FS: Cherish Whatever You Have (chapter 3)

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Prologue





"Uff.. what to do? I am so late on my first day. Please please please God, let me just pass this once without any scolding. I promise to never be late for anything. I swear. Just this once please." Prayed a 22-years-old girl, wearing yellow raincoat as she tighten her grip of handles looking towards sky, totally forgetting that she is on road. 


Soon she realized as she looked front hastily but it was late as she felt her bicycle skidding due to mud and she lost her balance and....

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"I am too much of a burden on this world. Why was I bring in this world? Just to teach me the true meaning of heartbreak and loneliness. First my family, then sister like bestie, then Maa Dad and now after all this when I tried to live by giving happiness to others, still I am not allowed to live. Why? What have I ever done? Argghh!! Why me? Why?" A 28- years old man shouted his lungs out while rain intensely pour on him hiding his grief-filled scream by loud sound of rain and thunder.


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"Ahhh!!" Two loud scream echoed before a loud *THUD!!* sound.



The intense war-like rain and thunder suddenly slowed to slight drizzling and two soul met for the first time to find a new meaning of life and to learn how to cherish it.




Two completely different people, with different backgrounds, different status and even different nature and with totally different outlook for life met in a circumstances which are totally opposite. Will they really be able to cherish whatever they have or will they learn something opposite of their perspective?





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Wow... Nice start & interesting concept. Will be eagerly waiting to explore more of it. Please do continue soon.

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INDEX


Prologue: page 1

I. His Past: page 1


II. Broken And Lonely: Link


III. Her Present: Link


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I.  HIS PAST






Arjun Suryakant Rawte had became an orphan when he was 3 years old, later at age 5 he met his first friend out of his orphanage in the premises of her school where he went to sell the handicraft gifts made by orphanage children.


Jyoti initiated to be friends and suggested to teach him, "Junu, do you know today my teacher told us a story about 'a good boy who become teacher at 6' that boy would go and teach little kids who are not able to go to school. So from today I will also teach you and then you will be happy and I will also become a teacher." A six-year-old girl said passing a pencil and notebook to Arjun.



At the age of 8, she took Arjun to meet her parents who helped him join the same school as her but after two years he lost his bestfriend Jyoti due to an accident giving him a huge shock and enhanced his belief of him being a bad omen for his closed ones and he stopped going to school and isolated himself from everyone. He fell into depression while his continuous absense lead his teacher to contact his guardians, Jyoti's parents. They went to orphanage and get to know about his state. Seeing him reminded them of their only daughter, so they adopted him as their son as they knew their daughter will be happy to see them together, also it will be helpful in pulling the child out of his depression with love, comfort and support.


Soon they got the desired outcome and with time Arjun became a normal 10-years old boy who still remembered his bestfriend and calls her as his deceased sister whom he will love forever. But his happiness didn't last for long and when he was only 15 years old, he got another shock of his life that his foster father Mr Akshay Rai died in a car accident which was planned by his rival and within two years his mother left him too.



He was orphaned again at the age of 17 and this time he was left with a huge sum of money of his foster family, their house and some properties. He thought to just kill himself once and for all and get rid of this pathetic life. But... that night. That night after lying for hours, finally his eyes closed and he slept uncomfortably. He was frowning in his sleep as he fell disturbed.



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"Ajju.. Ajju my sweety, please look after yourself carefully. You should eat healthy." He saw his mother fed him a piece of apple while patting his head lovingly.


"Arjun, my intelligent boy you should work hard to become a good human and always help the needy to make good use of your life." His father said patting his back proudly.


"Junu.. it's easy buddy. Adding all your toys and subtracting broken toys. Look, just like you would happily remember all our playtime and happy memories na and forget all your bad experiences to live a good life." A 9 year old, Jyoti tried to make him understand how to do addition and subtraction.


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That night, Arjun saw them in his dream and next day his resolution of ending his life changed into living a healthy and happy life and become a good person.


He had made it his motive to give importance to the life of Jyoti and parents. And tried to do everything possible to bring happiness to those lonely and unkept orphans just like what his foster family would have done if they were alive.



With the money left by his family he studied and did a few part time jobs to fulfill the requirements of the  orphanages which were not in a good shape and were in need of money to nurture kids with necessities. Soon after his graduations, Arjun went on studying business and started assisting the manager of a toy factory.


