Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 92

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Its not shlok's plan yaar...😊
Its destiny's plan for them...
Ye ishq hai laddu motichoor ka, na ugla jaye, na nigla jaye...
No goons...no interruption...jugle track????? not exactly..something else...road track  will work?
song sequence?????? it will be like QH???? 😉
Lovely shayari... jaan nahi chahiye yhan..pyar chahiye. dono ko...
Thanks a lot dear.your views matter a lot for me...



Oohh thank you dear...wo actually shlok ne aastha se confess karvane k liye itne plan banaye hai ki destiny ka plan bhi muje usi ka lag raha hai...😉 Silly me 😆 I was just teasing you...I m your reader so I know you wrote something different...and that was I love it 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik


Oohh thank you dear...wo actually shlok ne aastha se confess karvane k liye itne plan banaye hai ki destiny ka plan bhi muje usi ka lag raha hai...😉 Silly me 😆 I m teasing you...I m your reader so I know wrote something different...and that was I love it 🤗



Ya yesterday you said for Airport scene, i didn't just becaause that will be some chori ki thing... i wanted something new... so i tried bus romance...
Now i am thinking bout a small jungle track but romance will be different... no cheesy one... some caring..some holding back...Thnaks a lot for loving the update yaar...



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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys...so here is the weekend Teaser... But not for two day...but three days... a snext update will be on Tuesday...

Teaser

Suddenly Astha stopped midway and started smiling... Now what? Shlok asked...

Remember something? This is the same place Shlok, where we had danced last time...Astha smiled...

Really, I didn't notice... he looked around... So will you like to dance with me again? He forwarded his hand towards her bending down...

Where is the music? Astha smiled giving her hand into his...

Clouds are singing for us na? He signaled her when clouds were thundering at distance... And light flashed... see, those made a dance floor for us too by light spots... he smiled...

With the next thunder, he pulled Astha towards him, she twirled around on the road smiling... actually laughing...

When a continuous voice of thunders stroke...

Shlok placed his hands on waist and she put her hands on his shoulders, both started dancing and laughing...

Always keep smiling like this Astha.. mujhe apni Astha hamesha eisi hi chhaiye... Careless, smiling and laughing with me... He caressed her face...

Why do you care so much for me Shlok? Astha looked into his eyes...

(Because I love you stupid... Shlok thought to himself )

because you are my lifeline... I am lifeless without you...


Have a a great weekend ahead...


Edited by jeenia123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank god...this teaser was not much teasing like former ones😆 😆
but it is too romantic...a dace again😉😉
rest in peace for three days 😭 😭
"because i love you stupid" i loved that one
waiting eagerly
Edited by LECHU123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LECHU123

thank god...this teaser was not much teasing like former ones😆 😆

but it is too romantic...a dace again😉😉
rest in peace for three days 😭 😭
"because i love you stupid" i loved that one
waiting eagerly



Ya, this was not that crazy, this one is romantic... ab kuch to romance bhi chahyie na...
Thanks a lot dear...
and this one is 1000th post in this FF...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Ya, this was not that crazy, this one is romantic... ab kuch to romance bhi chahyie na...
Thanks a lot dear...
and this one is 1000th post in this FF...


yippee!🥳🥳congo...congo🥳
iam so happy that this work is bringing you so much appreciations!🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
@ lechu...thanks a lot dear... all because of u people. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Ya I kept you point in mind while writing today's update..if you had noticed. .I gave both astha and shloks views in brackets wherever required...thanks a lot for you suggestion dear...



you are welcome sweetie😊 i am always happy to help you, you know why? because at the end of the day i will be getting an awesome story to read!!😉
Edited by meera.rajeev - 10 years ago