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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting conversations going on above. Can't decide what ASR would have done among all three options - stop marriage, some other trick and live-in. In a way this unpredictability makes him more exciting. One thing is for certain, writers could have got great ideas from you all!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 191
 
Anokhi Shaadi
 
 
 
Ek dooje ke hain ye dono,
Pehle se jatlaayi thi
Paani se jab vrat toda tha,
Sar par jab chunari giraayi thi
 
Shubh Mahurat, thi shubh ghadi
Jab Ma ke mandir mein huyi thi sagaai
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
Saari rasmein thi nibhaayi
 
Ab aa chuki wo ghadi
Jab judegi inki kadi
Lekar jazbaaton ki baraat
Ek anokhi shaadi ki raat
 
Hawa ne shankh bajaayi
Ghantiyon ne taal milaayi
Mata aur Agni ke samaksh mein
Avaanchit byaah rachayi
 
Na rasmon ka koi gawah tha
Na gawah hai koi iss vivaah ka
Par sakshi hain mata pita
Jo hissa hain taaron ke pravah ka
 
Chand mahinon ka nahin bandhan
Hamesha ke liye hai ye sangam
Sampoorna hai, nahin ye aadhi
Arnav Khushi ki anokhi shaadi
 
Translation:
 
They belong to one another
It was hinted before
When the fast was broken with water
When the dupatta was dropped on the head
 
An auspicious time, it was an auspicious moment
When the engagement took place in Ma's temple 
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
All rituals were followed
 
Now has arrived that moment  
When their link will be made  
With a procession of emotions  
A unique wedding night  
 
The wind blew the conch  
The bells matched the beat  
In the presence of the Mother and Fire God  
Carried out an unwanted marriage  
 
There was no witness for the rituals
No witness for this marriage  
But present are the parents  
Who are part of the flow of stars
 
Not a bond for a few months  
This union is for eternity  
It is complete, not partly  
The unique wedding of Arnav and Khushi
 
 


Wonderful Durga.
Really what an anokhi shadi, nobody ever witnessed before.
I loved how you connected all their previous significant encounters what led them to the holy matrimony. 
this stanza is my most favorite 

Na rasmon ka koi gawah tha
Na gawah hai koi iss vivaah ka
Par sakshi hain mata pita
Jo hissa hain taaron ke pravah ka
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

Wonderful Durga.

Really what an anokhi shadi, nobody ever witnessed before.
I loved how you connected all their previous significant encounters what led them to the holy matrimony. 
this stanza is my most favorite 

Na rasmon ka koi gawah tha
Na gawah hai koi iss vivaah ka
Par sakshi hain mata pita
Jo hissa hain taaron ke pravah ka

 
 
Thanks Sohara. All those rasams that they followed unknowingly had to come to this. So, anokhi it was. Happy you loved those lines. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Horizon

 
 Indi, interesting you thought he would have truly broke Akash's marriage had Khushi didn't budge.. I thought similarly to Durga.. he would have found something else to tie her to him but not annul his brother's wedding.. that would have been the office track asr... phenk do asr.. pre Guest house asr...only and only dimaag dictated asr...now he may still be that no nonsense seal the deal at any cost business man but post Payash, his heart certainly started coming in between his head and his decisions.. in fact if he is that initial asr, he wouldn't even have married her...but asked her to Live in.. an ultimate insult to Khushi as he knew.. (I actually lost a bet in this regard as I thought he would ask her for a Live in:))

 
 
Aww Indu, you lost a bet! But I don't think insulting Khushi was the main point here. Idea was to make Khushi unavailable to Shyam. From the terrace scene that he witnessed he came to the conclusion that, Khushi and Shyam were having a lover's spat. Khushi wasn't ready to be a mistress. She wanted Shyam to leave Anjali and marry her instead. This act of hers matched her earlier statements that she considered it an insult to the woman when a man wants to have a relationship with her without marriage (on the road fight, Janmashtami night). Also, she holds the marriage institution in high esteem (character dheela scene). So, ASR believed that whoever Khushi marries, she will respect that relationship and would not cross the line. And the little thing that beat inside him suggested that he marry her himself. So, that became the plan. Get married to her, tie her to himself, so Shyam will have no other option but to go back to Anjali. And of course, keep Khushi close by, to keep a watch on her (as his brain suggests, but in turn soothing his heart too.) What a tricky situation, the poor guy finds himself in!
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Durga/Anokhi shaadi
Such a beautiful poem. You have eloquently expressed Arshi's entire divine journey. Hard to pick, but my favorite lines
Na rasmo ka koi gawah tha
Naa gawah hai koi is vivah ka
Shampoorna hai nahi ye aadhi
Arnav Khushi ki Anokhi shaadi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: viv04

