OMG..that was such a beautiful surprise, Geeta!!!
I remember telling you that you should write... πMore later..I had always known that you would make a very good writer because of the kind of insightful, wonderfully expressed comments you write on stories. And I was not wrong :)) I loved the title of your story. 'Love Again'...so many lovely possibilities. The banner is so whimsically beautiful and I agree with Sami, what is missing from it is your nameπ I loved the first chapter. It was all about Arnav, his thoughts, his emotions, his conflicts, his mental barriers and you wrote it all wonderfully and in a way that was so easy to read too. Your prose has a very nice flow to it and it's hard to believe that it's your first attempt at writing a story. It was absolutely brilliant :)You chose my two favorite scenes from the show...the Diwali almost kiss and the Mandir separation one and I really liked the way you presented them with your own little changes, which actually I liked a lot. Especially the little push, Khushi gave to him...!!I can't wait to see what happens next and I'm sure it's going to a very enjoyable ride.Happy writing,dear π€
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