unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 21

part-12

ranveer,tia ne to bas ashi ki madat karne ki try kar rahin thi😭par usne😭-tia was really crying badly

ashi left d room disappointed nd she was really angry at tia nd ranveer😡😡

ranveer went 2 tia nd hugged her tightly-tia,plz dun cry,sayad hum logone ashi ko hurt kar diya hai,unwillingly.nd iismain to aapki koi galti nahin hai,aap to acche dil se bas unki madat kar rahin thi😳😳nd woh thodisi naraaz hai hum par,par jyada der nahin rahegi,i am sure,ashi jo bhi kahen,she loves u a loooot😳usse bas maza aati hai aapko tang karke😳aapko yaad nahin woh time jab aapko bahut bukhar tha😳tab humne dekha tha ashi ko,she was crying.d great anvesha banerji ray was crying,even she gave u blood😳aap ko yaad hai na tia??😳

tia wiped her tear-haan,tia ko patta hai😳woh....woh punk jo bhi kahen woh tia se bahut pyar karti hai,tia ko maloom hai aur tia bhi loves her😳bas woh punk thodisi wacked out haiaur baki sab theek hai😳

nd both laughed😳

ranveer-hum jake ashi ko dekhte hai.k??😳

tia-okay😊

ranveer lightly kissed her fourhead 😳nd left

ashiiiiii-ranveer knocked her room

darwaja khula hai thakur😡-ashi gave an angry reply-agar tum andhe nahin hai to aandar aajao😡

ashi,woh hum aapse kuch baat karna chahte the

shoot thakur,par one condition,tum mujhe tia ke baare main kuch nahin bataogi,woh galat nahin thi,nd other stuffs 2 pretend her😡

nahin ashi,aap hume galat samajh rahin hai-ranveer sat beside ashi -hume aapse yuvi ke baare main kuch baat karni thi

ashi was silent

ranveer 2

after 2 mins pause ashi spoke first-phir to main tumse koi baat nahin karoongi ranveer,kyunki ranveer kehne ke liye kya bacha hai??dat stupid psycho is engadged,i am married nd harsh...

but ranveer inturrupted ashi-par ashi,aap aur neal toh.....

mujhe patta hai thakur,tum kya kehna cha rahen ho,par.its just no use.its 2 late ranveer,its just 2222 late.

she got up nd gave ranveer a sad kinda smile-neways,mujhe jana hai,harsh ko skool se lana padega nd ghar pe bhi kuch kaam hai.bye.

ashi almost reached d door leaving ranveer alone sad in d room,but she turned back again-aur thakur,us timbo se kehna main usse bilkul bhi naraaz nahin hoon.she is my sis after all,though unfortunately😳

tia was standing outside d door. after hearing this,she cud not stop herself.

she came running nd hugged ashi tight-ashi,tia is sorry😭

ashi pretending 2 be angry-timboooo,tum choop ke meri aur thakur ki personal convo sun rahin thi??😡

tia(crying)-ashi,why ashi,why??tum aapone aapko aise kyun punish kar rahen ho ashi??aaj se saat saal pehle jo bhi hua dat was not ur fault.nd not of yuvis too.then??😭

ashi(wiping tias tear nd her)-tia,hum jo chahte hai na zindagise hume nahin milta,par jo milta hai usse hi khush rehna parta hai.its called d life.😭

tia(still sobbing)-par ashi,woh to biti hue batten hai aur aaj.....

ashi puting her fingers on tias lip-ssshhhhhh timbo.plz,no more discussion ki wat happened 7 years back,k??

okay gies,enuff of dis bhasan nd emotional moments.i am going.bye.-ashi waved them goodbye nd left.

ranveer nd tia standing 2gether watching ashi,she never let her pain out of her heart nd never show her emotion in front of neone.no one knows dat she always considered herself guilty 4 d incident happened 7 years back except ranveer nd tia.

tia(crying)-ranveer,tia yeh aur bear nahin kar sakti hai.iitna pain,oh tias god,yeh kaisa imtehan hai ranveer??jo god ashi se le rahan hai........why she cant hv yuvi back??she really loves him.i mean,tum tia ke saccha pyar the nd tia had u so easily,but why this is happening wid ashi...ranveer,why??😭

ranveer(wiping tias tear)-tia,saccha pyar iitne asanise nahin milta hai.aap aur hum ek ho gaye humare kismat main tha.par saccha pyar ko jeet lena parta hai.nd i am sure,ashi will pass out this exam wid flying colours.aap fikar maat kijiye.

nd he hugged her😳

he knew dis wud give tia a comfort 😳

but his heart was crying 4 ashi nd yuvi,his 2 best of frndz,who r so much in love.but unfortunately separate.is this called-

UNLUCKY IN LOVE????????

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akhir hua kya tha 7 saal pehle?