@Durga/Anokhi shaadi
Such a beautiful poem. You have eloquently expressed Arshi's entire divine journey. Hard to pick, but my favorite lines
Na rasmo ka koi gawah tha
Naa gawah hai koi is vivah ka
Shampoorna hai nahi ye aadhi
Arnav Khushi ki Anokhi shaadi

 
 
Thanks Viv. A divine journey, it was. Thanks for pointing out your favourite lines. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely poem di๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
beautifully wriiten๐Ÿ‘
anokhi shadiโค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Durga, yes as i said in some of my earlier commments that was my whole take too that he somehow wanted to tie her to himself and make her unavailable to shyam.
The mention of the live in thing here was to substantiate that he was not the initial asr since indi thought that way. The bet was those few days when he was shown pained a lot and we didn't know what he would do.. There was a chance of him going back to the initial avatar and insult her by asking for a live in, like during the remarriage the supense whether he would marry her or leave her at the altar was maintained until that day before they got married. In both instances he didn't turn back to the ultimate monster.. Ofcourse that may have made him unredeemable. Anx btw, if he did ask her for live in i dont think khushi would have agreed. He used a bait that she would at least consider ๐Ÿ˜ƒEdited by Horizon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

 
Episode 191
 
Anokhi Shaadi
 
 
 
Ek dooje ke hain ye dono,
Pehle se jatlaayi thi
Paani se jab vrat toda tha,
Sar par jab chunari giraayi thi
 
Shubh Mahurat, thi shubh ghadi
Jab Ma ke mandir mein huyi thi sagaai
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
Saari rasmein thi nibhaayi
 
Ab aa chuki wo ghadi
Jab judegi inki kadi
Lekar jazbaaton ki baraat
Ek anokhi shaadi ki raat
 
Hawa ne shankh bajaayi
Ghantiyon ne taal milaayi
Mata aur Agni ke samaksh mein
Avaanchit byaah rachayi
 
Na rasmon ka koi gawah tha
Na gawah hai koi iss vivaah ka
Par sakshi hain mata pita
Jo hissa hain taaron ke pravah ka
 
Chand mahinon ka nahin bandhan
Hamesha ke liye hai ye sangam
Sampoorna hai, nahin ye aadhi
Arnav Khushi ki anokhi shaadi
 
Translation:
 
They belong to one another
It was hinted before
When the fast was broken with water
When the dupatta was dropped on the head
 
An auspicious time, it was an auspicious moment
When the engagement took place in Ma's temple 
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
All rituals were followed
 
Now has arrived that moment  
When their link will be made  
With a procession of emotions  
A unique wedding night  
 
The wind blew the conch  
The bells matched the beat  
In the presence of the Mother and Fire God  
Carried out an unwanted marriage  
 
There was no witness for the rituals
No witness for this marriage  
But present are the parents  
Who are part of the flow of stars
 
Not a bond for a few months  
This union is for eternity  
It is complete, not partly  
The unique wedding of Arnav and Khushi
 
 


Such a heart touching moment and your words are adding a fuel into fire.๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 189
 
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
 
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
 
Payal Akash Marriage 
 
 
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
 
The wedding rituals begin with cheers and gaiety
Teasing the shy couple with talks quite naughty
Surrounded by loved ones and well wishers
While some eyes well up with happy tears
 
A long cherished dream is now being realised
Buaji, Amma, Babuji bless their cherished pride
Overwhelming are these moments for the bride's family
Payaliya, the loving daughter is married finally
 
A brother is happy, while a sister is lost
The families rejoice except Mami who's crossed
Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot
And promise to help each other by removing life's knots 
 
 


In their intense Deal we almost have forgotten Do dil mil rahain gain yahan bhi.
Look at the peace at father's afce๐Ÿ˜Š