11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131 - Page 73

Originally posted by: kin410

Hi! Naina...

Wow!!!!!!!!! Phewww...

One of the most awaiting chapter.

You know, you have really a good writer in you.

Covering every character and showing their emotional turmoil, i really could say, that this is one of the best creation.

Bravo...

I love this FF and enjoying it since last one year. Keep doing good Naina...

Love your writing/...

thank you very much for the kind words. I am delighted that you are enjoying my story - never dreamed that one year later i'd still be writing it.

don't be a stranger now ok.

naina

Originally posted by: sukriti11196

OMG!!!!

what was that...

sorry i must mention fist...i m commenting here first time...

and have just joined IF and also came across your FF...

now about the update...it was awesome..if anything else..

how on the earth PAYAL has killed her husband???

and aakash...i like this aakash dark and demanding...

way to go...

waiting for more...

first - a warm warm welcome to masterclass 😃

thank you for posting your thoughts and I look forward to hearing from you along the way.

naina

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Oh my reading about Akash like this has impressed me well done you

He truly knows how to get what he wants

& WOAH what a revelation 😲

Loved the update

ahhh... in that case mission accomplished.

this Akash (along with the my other men, ASR and AB) are designed to impress, intrigue and induce heavy duty female fantasies...😉

thank you for commenting hun!

naina

Originally posted by: Caskett

I did not see that coming!!😲
Payal had a dark edge to her character when all while I thought that she was just notorious and a tease. But she has a very different past. Poor Akash, he was shocked to know that she was married. He was rooting for him to land up in that role. But then, what comes as a even bigger shock is that she killed her own husband?! I mean, What the hell?! How does anyone respond to that? I hope things will get cleared in the next update.
Also our lovebirds have finished their honeymoon. Looking forward to see what happens in their life next. I wonder if Khushi knows about Payal or not.
Update soon😊

ooohhh so many questions... so many possibilities... love your reaction darling!!

yes, our poor Akash didnt quite see that coming. So lets see what his reaction will be... pretty or not pretty.

see you soon and as always thank you for commenting.

naina

Wooow awesome dear interesting I love arshi ... n I miss them a lot int his chap bt wooow payals past omg wat really did happend???

Did something happen btw her n husband like an accident or something n she is blaming herself???? Cnt wait to knw more now plz do uodate on payash also now

Wow!!!! Amazing story... Just finished reading the whole thing in one go.

Whoa...That's one hell of a roller coaster ride update. Loved it sooo much. Payal suffered a lot in the past it seems. Very eager to know about her. Only Akash can help her get out of her state.

read the two chps i had skipped!
my god the honeymoon was some fairytale!
but i guess out of the two payashes was best!
the authority the fear DAMN it kept me on the edge!!
i read some comments so i knew payal has killed her husband but i wasnt prepared for such an amazing piece of writing!
loved it nainaa!!!

finished catching up with all the chapters from the last few months, loves each and everyone of them! I love how you have developed all the characters, and am looking forward to reading more! :)