arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Very beautiful update.Love this amazing bonding of siblings,suffered from painful past, who are always there for each other in their own style.

Nani is such a strong lady who took care of her grand children at very critical time of their lives and helped them to live a better life after facing terrible time in their childhood.

ArHi's scene always delight to read but where has Arnav ki Khushi gone?

Waiting at the cliffhanger for the next update.

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Good insight on Anjali.

Now that he has come so far with Khushi in their relationship, she's gone!?

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

indi👏

Nice series of events.

I like the Anjali section, a girl who saw the dominent men around her crushing her childhood and changing her into some one who she can't recognize or come out of it.

Her brother is minor yet is a shield for her and her dependance over her creep became her need but what now? A decision which she has to cultivate by her own...Deep thinking...

Khushi and Garima , two parts of one soul, regardless she gave her birth or not but she took are of her and that is everything for her and Khushi's happiness is Garima's dream.

Arnav's past and present is associated with Khushi and he couldn't deny this fact and that passion in hate or love is the DORI of pearls which is keepin them together...

Khushi's dreams, hopes and desires all are ending at ARNAV , her Rajkumar or Monster who ever she sees in her dreams or in front of her...but she adores both as always

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Omg, what happened to Khushi?

Did anybody abduct her? I'm really scared. No wonder why Arnav felt the tug to see her. His subconscious mind anticipated some danger.

It was a complete update. You described the snippet of everybody's story. I'm loving, how you are depicting Anjali's feelings, her life. So she had a good bonding with her dad. After all she was the only daughter. And dad and daughter always go along well. nani is a very wise woman. Loved, how she advised her not to compare Verma with Shyam.

Arnav's vulnerable state after the post forced marriage is wonderfully written by you. My heart lurched painfully at his wish to have dinner with somebody. he was so lonely!

His quandary between His yearning for Khushi and his hate for her was deranging him. But I loved that he slept beside her, talkng her in his arms. I wish if I could see this scene in the show.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
Anjali is still so strong inspite of all the sufferings...this too shall pass and pave way to her happiness
What's in store for Arnav...when they just found all love and happiness...I hope no harm comes to kushi

mayuri,

thanks for that lovely thought for anjali... yeah everything, no matter how traumatic or beautiful does indeed pass, maybe just the power of love lingers on, even nafrat dies.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: Arshi67
You have described both the siblings feelings so beautifully.
And then with that warm feeling in my heart, I read of Khushi's disappearance 😭
Waiting to see what happens with a sense of dread...

his arshi,

i am sorry to have done that to you... 😳 so glad you you liked the siblings. updating next week. see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: divsarunfan
awesome update di👏👏
very well written👍🏼
waiting 4 next update di😉

thaaanks, divya... happy you liked.. see you soo. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: aarwen
"...and maybe a handful of fireflies.

he felt his heart fill with a crazy longing, i wouldn't have you any other way, my jhalli pompom girl, he thought, don't ever change, don't you dare... and remember, mine, you're mine."

You write something this wonderful and then scare us with a missing Khushi.. Not fair Indi di 😛 .. Update soon..

hi aarwen,

sorry, but kya karoon main aisa hi hoon... 😆 😆 😆

okay boss, updating next week.

thanks so much for reading and enjoying the writing.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Nice update. Anjali's life was not an easy one. She has suffered at the hands of the men she loved and respected starting with her own father. Its difficult for her to trust another man again. Loved how Nani made her understand that she should not compare the doctor with Shyam. The flashback was fantastic. Arnav's pain, his longing everything came out beautifully. He loved the person he so wanted to hate and still was unable to. Loved Arnav and Khushi's little moment. But I hope Khushi is alright. Thanks for the PM :)

hi rizarshi,

good to see you. thank you so much for liking the different things delved into in this chapter... anjali's life is really hard... given that i think she manages it pretty well. though sometimes she used to get on my nerves with her extra sweetness, i developed a fondness and admiration for her. i would like to see how she copes with betrayal this time...

about khushi... updating next week, see you then. 😳