Abla nari on res 😳
Hope i am not in betweenUnresHaye snowfallIts a dream for me to see once in my lifetimeall white and cold...If magic existed for real, this was it..true, my dearwo shirt abhi bhi wahi hai?? hihi... dekho aur dekho... hihihi😳Jay and ye Abhinav Krishna wala funda bohot seedhe look denewala twisted funda lagtha hai. I am not a fool to think its as simple as it lookslolipop banana shuru kardo my Geniewo school wala part was too cute re. and hospital scene so warm.I loved the khamoshi wala support.love you...Silly talks me kuch kuch puch rahe hai Sakshi ke bare me. abhi bhi bohot kuch jaana haiAisha ko jhatka hi mila. that precap made me love you moreThe memory of her dad's last time was indeed painful. How much did that man suffer?hit by number of bullets, branded traiter and even burnt into flames in a hospital car park!!No wonder Arjun is taking the event too personal just like Sakshiwaiting for more n moreeven I am greedy u seeThis is my first comment to any updates after my superb holidays and loads of food that I am already missing
Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves
resss😎
unres!Avniii Avniii Avniii🤗Acha, tell me one thing, how do you manage to keep me hooked until I see the stars at the end and realise that it's all over?And you said it was long 🤣Like. Honestly.Why couldn't you just go on and on and onnn..I was beginning to enjoy the snowww (even though its so summery here!) when you stopped!I was like thisFirst of all, that scene by the window when Sakshi was thinking about her father...and those memories, they just took me to another world. Especially what you said about the snow -"If magic existed for real, this was it..."Snow is magic 😳I think your writing made it even more beautiful😳Eesh! I am getting hugely inspired by none other than you, your Highness.. ❤️Oh yes! Snow is magical.. Of the few things that I miss, snow is definitely one of them.. 😛And then the school scene where they meet I was so reminded of my school and the prayers!Btw every time they met I was likeThis cracked me up so bad 🤣"Aap barf mein bhi jog pe jaate hain?", she casted a glance at his casual attire and raised a brow.LOOOLLL barf mein jogging...although that would be quite an eye pleasing sight☺️ Hayeee mujhe wahan jaana haiiiHmmm wonder what Sakshi is planning now...🤔I feel the same about hospitals as Sakshi but then she has a painful memory associated with it...that was sadLOOL Arjun had a break and where did he decide to be? By her side. SighhhYeah you have awakened the hopeless romantic in me again 😳I realise I am typing an essay out of the comment but I am sure you wont mind😆😆😆Achaaa so, that scene by the temple was just...Even silences can speak volumes..sighhh. He was there for her when she needed someone the most *dreamy eyes*Arjun pursed his lips and nodded, "I'm glad you didn't mind me coming here. I just wanted to make sure that he was fine." That you were fine, a voice corrected him..Yess yesss just what I thought lol 😆You're soo falling for her ACP Rawte😉This part was just beyond beautifully written Avniii😃Then the scene at the hospital mess just made me hungry😆 Even though I have just had dinner lolIt was such a simple moment and yet I think your words made it so much more beautiful ❤️Am I making sense here?😆The last bit...so he wants to get Sakshi back? But the question still remains as to what assignment she is on! You're not gonna reveal that until later are you😆Anyhooo waiting to read moreee!Thank youu for the PM and hope you update that TS soon😉Am being greedy don't mind meee🤣Thanks soo much for giving a "long" update (it wasn't long ..not when it's your writing😆)I wanna go back to Dhanaulti! *pouts*Update sooon and love youu🤗
Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
sakshi trying to get to her normal life but will take time and so will people around her it is said na time heals everything
both arjun and sakshi can't help but to think abt eachother and have that strange feeling that r they strangers or r connected somewhere some how
arjun and sakshi convo at school gave arjun some thing to think may be she has more then what meets his eyes
arjun had started feeling for her may be it is just concern but then it is strong enough for him to go to hospital so that he could be there for her and how so ever sakshi may believe that she is strong enough and don't want anyone's support but then u always need some one who can be there for u even silent support is also more then enough
aisha back and getting shocker seeing these two together
precap looks good will sakshi realize that who he is after knowing his first name
hi avani di🤗...
what a magic u create! haye ! beautiful snowfall all i can imagine ...but really u write each word with a magical touch that i just land into the scene👏...sakshi watching the snowfall and her memories😊😊...and yes ! sakshi is back 😃...ACP is always on !😉😉...always om right time at right place 😉...i'm going to be insane ! just imagine arjun n sakshi talikng😛😉...in snowy atmoshphere 😛..n he went to meet sakshi and their conversation in front of the godess idol😊 loved it !arjun ke silent gestures n sakshi's thanks ...❤️...loving it !and now dinner ! 😉...chalo baat yahan toh pahuchi😆...ayesha 😆...sakshi's past work clearly shows how effiecient she is👏👏👏...waiting for Sakshi S...back in action😃...thanks a lot for all the brave awesome female characters u create be it ...sakshi, riya, Ro, Reva...n Priya ...they r my insipiration😃😃...it gave me immense strength...thank u🤗 ...precap is super interesting !!!!!BTW what about SYHTPH ??...update soon di🤗p.s - the " kuch kuch hota hai" wala AVI ...seriously kuch kuch hota hai dekh kar :P😆😉
Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Awesome updateThanks for the pm
Originally posted by: Shivi1997
Its awsm
grt writing haan
aww she is missing her dad..that pain is so unbearable..i bet... :(
arjun n sakshi ke bich ackward toh khatm hue..
Ab arjun ko kaun bachaye aisha or shree se..
I love it
nice update
update soon
Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves
Just wanted to say that I unreserveddd my comment but I think you'll notice it anyway.
It's super long🤣
Originally posted by: Devangana
Wonderful update. Sakshi and Arjun's feelings were so well portrayed. Unknowingly Arjun has started becoming a moral support for Sakshi and she also looks forward and welcomes it. Arjun still feels responsible for what happened but now it is more than just guilt perhaps he himself does not realize it. Sakshi's telling him that there has to be a loophole somewhere might just be the small push Arjun needs to crack the case. Update soon please.
Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
superb
just amazing
wonderful update
eagerly w8ng 4 next
Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
mindblowing update yaar.plz send me pm.update this story soon
Wonderful update
Beautifully written
A new warm relationship probably friendship blooming between Arjun and Saakshi
Aisha sees Saakshi and Arjun together. How will she react when she comes to know about the truth
Will Saakshi join the newspaper back?
Eager to know
Continue Soon
Originally posted by: shreya09
Aisha is back 😃 😃 i was waiting for her 😳 especially after seeing her her bonding with Arjun.
very nice update it was.A warm soothing & comfortable friendship is forming between Arjun & Sakshi.the Dinner scene was really sweet. i was imagining Arjun scrutinizing the food with full concentration. and Sakshi's laugh noticing him doing it. it made my day. 😊very well written 👍🏼waiting for more 😳
Originally posted by: riyaishita
awesommm👏
arakshi tymings r mind blowing!!!!her mamaji is gud nw...thnkgodi must say ur writing along with d description of nature in dis whole story is unbeatable...keep it up...all d best!!!!thnks fr pms...waiting fr further reading...
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