arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 61

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

Omg, what happened to Khushi?

Did anybody abduct her? I'm really scared. No wonder why Arnav felt the tug to see her. His subconscious mind anticipated some danger.

It was a complete update. You described the snippet of everybody's story. I'm loving, how you are depicting Anjali's feelings, her life. So she had a good bonding with her dad. After all she was the only daughter. And dad and daughter always go along well. nani is a very wise woman. Loved, how she advised her not to compare Verma with Shyam.

Arnav's vulnerable state after the post forced marriage is wonderfully written by you. My heart lurched painfully at his wish to have dinner with somebody. he was so lonely!
His quandary between His yearning for Khushi and his hate for her was deranging him. But I loved that he slept beside her, talkng her in his arms. I wish if I could see this scene in the show.



i didn't think that in pink... you did... 👏 👏 for that. 🤗

sohara, lovely to see you.

i am so glad you liked nani and anjali in that situation.

you are right, asr at one level is terribly lonely... especially because he appears so self sufficient, people forget he needs things... also in his heart i sense a man alone... a loving man but he is somehow a solitary creature.

khushi has possibly just entered this space. these are early days, would be great to see how it develops.

you liked his quandary? oh i love it too.. love does find a way through everything doesn't it?

he took her hand and tucked it under his cheek and slept feeling a peace in him... don't you love these two. sigh.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Indrani, sorry i have not been able to keep up with this ff, but will Like to catch up. Could you please give me the link to the whole story so far ?
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful description of Anjali .I always feel for these kinds of women.Ok What did you do to Khushi?Where did she go?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

Where khushi gone...


hi ranogill,

next chapter hope to find out. 😳 good to see you.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome part...thanks for the PM


i am so happy you liked the chapter. thank you. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

me thrilled when you love. counting exclamation marks.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Preety_Nebula

Beautiful description of Anjali .I always feel for these kinds of women.Ok What did you do to Khushi?Where did she go?


me have feelings for anj too, glad you empathise.

um i think the rakshas ate khushi up. burp. teehee.




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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 19

Yay, Dr. Verma is from Mumbai, but of course where else? 😆 Haww, he gave a peck and Mami saw, he he he giggle.gif I like how Anjali and Dr. Verma's story is progressing.
Aww, Payal is expecting and already into mood swings. Nani guessed it right. 😳
Interesting how Khushi brought in the topic of La. Now, Arnav is in thinking mode. He needs to know the difference between his tale and his father's tale. Arnav's father, Arnav, Shyam, all were attracted to other women when they were in a committed relationships. How they deal with it, their intentions and their honesty is what differentiates one from the other.
Chapter 20 here I come, hopefully very very soon. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^^

thanks, for reading, durga...

i tell you all these men were attracted to many women. why can't a woman do the same and still be considered normal ha ha. see you at 20... story is moving and moving...

will asr ever know why he is the way he is? will i? 😆

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