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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sskaug25

It was a wonderful and emotional update. Feel sad for anjali. what all she had to suffer. Hope she will forget her past and will be able to lead a happy life. You have written the feelings of Anjali very well. Loved how Nani gave her strength. Loved how Arnav picked up all the foods which makes his wife happy. Hope nothing bad happens to khushi. Is khushi preparing for a surprise to her Arnavji or khushi is kidnapped. Hope you will not separate them. Waiting eagerly for next update. Thanks for the pm. IT was a superb update.


sskaug,

thank you so much... loved your comment, appreciate it a lot. i will update next week, khsuhi is where, we must know... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hajr

Thanks for the pm .great update love it.


hey hajr,

i am glad t o see you and so happy you enjoyed the chapter. see you next week.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Fantastic update

Anjali, i cried for her. Having a limp always make her life a little hard but she face them all with courage and determination. I like her beautiful relation wit her father. No matter how bad husband he was but he dearly love his children. Their father character is still a mystery and i always get lost thinking about him. Arnav hated him because he cheated his mother and that ultimately made us hate him but if he was a beast then he would also be a prince too. I like him pampering Anjali and fulfilling her wishes like a normal father do.
Naniji, i haven't seen a strong matriarch like her. She is smart, confident and fabulous. Truly what would have happen if she didn't took young Arnav and Anjali in her shelter. I think her secret is love. I always pictured her past like that of khushi's present in every way. She must had a very strong relation with her family,husband and would be very close to all. She has every solution of any problem just like khushi. She never back down not even in front of her arrogant grandson, she never demanded anything excessive from Arnav like other used to. But she always raised voice when she felt any danger to her family dignity and her values. She always made sure that history don't repeat itself. She survived all the seasons of life. I adore her.
I love reading a bit about misunderstanding track. Arnav married her forcefully because how much he tried to hate her for ruining his sister life, he couldn't let her go away from him. I want to know more about their relation and marriage more before his comatose. The key to solve his all problems especially trust issues lie in his past. I feel very sad for Arnav the way he hold khushi's hand but he could spoke out his feelings and complains.
Nafrat Paas Anney Na de, Muhabbat Dorh Janney Na Dey...
Love Arnav enjoying the taste of happy normal life with khushi on their honeymoon. His khushi is unique. She found joy in little things unlike other girls who are happy in luxuries only.
He bought strawberries and Gool Gappay for her, yummy.
Still the fear of losing Khushi harbors in him strongly. I guess this feeling will never fade away from him, it might get less but won't be wipe out.
I hope khushi is fine.
They are leaving for Lucknow, at last.
Update soon



javeria,

what a wonderful comment, first, thanks for that.

she survived all the seasons of life.

a splendid thought you catch there in that line for nani ji.

all the seasons... good bad stormy cold hot... we have to do them all... sometimes when nothing in us is left to do it even. asr too will do every season as will kkgsr.

you liked all the romance and emotional details? me thrilled. writing is a fairly scary business for me... so based on an instinct... if the instinct fails, all kaput.

about their father... he always intrigued me. they never told us enough about him... his gussa and a crazy attachment to him is in asr... we needed to know more... i try to find my way into that... the man i see is pitiable, weak... but with things that his kids may have loved too. i hope i can delineate him well and with real feeling.

thanks, javeria, see you soon on the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

I loved it today...seeing things through Anjali's eyes...knowing a more about the past...understanding her a bit more...thanks for this Di...
and the flashback from Arnav's POV...u know Di, such flashbacks always give me goosebumps...feels like I can feel their feelings...its beautifully written...
loved ArShi moment so much...ASR and his jhalli pompom girl...i love them dammit...

but now where's is Khushi...what happened...jaldi next update de do...I wanna know more...


uff to feel their feelings, nishu_shorna...

i am so thrilled you loved this chapter.

me too dammit love them.

and when i get it right and an asr kkg lover likes it, can't tell ya what a good feeling that is. hope all well. see you soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: janu6669

I loved this update especially the agony and despair in the mind of Anjali..

You have aptly put the turmoil she had to endure because of her father before and later on because of her husband.
The only saving grace for her is her nani and of course Arnav!

The longing for khushi And her presence around him is so vital for his own presence.

Where did khushi go?an act of Shyam ?



thanks, janu,

when i wrote that long anjali section i didn't know if it would get too dry or not.. but i am glad i did because many of you have enjoyed that.

lots of feelings in her... a complexity...

vital... the perfect word for khushi's meaning in asr's life.

thanks so much for reading and your comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...

Very beautiful update.Love this amazing bonding of siblings,suffered from painful past, who are always there for each other in their own style.

Nani is such a strong lady who took care of her grand children at very critical time of their lives and helped them to live a better life after facing terrible time in their childhood.
ArHi's scene always delight to read but where has Arnav ki Khushi gone?
Waiting at the cliffhanger for the next update.


lizzie,

happy you like the chapter... the siblings keep pulling me in... so much of both their personalities come through in their interaction...

nani is something else, and maybe because i loved mine it comes through here too 😆.

thannks so much for reading and see ya next week. cliffhanger?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

famiya,

thank you very much. glad you are enjoying... don't recall saying hi to you before, good to see you.
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Posted: 11 years ago

mishtee,

😳 thanks so much.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Good insight on Anjali.

Now that he has come so far with Khushi in their relationship, she's gone!?


you liked the anjali bit? i was worried it might seem too much... but i wanted to get into her head a bit.

khsuhi is missing... asr is frantic... updating next week. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

indi👏

Nice series of events.

I like the Anjali section, a girl who saw the dominent men around her crushing her childhood and changing her into some one who she can't recognize or come out of it.
Her brother is minor yet is a shield for her and her dependance over her creep became her need but what now? A decision which she has to cultivate by her own...Deep thinking...

Khushi and Garima , two parts of one soul, regardless she gave her birth or not but she took are of her and that is everything for her and Khushi's happiness is Garima's dream.

Arnav's past and present is associated with Khushi and he couldn't deny this fact and that passion in hate or love is the DORI of pearls which is keepin them together...

Khushi's dreams, hopes and desires all are ending at ARNAV , her Rajkumar or Monster who ever she sees in her dreams or in front of her...but she adores both as always


beautiful comment, faiqa.

you always make me think... and i love that.

glad you liked the anjali portion... i want to know her a bit, see who she really is and i have the greatest empathy here... not easy to grow up afflicted anywhere, but in her sort of background, suffocating and scary and insecure making... let's see what i find i her.

like what you say of garima and khushi... somehow connected, bas.

the story we sensed had a lot of depth in it... trying to see if i can find t.

thanks so much for this one.




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