Virika FF:Married @ 18 #2 Epilogue Pg.97 Completed - Page 39

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Dude you mistook me. I NEVER read this one late. I edit my comment late though! But I think I was relatively on time this time round. *Pats her back* Before I forget, is there any chance of you living in UAE? 🤔 Just curious. K. And yes you were late I updating again. Don't take advantage of the fact that I'm busy enough to NOT bug you, or else you know I can very well PM you morning, noon and night! 😆

Well, well, well coming to the update you kind of made up for the delay with the length of the update and I know it takes hours to put it all in words. But the update was great! I expected a lengthier and may be awkward aftermath of the night especially when they first confronted each other, but you very well skipped that... hopefully for the good. 😳 But the Rohan and Emma's bit was something good. I must add I enjoyed reading that one, which of course is out of the blue because I tend to skip such parts in all stories. Jerina's slap was something unexpected and hilarious and so was Jeevika's bragging of her necklace. Thumbs up!! Viren's response was justified and well natural. I for one would have been heartbroken as well. So yes his leaving was something I could relate to. As for the photo shoot part that acted as a tension breaker after a lot of drama and stress that was a welcomed break. I hope you continue with the same light scenes at least for a few more scenes. I'm gad to see Viren's inner conflict regarding his chances of falling in love again. The poor guy deserves a chance. I hope that is soon though because for me the high point of their relationship was him trusting her to know the heart wrenching truth behind Kripa's death. So when he can trust her with that I think its time his character loosen ups a little. And how can I forget the adorable last bit? 😃

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Awesome update... 1stly viren's dad and jeevs convo just sooo sweet... I guess jeevs next mission is this... Man it was jeevs plan that ro gonna reation with emma...i thought may be something happen to rohan...that's way he doing all this..but jai ho jeevika ji ki...hahahahaha jerina slaps emma...she is gonna be my fav parsonality in this ff... I thought viren gonna tell thanks to jeevs...but the scene in the car just awesome...hahaha the way jeevs sing...i mean the way jeevs irritates viren just out of the wrd... And the last part just sooo swt...they way viren say sorry her..just love it...and aslo the last cmnt just awesome... Update soon..

lazy girl thanks for the update ..finally virens misunderstanding got cleared thanks to jeevs waiting for the next part update soon,and photoshoot was awesome..

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Omg!! Yayyy!! You Updated! What a timing i just finish commenting and what

amazing yaar...seriously amazing...