Res!!
Unres!
Finally!!!!
I'm going to go straight to the update and all I can say is...
From the notes all the way to the concept. Simply amazing! I liked every bit of it.
Zoya's pain at seeing Asad in another woman's arms made me sniff and shake my head. It's the sheer beauty of their romance that had me turning into a puddle of goo.
The setting is probably the most important aspect of writing. Having a piece of writing that is taking place in so many places, causes the reader to lose concentration on the writing. Not specifying the setting makes the reader visualise the characters and their actions happening in mid-air. The fact that you specified the setting and stuck to it throughout the entire OS makes it so much easier to read without worrying about the location. Also, considering that it's JFK airport, it's not that hard to visualise either. Specially not the Starbucks at JFK.
Which reminds me, I have a friend who does a summer job at the JFK Starbucks and her excuse is that she only does it for the eye candy. 🤣
Oops, went off topic ^ there. 😃
Now coming to the end, as I was reading it. My curiosity couldn't help but spark as I read the proposal. Were you by any chance at MUC airport two years? Reason being that one of the Captains proposed to his girlfriend the same way Asad did, by calling her to the gate (gate had no significance though) and asking the woman at the counter to make the announcement. Except he asked her to marry him instead of got out with him. So yeah, I was just curious whether or not you were present at MUC when that proposal took place.
But...
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 10 years ago
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