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Episode 184 - 185Khote Khote reh gaya
Ek gehra dar sach hote hote reh gayaEk hi jhatke mein bhavanaon mein beh gayaMa bankar jo mere saamne rehti thiAaj uss Di ko khote khote reh gayaNa manaya koyi parv, manaya sirf ek hi tyohaarBhai behen ke din par diya raksha vachan ka uphaarKalaai mein bandha wo dhaga khulte khulte reh gayaDiya hua mera vachan, aaj toot te toot te reh gayaNa maani koyi baat, na suni koyi pukar,Hamesha karta raha, badtameezi se vyavhaar,Aaj mere badsalooki ka aayina mujhe dikh gaya,Mere ziddi baaton ka sazaa milte milte reh gayaToota saara guroor, chooti saari himmat,Zakhmi Di ko dekh, bachche jaisi huyi haalat,Chote bhai ke dabey huye aansuon ka baandh toot gayaEk baar phir se, apni Ma ko khote khote reh gayaTranslation:A deep fear almost became trueIn one stroke got swept away by emotionsThe one who would remain in forth as a motherToday I almost lost that DiNever celebrated any occasion, celebrated only one festivalOn the brother-sister day, gave the promise to protect as a giftThe thread tied on the wrist almost got loosenedThe promise that I had given, almost got brokenDidn't listen to any word, didn't heed to any call,Always behaved very rudely,Today I saw the reflection of my misbehaviour,I almost got punished for my stubborn attitudeAll arrogance broke, lost all courage,Watching an injured Di, like a kid became my state ,The little brother's dam of restrained tears brokeOnce again, I almost lost my mother
Wonderful Durga.
You depicted Arnav's deep love for his di so beautifully!
He has become so distraught, so helpless like a little child on that day.
And you captured his feelings perfectly with your poetic lines.
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