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awesome rocking, n emotional part Saya Di 👏

akhir hua kya tha 7 saal pehle?

contineu soonn

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awesome part
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t***x a ton dear,but it will reveal soon😉😉btw abha,why dun u go nd update ur fic??😉😉

reveal the secret{what happened} soon... 😛 😉 😛

awesome part saya👏ur fic rocks maine teri fic ki bahaut badi fan hoon😳

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cont soon😉

part-13

yuvi was busy in looking ashis pic😳

ashiiiiiiiiiii-his eyes were full of love😳

he was thinking of all good old past days😳

their fights,thier undying love 4 eachother,their first kiss,propose,hug everything😳

nd dat day,yuvi wud never 4get dat day.d day he went london leaving ashi,maurya,his frndz 4 ever nd ever😕

yuvi-it was meera dev

yuvi was embararsed,he was abt 2 hide ashis pic,but meera dev saw her son is trying 2 hide sumthing😉

kya chupa rahen ho yuvi??nd woh bhi mujhse??😡😉dikhao mujhe dikhao😉

nothing mom.nothing.😕

jhoot??woh bhi mujhse??😡

no mom,seriously.trust me.😕

nd she came nd pulled ashis pic 4m his hand,nd she was shocked seeing ashis pic

she was so shocked dat she sat on yuvis bed-beta,yeh sab kya hai??tum ashi ki pic lekar.......par why??

yuvi was silent totally.

nd meera dev understood everything 4m his silence .

she was happy nd sad 2gether.

she was happy coz she always wanted ashi as yuvis wife,noone else😳😳

but on other side she was sad coz she was thinking wat will tania do??😕

yuvi-her voice was soft.

she placed a hand on her sons shoulder😳-u love her na??

yuvi was silent but meera saw a true lovers concern nd love in his eye😳

tum ashise baat karo beta-meera advised yuvi

mom??wat r u saying..........she is married...........nd she has a son...how cud i??-yuvi was clueless

no beta,tum usse ek baar baat karke clear ho jao,i mean cumon beta,tum kuch hi dino main tania se shadi karna ja rahin ho,rite??nd tumhe uski sath zindagi bhar rehna parega.

nd meera saw sadness in yuvis face after hearing tanias name😕

she continued-look beta,shadi pyar aur biswas ka bandhan hota hai nd nd agar usmain pyar aur biswas hi nahin rahan to yeh shadi kaisa??tum ashise ek baar baat to karlo,i know its not easy beta,but still.........u go nd talk 2 her.i mean aise chup tumhe happiness kabhi nahin milegimaybe she will say no,but tum baki zindagi yeh to soch sakoge ki haan i atleast talked 2 her😳i hope,u got my point yuvi😳

yuvi-yes mom,fine.i will.

meera-yes,u will nd u will go now😉

yuvi(shocked)-wat??no mom

meera-yes,u will nd now.

yuvi-par mom....tania??

meera-i will manage her😉

yuvi-okay,fine.bye mom😳😃

meera-bye beta😳

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as soon as yuvi parked his car nd went 2wards ashis house he heard a shout-no,no,noooooooooooooooo.cheating,cheating.

it was harshs voice.

yuvi went inside smiling lovingly.

nd he saw harsh was running in d garden😆

nd he was also making ashi run after him😆

nd ofcourse ashi-d great tennis player was unable 2 catch her lil son😆

yuvi smiled seeing this😃

he loves this boy😳

he is so sweet😳

suddenly a thought came in his mind-kash harsh mera aur ashi ka...................

but iske aage yuviko aur kuch sochne ka maukahi nahin mila,coz harsh already saw him nd came running 2 him-yuvi uncle,yuvi uncle😳

yuvi picked him up-hey big boy,so wats going on??😳

ashi came behind harsh wid a smile-hey yuvi😳

hi ashi😛

tum yahan??😕

woh mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi

bolo na😊

no,i mean private baaten thi........

harsh was listening their conversation till now he shouted-

nooo,its not happening,abhi main aur mom yahan pe khel rahen hai.....

yuvi was shocked-khel rahen ho??

ashi(a lil embarrassed)-arre,woh bas aisehi.hum dono bas thoda tennis khel rahen the.tum aao na.andaar aao na😛

harsh(holding yuvis waist)-aur main jeet rahan tha,par mumma cheating kar rahin thi😡

ashi(annoyed)-harshhhhhhhhhhhhhh😡

yuvi-ashi,maan lo na u were chating.dun lie,k??😉😆

ashi-hey bhaggoo,yeh main kahan phas gayee😕yuvi,tumhe kuch batana tha na??😡

yuvi(nervous)-haan,woh.........

ashi-to meherbani karke andaar aao.harsh..aajao.

harsh-mumma,my legs r painning😉😉aap pleej mujhe goad main uthake le jao na😳😳

ashi-maine tumhe tabhi kahan tha not 2 run so much,but tumne suna nahin😡aur aab..............

yuvi-cumon ashi,baccho ko aise thodi na daante hai😉😳cum harsh😳😳

harsh-😛yes uncle😊

nd yuvi picked him up in his protective arms😳

nd both ashi,yuvi nd harsh went inside like a small but happy family😳

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