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beautiful story. 

BM!!! I m yet to read... Will be back :)

ahh what could be a more appropriate song than this
he believed it so easily that she swindled the money
guess his trust on her was weak
but good he got to know the truth in time
man that was so sad seeing them without one another
but thanx to dadi all that was over

It was really a pleasant surprise seeing your name in my inbox...superb OS...it had all the elements love, hatred, betrayal in one place...loved khushi's self esteem in not accepting anything which is not meant has put her on high pedestal in my eyes...being independent after her father's death...working as soon as she completed 10th standard and paying her fees from her savings and not taking advantage of Arnav's friendship shows Khushi's character...I was surprised when Arnav thought her of a gold digger...owing to his own experience about her he shouldn't have done that...but he did not trust her...it was all about Shyam finally...the truth is out...Garima had to face the repercussions of being truthful to the company...for a change dadi is good and approved Arnav and Khushi...the couple are together finally...very appropriate song...thanks for the PM Edited by yoga123 - 10 years ago

indeed a very pleasant surprise. Welcome back. you were surely missed. Loved the OS.

Beautiful OS. Missing your stories POL and Raizada & sons. Thanks.

Wow kalyani that was really good.you are really good at describing the depth of characters.have been missing your pursuit of love and raizada and sons.this reminds me of what i am
missing.

Beautiful OS !

This is a beautiful piece. I loved this strong, calm and composed Khushi. It was such a joy to see her. Great piece! 

awesome...very beautiful