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Oh my god

I was so shocked when Arnav kept saying mean things to Khushi even thought he loves her
I hoped it was a mistake or a plan for something

Dadi had a good plan and I'm so glad that she asked Arnav to be sure about choosing a life partner

I liked how Arnav stopped Khushi from leaving and apologized

Good luck Rasgulla_sp for the exams

Beautiful OS

Loved the way the story was woven and presented to us.
All the suspense , drama , romance , love , mystery , separation was a grt gift !

Miss ur FFs ..
Hope I could read them poora ,,,

Brilliant.

tremendous..that was a remarkable one👏

Wow that was Amazing... Such a heart warming OS

very nice and beautiful Os and what u said is true..

trust is vry important for evry relationship...

if possible.. do share ur other stories also... i wud like to read them...

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Well well

Dis was d first ever work i read of urs

Nd tbh i m soo glad i chckd d link kavita dii prvded oderwise i would have missed a awesm OS

Its was everythng perfect beautiful adorable sweet cute loving .. A perfect Arhi OS

I m hardly hvng word bt

No worries everytym words is nt everythng to describe how u badly lovd somone works

Simple words matters

Nd saying in simple words

Den i cn say


The Perfect OS Lovely cncpt nd yess Superb name


P.S Cn u pm me ur index nd new works wenever u write cn i send u a buddy request to dis ID or some oder ID is dere for pm 😳

Lovd it ❤️
Edited by Barun_Gf - 10 years ago

Beautiful story dear
Complete package...love...pain...betrayel...overwhelming emotions
Just in one shot u give us a beautiful story with awesome chatacterization
Thanq for such a lovely story

PS: missing ur POL n RNS very much...hope u will atleast give us a little summary...its jst a request dear...no complains

Kalyaani, as much as I'm miffed with you & sad for not getting access to the blog, I cannot help but admire your writing ⭐️  for a minute I thought this was a continuation of POL but it wasn't!!