved the ending beautifully done i loved the depth of the characters all their flaws and their insecurities all the hate their anger loved arna and anjali conversation loved the growing up of anajli in your ff she never really got that in the show loved khushi and arnav conversation the bond their guilt and then their joy at the ending of this storm name snake loved how the leaned into each other amazing update thanks for the pm.

I just read the final parts now, must say that this was a well articulated, well conceived story. Enjoyed every bit of it!

I don't know why, but I took long time to come back to read the last chapter.. it's nice..

I'll be honest and say it didn't meet the expectations set by you so far as the overall concept/ story/ writing style are excellent.. but apart from the last chapter I loved it..

I liked how you thought about Shishi and Anjali's meeting.. I think it was very important.. same person trying to kill both of them, him having seen her earlier with Shyam, his daughter is married to her brother, there are so many things for both of them which were affected by Shyam, so that was very well imagined..

hope you have an all happy wappy epilogue 😆

Read through the whole FF over the last few days. Very well written. My favorite scene of the FF was when Khushi asked what Arnav had wanted to tell her on the day of Akash-Payal's wedding if Shyam had not created all the misunderstandings. I can't tell you how much I loved that scene. In the show, that scene where Arnav was going to talk to Khushi was filled with so much anticipation and romance that I can still feel the disappointment that it never was done. But I am glad that you addressed it in the FF even if it was done later. It was awesome!

Edited by dreamgirlrus23 - 9 years ago

just finished reading ..brilliant story.. beautifully written. luvd it.

After getting the link for the story from Angelteen's recommended ffs list, has been reading it almost non stop for last three days.

A ff written with so much depth and analysation of characters and their perspectives, making me wish the scriptwriters had taken a leaf out of how you treated the story. The guilt and repentance of Arnav and his discovery of his love for her for so long, the way Khushi takes time to forgive Arnav and come to realisation of her love, the analysis of why Anjali was blinded of Shyam for so long and how she emerges out from the shell created by her past and move forward and the way all supporting characters were treated are so praiseworthy.

Bow to talent and accolades for it. Thank you for sharing it with us readers, even with the looming threat of plagiarism and still not removing the ff from IF. Because of that risk you took, I was able to read this amazing ff now. Please keep writing :-)

Just wanna tell you that you and your story are awesome. Unfortunately I recently found your story and couldn't leave a omment under each one of the chapters since it wasn't activated anymore. The least I could do was to push the like and I would do it more than once if it was possible.