I cannot believe my eyes. An OS by Kalyaani - Sigh!! I missed your writing, KBR. Will be back in some time. Please excuse me if I am delayed.
It felt like I was reading a small spin off of The Pursuit of Love even though the story and the characters are fairly different. The strength of each portrayal was so typically you - clear, defined, and in sync with themselves throughout the plot-line. Your Khushi, as always, is a woman of iron - willing to compromise nothing in the face of her own self. I've always admired your ability to write up a character of such self belief.
It was a beautiful little story of trust and faith and how love truly is incomplete without the two. But I am not sure it was only the lack of the two on Arnav's part. At the end of the day, Khushi had her own reasons for keeping her plan from him - but she did keep something this monumental from the man she loved.
Thankfully, we had a Dadi who was such a refreshing change -a kind old woman who used her life to study what she saw and make the right judgment about people. And so she helped a couple, much younger to find their path towards each other.
Beautiful story, Kalyaani and as always, exceptional writing. I thank Saiyu for taking exams at this time and allowing us a glimpse of K's pen again :) Oh and all the best Saiyu. Hope you do very well. After a wish as wonderful as this, can it be any other way :)Edited by meera30 - 7 years ago