Soon he started a small toy-shop with his designed and invented toys and new styled stationaries for kids. He met alot of problems like failure, taunts for being a rookie, emotional pressure from the relatives of his foster family, threats and blackmailing to sell his designs under other's name but he stood firm and maintained his right stance. Within 4 years of work, he established a corporation named Jyoti Corp and brought up the foundation named as Nurture.




Now he is 28 years old and had somewhat gathered himself, became an optimistic person and find happiness in nurturing orphans. He had started cherishing his life as he had people to care for, who depends on him and he is supports and comfort of many people and even taught them to cherish what they have rather than crying over what they lost.





But today....

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Nice start dear 😍

Amazing concept

Continue soon 🤗

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Very good chapter....I'm loving it to the core. Arjun has been facing so many difficult situations from his early childhood, and it would be so much depressing for anyone to not being able to do something except watching helplessly & losing all his near & dear ones, one after another or, even blaming & considering himself as a curse for everyone who'll be around him. But, even after all these tragic disasters happening around him repeatedly & breaking his heart again n again, he didn’t lose hope just for the happiness of his late foster family. Rather, with his hard work & sheer determination gradually he started coping with all those unfavorable situations as well as started helping & spreading light happiness among other orphaned children. This was somehow able to give him some sort of satisfaction, peace, happiness & motivation to go on with his lonely & tragic life rather than ending it at once and for all. 

But, suddenly what happened in his life now? One more tragedy? Now, what/whom he is going to lose again?

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Nice concept and wonderful start continue soon dear 

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Nice...

Such a n emotional turmoil arjun has to went through..

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II.   BROKEN AND LONELY



A lone figure, wearing a dark jeans and casual grey shirt, is walking numbly on the road while rain is heavily pouring on him. His clothes are soaked but it doesn't effect him. 

Nobody would be able to recognise him due to his current state, he looks so broken as if he lost the last reason for which he was living until now. People passing around him are whispering among themselves 'Who this beggar is? He must be mentally imbalanced. Oh! I think his girlfriend broke up with him or worst his wife cheated on him. Poor man, looks like he lost someone very close to him.'

They are talking among themselves as they don't know him but the truth is mostly every passer-by might knew him or atleast knew his name for that matter. But if anyone told them that this man is none other than the same man who owned the title Business King and is among the winners of Asia 's Best Young Entrepreneur of the Year awards for last five years.



He is, Arjun Suryakant Rawte, the owner and the president of the 'Jyoti Corporate', the founder of 'Nurture foundation' which assist and associates many orphanages, schools with stationary and kids toy shop. He is alone in this world so he tried to help the lonely kids and immerse himself in their happiness but looks like he shouldn't be happy or should not have existed in this world where he have no one to rely and no one to support even today.



The road is not crowded due to heavy rainfall. Only few vehicles were passing by. Some drivers were throwing weird glances towards him while few were shouting at him "Are you mad?" "Oh insane!! Go, die somewhere else." Two or three drivers even asked him "Hey, are you looking for lift?" "Oh bro! Should I drop you somewhere?"



But nothing reached his ears, as if he is deaf or lost somewhere else. And he was lost. Lost in the happenings of the last few hours, where he got to know the cruelty of life as he saw the death of his last hope, his reason to be alive. His life.



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Few hours ago


It was around 9 in the morning, inside a formal yet cosy five star restaurant known as Meet & Treat, there almost every tables were empty except three.


On one such table sat five official persons, wearing formal dresses. Anyone can say, they were having one of their early morning conference related to some deal and that's what happening here.

 

"Sir, this consignment will brought a huge benefit to our company as well as it will be helpful for our US expansion." Shreya Sharma, the project manager explained the profit of the deal to her boss.


Her boss as usual just gave a curt nod in reply. Shreya continued her business talks while Mr. Smith also added his preferences, shares and about their expected benefits.


Soon after one hour of the talk about their deal and compromises. Finally gesturing at Brian Sandy the PA, Shreya exclaimed meekly "Sir, what do you think about this deal?"


Curiously, Brian also looked towards his boss as he was quiet more than usual today in the entire meeting. No interruption in between the presentation, no comments on anything about the deal, it's very unusual thing to expect from his boss. 



