Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow you managed to encompass so many classic IPK moments in one update - bangle gifting, dori tying, almost kiss, Arnav brushing away the dust from her eyes... aaah! I enjoyed this update so very much!

Just like he did recognize her from the fashion show, I am so pretty sure he is aware that she is the one designing the dress. If not then he isn't as smart as I thought he is, which is impossible. Ergo he know 😛

Lavanya and NK is useless, I do hope Arnav knows that. 😡

After reading this update, heres all that I look forward to in future -

- Khushi finding out about his troubled and rough past

- Arnav finding out the context behind NK's text.

You, Kavi, are the one who casts a sensuous spell on us over and over again.. oh when he feeds her the jalebi, when he ties the dori, when he tucks in her dupatta... hyperventilation galore! Aise mujhe acidosis ho jayega Kavi! Its like I get sucked into this vortex of Arnavliciousness and I am drowning in it, and quite happily at that. Its a high.. thats how well and vividly you write!

And that last scene was so beautiful, such a lovely way of telling us what a gem of a man Arnav is. Observant, sensitive. 😳

Lovely update, as usual 😊

PS - Also, I am so glad Khushi has had a happy childhood in this story.. Buaji does truly love her!

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res finally on pg 1

~~~ Sorry for the late unres.. ~~~
There was Dhak-Dhak and lots of Rabba-Vey moment here.
I loved how Khushi acted like his girlfriend in front of policeman and then the next time made me wish that they get lots of next time together.😊
You describe the beauty of places so aptly, I'm so much in love with it. The auto ride and then the bikanerwala was all acidic. Arnav rubbing her eyes, removing the dust traces brought back memories from the show. 😛
I know I said this before too & I repeat it again here that Arnav knows that she is the one designing and not Lavanya, he has to. He is a smart man! He just gets unreasonably jealous from NK 😉
Btw NK & Lavanya roaming around, having fun when they know there is so much to do - that's very irresponsible.
The come close and they fight, they go away from each other and then they come close again!!!
Why he needs to insult her just because he doesn't like her talking to someone else? But I liked that she gave him back.
The dori sequence, the almost kiss - aahh!! so wonderful!!
He gave her bangles - wow!! And here unlike the show he left the note. Btw did she break the young boy's heart only or his too by walking away? 😉 Now when he behaves so tenderly its tough to fight or be angry with him. Really!!
You're going to kill me one day but then I won't complain, would I for having such a sweet tortured death !! 😛😳

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

You create magic with your words.

It was lovely to see how you incorporated references from the show in this chapter.

They need to clear the NK misunderstanding. It was wrong of him to read her text message.

NK and Lavanya are taking their work too easy but in spite of all this they have provided Arnav and Khushi ample chances of being together.

I love how he notices everything about her.

They both are so caring and attentive towards each other.

But when the time comes, they don't shy away from burning each other with their words.

Their mutual attraction is too much.

This comes to mind when i read the jalebi and dori scenes.

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

Delightful update...

I was planning to go to bikanerwala for dinner today.. Will be fun..

Suraj my Suraj is here...😆...

But what I don't understand how is Arnav not getting that Khushi is the one designing the costumes..

And in a fashion house a lot accessories are brought together.. So that they can make more and more..

Why is the shaatir DiMag keeping quiet that Khushi has selected the apparel... And she is the one donning the costume.. Lavanya is not there in picture..

If Arnav cross checks with la... Giving a different color and spec of the costume she will be caught..

Miss kiss phir se... Now security guard caught them..😆

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

first time getting page 1 in your stories..so currently n ninth cloud.
and the update was also great.
and ofcourse congrats on new thread👏

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 12 years ago

such a beautiful update, arnav is attracted to khushi but fails to realize it, i think...

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Wonderful update...will come back with more!

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome...especially last part..ufff...😳😆

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

What I love the most in your stories is the sensuality and the sizzling chemistry between the leads.

I loved the scene in the restaurant where he fed her jalebi and the one in the office.

I wonder what will happen once Arnav comes to know the truth about the real designer of the costume. Lavanya will be as good as dead.

Loved the Arshi filled update.

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

That was really nice update
Really enjoyed reading it , so nice of arnav to get bangles for her
And the his note was so sweet, true she cannot stay mad at him
Pls continue soon
Thanx