Their boss stood up from his chair so suddenly that Brian, Shreya alongwith Mr. Smith and his secretary got startled.

Then he exclaimed in his usual slow yet firm voice "Okay then, nice meeting you Mr. Smith. Hoping to see the progress of this deal soon. Brian complete the legal document of our collaboration and finish the needed settlement with Mr. Smith. Excuse me, I have to go."

"And one more thing Shreya about yesterday's interview, make sure to send the acceptance letter to that candidate with part-time experience at Nurture Orphanage."




Saying so he walked out of the restaurant with urgency in his steps as he don't want anyone to know anything about him. As he has started feeling suffocated and his left shoulder, arms and ribs are paining badly while he is feeling his heart drumming loudly. Until now he was able to sit composed without letting anyone know about his real condition but with passing seconds the pain is increasing, so he left before anybody could get a clue about his health.



He sat in his car and start driving to reach the only person who know him and his health very well. He reached at the entrance of Emerald Clinic, his only friend come Doctor Sameer Rathore's clinic.


Opening the door of the car even before he could stand properly, he felt tremors ran down his body. He fall down on the road as his heart slowed it's pace suddenly which in turn didn't let his lungs inhale right amount of oxygen. And before he could let a word out, he lost his consciousness and felt darkness engulfed him.



One hour later, he opened his eyes feeling slight tinkling pain in his left shoulder and arm. He looked around him and found himself at the bed of his friend's clinic with IV tube attached to his hand. He knew this time, something major has happened to him. He had this feeling as if it's once and for all. Soon Sameer entered and found him awake.



"How are you feeling Arjun?" Sameer asked "You scared me to death, you know? One of my patient came to me and told someone is lying outside unconscious, when I saw its you, I couldn't believe my eyes."



"Sam, sorry to scare you." Arjun replied.


"Anyways, tell me what the hell were you doing to yourself? What is going on, haan!?" Sameer asked loudly.


"What are you talking Sam? I just felt an unbearable pain in my left arm and shoulder and felt palpitation and high heart rate. I was in the meeting and had all these under controll but within half an hour, I lost consciousness. I don't know why did I feel that?" He replied confused.


"Since when did you have these problem? Do you have to have this late for diagnosis and treatment? Do you even care.." Sameer asked seriously looking concerned for his friend.


"Sam, You are talking as if I had only few days left in this world or something. Come on, out with the truth. I just had slight pain in chest and shoulder since three months, so just took casual pain killers and they were helpful until recently. So tell me what's the problem, huh!?"


"Rawte, are you out of your mind? You just took pain killers without doctor's prescription and check-up. Now you are in this situation it's very much your fault. You would have been fine if you got checkup three months ago but now I am just wishing it is not too late." Sameer replies, worriedly put his palm on his forehead.


"What do you mean by not too late? What has happened to me? Come on Sam, say it already." Arjun asked anxiously.


Sameer looked down, before saying "Relax, you will be fine. I will see to it. Just don't stress. I had called a specialist Dr. Richardson for your treatment, he will be arriving soon."


Arjun asked loudly "Shut up and speak up what happened to me, Sam? Tell me already, Sam. Sameer speak!!"



"Congenital Heart Defect!"



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Present


"Congenital heart defect, a hole in between the wall of the two upper chamber of heart." The words Sameer said still echoes in his mind with same vigor.






"I am too much of a burden on this world. Why was I bring in this world? Just to teach me the true meaning of heartbreak and loneliness. First my birth parents, then sister like bestie Jyoti, then Maa Dad and now after all this when I tried to live by giving happiness to others, still I am not allowed to live. Why? What have I ever done? Argghh!! Why me? Why? Why didn't you kill me before them." He shouted his lungs out while rain intensely pour on him hiding his grief-filled scream by loud sound of rain and thunder.





"AAHH!!"


"AAHH!!"



Suddenly two shouts echoed in the now-silenced road followed by loud *Thud*.





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To be continue..

Edited by etfr - 3 months ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Very emotional & interesting start

Well Arjun health is really getting worse & he didn't even tried to have final check up  ... Sam saved him on time 😞

I really appreciate that even after so much of loneliness he is trying to live his life worthy by helping others & getting sucess

Alas but his last thread of his patience broken today but who is the second person there

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing ✍️